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By : NovaAlexandria

From JOler on July 29, 2011
Hmmm ... Feel so sorry for Szayel (though you know he adores the kids ... Guess he will just have to get Nemu to make a child proof area for the kids to play where he can see and talk to them at all times ... And still be able to step away for a few if needed ... Perhaps with monitor screens so he can safely see what he needs to without giving the kids access ... He's gonna need an area like that anyway if his 'fertility experiment' with Nemu is a success).

Wasn't sure what to expect in the way of punishment ... wasn't sure how old he appeared at this time until just before the spanking (he seems a bit old for that but ... you never know). I rarely laugh at anything truthfully, though you did manage to get a grin to cross my face. Actually I would probably have told him about the weekly babysitting first ... and told him I'd need more time to decide on the specifics of the rest of his punishment ~ and for him not to worry because I definitely wouldn't forget (then give him an evil contemplative grin) ... with any luck he'd be so terrified about what I was considering behind that grin that he'd squeak in falseto any time he was in my presence and develop a very embarrassing bladder (and possibly bowel) disorder as well. Let him explain why he had such a serious accident when he saw me at the next Claim meeting (turns around while chatting with one or two other Espada or even briefly with Aisen ... then having to bolt for the door and do a quick cleanup and change) ... lol (evil grin). He'd probably torture himself so much with his own imagination that all I'd have to do would be give him a contemplative once over while he was looking in my direction (looking like I was considering my 'punishment' options for his transgressions). Of course a quietly whispered "just wait for it ... I like to hear you whimper" might be added on occasion just for good measure.

Now if only she (or someone else) could torture Yammey like that until he had a complete nervous breakdown ...

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From ANON - bleachfan7 on July 28, 2011
very enjoyable couple of chaps. saw artwork too. dag, aizen is such a monster just idea of 'punishment' by anyone strikes such terror. i'd expect ajuga to age faster since she's half hollow. can't imagine hollow would mature slowly given the imminent dangers. growing quick would have become an evolutionary adaptation, no?

grim is such a cutie pie in dad mode. his libido got the best of him in end though... heehee.

super psyched to hear next chap will include some u-h time. & non-traumatic park time is cherry on top.
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From ANON - Codry on July 28, 2011
Oh my god ... i can�t believe she spanked him. Really � I�m trying to comprehend the fact that Karin really, as in really, spanked an Espada. She�s such a vixen.
I have a little question ... I can guess the answer, but it can�t hurt to ask. Does Grimmjow know about her royal blood and implicitly his daughter�s?

Hell yeah � it was the best thing I ever read. So � is there any chance that we will see some �refreshing� the claim between Grimmjow and Karin

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From JOler on July 28, 2011
Ouch ... I feel sorry for Szayel's lab. I don't know if Karin liked the workout more, the chance to visit her friends more, or a break from the kids more.

Glad to see Ajuga is learning to talk better. I believe she will probably be as adept with words as Hana is with numbers ... and that Szayel's interest in Hana might increase because she is so good with numbers (may test her with increasingly difficult problems and such ... which wouldn't really be a bad thing since it would just make her learn more complex math quicker).
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From ANON - FY on July 27, 2011
Lmao! This was awesome. I wasn't sure what she was going to do at first then when she told him to bend across her lap I was like oh nooo. Worst fears confirmed. I wish I could draw. I'm taking a digital imaging class this fall. One of my first projects will be an expiremented on Ajuga. With octopus tentacles! So cute.
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From ANON - FY on July 27, 2011
I wish I had Starrk's cero guns. Those were pretty beast. This chapter was cute and fluffy and nice!
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From ANON - Nightqueen on July 27, 2011
OMG!! Absolutely love this last chapter! I soooo didn't see the spanking coming but did I laugh my way to the end!!! You are a terrific storyteller! I rather love the relationships Karin has made with all the various inhabitants of the Soul Society. Although she's very young she's taken to the role of mother like a duck to water. I think that's exactly what Szayel needs a mother figure to keep his experimenting tendencies under control. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for this tale. You really have brought these characters to life!
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From ANON - FY on July 26, 2011
One Shinigami. Wishing Grimmjow were a Shinigami right now. I'd have to say Hitsugaya though. His hair looks so soft and his eyes are so pretty. If I couldn't have him I would say Byakuya. I like his kenseiken. There are so many choices I'm worried I'm forgetting someone awesome. They're all pretty damn cool though. This chapter was super cute. Except Yammy. Ajuga should have shoved the mouse down his throat and made him choke and die. That is how he should die IMO. She's such a cutie though. I imagine how cute her kitty ears must be. It's weird no longer imagining Karin as a kid though. Actually thinking of her as an adult who's matured. I feel bad for her not being educated. As much as I didn't appreciate school before I graduated HS I really enjoy learning and knowing I'm intelligent now. But Karin has loads of intuition and street smarts so she can succeed in everything she does anyway.
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From ANON - FY on July 26, 2011
Honestly I have no idea why Yaoi is so popular. Possibly because a lot of female characters just suck in some animes/mangas. The thing I noticed about Bleach was that I didn't hate any of the characters. There were some I cared for less than others but any other show and I've hated at least 2 people. Even video games. I have those characters I just hate.
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From ANON - FY on July 26, 2011
I feel awful for Gin. Aizen is atrocious.
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From GlassesandWhatnot on July 26, 2011
on the why yaoi is so popular question and your response, if you're talking about not having anatomy meant to receive and are referring to an anus, women have an anus too, it also can tear just as easily... just throwing that out there. Also it kind of sounded like you implied (and i could be mistaken, if you were referring to society just responding more viscerally to rape of men rather than rape of women then disregard this) that it is more damaging when a man gets raped than a woman, i think they are both really really damaging and one is not more so than the other. Though i do agree with you that, for women, being raped is a constant fear, i would also add that rape of women is EVERYWHERE and that, i feel, society is desensitized toward sexual violence against women, where as with men, they are not and so people respond more viscerally (but you may have been saying this already and i misunderstood). Personally i think yaoi is popular because of the whole "taboo" thing, they even say it themselves "but we're... BOTH GUYS!" dun dun dun...
for this weeks question, can i opt to be tied up instead... ikkaku
Anyways, you're a great writer, love your story, please keep writing and keep posting, i always look forward to your updates, i am eager to see what is going on with the other pairings in this story, not that i don't love Karin and co., i am just dying of curiosity over here.
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From ANON - FY on July 26, 2011
Woah woah woah woah. Wait. They aren't really going to turn him into a girl are they??? Ommmgggg
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From ANON - FY on July 26, 2011
This chapter was SO good. Edge of my seat! Poor Ichigo still doesn't know she has a baby. But the bugs will go after her too soon enough. Lovesit.
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From ANON - FY on July 26, 2011
Omg! I feel like I have to review. Having Tesra slap Noittra was so win. I've warmed up to Noittra a little but am still iffy. I did not forsee Karin claiming others. It's awesome though. Amazing concept. Oh. The other thing I was thinking about! Szayel and Ajuga's interaction is so cute and creepy at the same time.
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From ANON - FY on July 26, 2011
Thank god you are going to kill him off. I don't care how. Just do it. My tummy feels sick. Yammy is disgusting. Physically and all over. He's just gross.
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