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Reviews for Prize of Victory

By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - bleachfan7 on June 20, 2011
posting early would be great.

orihime's powers can undo the damage done to szayzel lickety split (right phrase?). am hoping we get to see her do something with her powers (esp if we get to see her boosted manga powers or a power boost imagined for fic).

When will we learn why karen & yuzu are wanted & by who? doesn't this mean they'll want ajuga too? she's still defenseless, so am guessing when/if they come for her big poppa is going to do some very bloody things... will we learn how bugs got so big? & how come beetles can shoot acid?
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From JOler on June 20, 2011
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one ... Whine and beg with seriously chibi puppy eyes ...

Hmm aside from containing his riatsu leak I'd guess that Karin claimed Szayel and projected the feel of his riatsu elsewhere. She may have also briefly reached out the short distance between herself and Ichigo and temporarily claimed him (remotely) just long enough to send him chasing the fake riatsu image she'd created.

Hope Szayel is able to be saved and restored ... Well ... Maybe with a little help from Orahime he can have all his knowledge and memories restored but be given a slightly younger body ... Hmmm say 18, 19, or early 20s. I'm sure he'd find pleasant ways to burn off the extra ...stamina ...

I'd so love to see Tesra escort Rangeku to one of the beach parties (with Nnoitra joining them once his debriefing is finished) ... With the understanding that a beef BBQ will be part of the picnic. It would be great to see both Tesra's and Nnoitra's reaction to Rangeku showing off her bikini clad form in public ... Then jumping off the cliff in a beautiful arching swandive. Especially if Nnoitra has just taken a healthy bite of well seasoned BBQ'd beef. (wonder if he'd be gasping for breath or if someone will have to implement the Heimlich maneuver, or if someone will have to seriously wash BBQ from their clothes). Lol ... Could see him totally beside himself at the thought of her never coming back and having witnessed her 'suicide' ... She might get a glimpse at just how deeply he feels for her (but keeps hidden ~ viewing himself as the 'strong silent type'). Kind of wonder if that would add to their relationship in some way or open anyone's eyes to less superficial and surface views of Nnoitra.

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From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on June 20, 2011
Whaddya mean if we "all really want 'em"?!? Of course we want 'em! *melodramatically shakes you* If the next chapter 'flows out' and have some explanation to the going-ons in this chapter, then that would certainly help my poor confuzzled brain~~
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From ANON - nightqueen on June 19, 2011
Oh Yes I want them!!! I love this story! I love the pairings and I think you've done an amazing job weaving a tale of incredible depth and emotion!!! I really can't wait for more!!!!
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From jreel08 on June 17, 2011
I love this story. I find myself re reading it at least once a week.

Anyway you could do a one shot of the night Hana was conceived. Maybe as a flashback from Nanao or something. I would love to read it. I love the pairing of the two of them.
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From ANON - Codry on June 16, 2011
Any villain x karin, just because i like paring her with bad guys. You know what they say "if you wanna be a good girl get yourself a bad guy" so grimmjow, aizen, noittra/karin
If i'm in a good mood karin/renji/byakuya ... A threesome maybe
Ichigo/rukia & orihime/mr ul....

Renji/Tatsuki because they have matching personalities

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From JOler on June 15, 2011
Love the break in the action to let everyone get a little rest and regroup time of a sort.

Favorite pairing? Too many to say really ...

Yaoi pairings are probably pretty standard ... Grimm/Ichi, Grimm/Ulqui, Ulqui/Ichi, Gin/Aisen ... Odd yaoi that could be interesting ... Urahara/Byakuya, Umichika/Szayel, Umichika/Nnoitra, Urahara/Mayuri, Szayel/Mayuri ... (some could be before Urahara was dismissed from Soul Society and was still Mayuri's captain)

Not much for yuri so no real faces to note.

Hmmm Het ... Seeing Orahime cause internal earthquakes that shatter the massive tower housing Byakuya's heart is always nice but pretty much impossible to find; have become a Karin/grimmjow fan; Ulquiora/Orahime is far more common and almost as good as Byakuya/Orahime; Nel/grimmjow is almost as good as Karin/grimmjow; would like to see Szayel, Starrk, Nnoitra, Urahara, Umichika, and Tesra in het pairings but not with any specific partner ... Possible options that come to mind are Tatski, Yuzu, and/or Rangeku hmmm or even Yorouichi (ok so the girls can grab a couple of the guys or they can all do the mix and match thing).

Not a huge fan of Ichigo pairings (too many of them), Chad, Uryu, or Harribel pairings.

Fairly indifferent to Aisen, Gin, Renji, Rukia, Ikaku or Hitsuguya pairings.

I know some of the pairings are odd to say the least. I must add that it would be a refreshing change to see Rangeku portrayed as being a flirt and tease but all the rumored experience being just that ... Greatly exaggerated rumors and speculations ... Her time with Gin was platonic but she was still totally hooked and thought marriage was in the offong when he broke it off to go with his real crush (Aisen).
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From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on June 13, 2011
Awww, I like Tesra in yer fic XD I can't wait to see Grimmjow return and spend more time with the family *squirms* I'm kinda missing the GrimmKarin moments (or you could say I want moar).

As for your question about favourite pairings... well I'm sure you could guess mine from my gallery *nervous chuckle* GrimmIchi's my fav yaoi pairing while IchiRuki is my fav het pairing, other than that I generally like any Grimmjow x Anyone and Ichigo x Anyone (of course, depending on who they're paired up with as there are some characters I can't see them with).
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From ANON - Onba on June 13, 2011
My favorite bleach paring is Ulquihime, mostly because I love the darkness! I also have an affinity for bad boys.
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From Scorpinac on June 13, 2011
Nice and quiet is good sometime. By the way, the picture you mentioned at the beginning of chapter 1, "Victory", do you remember who on deviantart posted it? I'd like to take a look at it for myself.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on June 13, 2011
aawww, so my hope karin could help orchestrate aizen's overthrow is a pipe dream... darn. rangiku was a natural w/the kids. planning on knocking her up? (wondered if it was supposed to be a hint for that)

fave pairing is ichihime w/renruki/ulquihime/grimnel tied for 2nd fave in general, but in this fic fave is ulquihime.
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From jensofia on June 11, 2011
I wonder if Karin could practice the claiming technique on Grimjow (she would probally be more comfortable using it on him). Grimjow hates Aizen so much that I bet he would gladly volunteer even if it didn't make Arrancars horny. Plus it would put that spice back into their relationship.
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From JOler on June 06, 2011
Lol excellent chapter. Love Karen's ability but she does need an equal vulnerability so she doesn't become too much of a super human woman. It would be kind of nice for her to be able to claim from a distance but it would be better if she couldn't most likely; however now that Ajuga has 'seen' it (presuming it hasn't been done with her present or awake) it would be hillarious if SHE learned to claim from a distance and just focus on what she wanted instead of vocalizing it ... Could you see how much fun she could have with Szayel ... And how much he'd have to grin and bear it to get his samples once she figured out her abilities (and I doubt she'd limit herself if she thought she could get away with it). Of course if Karin COULD claim from a distance then the next claims meeting could turn very interesting (claim that sleazy Yammy and order him to have throat operation reversed ... Then do as Byakuya orders ... Lol .. Same with Baragan and Soi Fon for the voice thing). Next time she could work on Noitra treating Rangeku like less of a 'bound woman'.

In answer to the question ... I'd honestly not given it any real thought (but definitely keep it a secret from Aizen)

Mofaf1
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From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on June 06, 2011
OMG, poor Tesra, but seriously what a riot it was *ROTFLMAO* XD

*slaps forehead*...Didn't see that coming...
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on June 06, 2011
fun chap! am dying to see artwork of the baby! please, someone w/skills, do a jag family portrait! love the idea that down the line, they can orchestrate a rebellion against aizen by having karin claim anyone still loyal to him (& if baby has same power & she's maturing at a fast rate, it can be the both of them). too funny tesla got a boner from the experiment. hope we get back to ulquihime soon. started reading this for that pairing. still hopeful there will be a bat-baby hybrid down the road.
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