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By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - bleachfan7 on August 13, 2011
entertaining chap again. that lil girl is gonna get punished! just a bit confused as to whether or not aizen knows about the royal blood thing & that's why he's trying so hard to get unohana pregnant (think so but not 100% sure. sad to hear szay will get punished for doing a good deed. suppose he can't say he was getting baby? makes me sad the super-powered troops don't revolt when aizen is such a horror-show.
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From jensofia on August 12, 2011
I'm with FY on the reishi thing. It would make sense since pretty much the only technology that needs electricity is used if there is no nonelectric alternative for a similar device and even in the Soul Society there is only so much reishi in the air that can be harnessed.

I have a better question though, do they have plastic in the Soul Society because I'd like to know what those I.V. bags that squad 4 uses is made out of?

I wish I had commented on this earlier when your last chapter came out but I think Orihime is going to get preggers very soon. You have heavily hinted that in order for an Arrancar to reproduce the couple has to be in love with each other. It seems Ulquiorra is just starting to learn how to be romantic giving Orihime a reason to love him even more. Plus I don't think you've been that descriptive before about Ulquiorra's semen.
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From ANON - KarinKurosakiHitugaya913 on August 12, 2011
I loved this chapter and I cant wait to read more. I think that soul society uses kido for power. Idk. Update soon.
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From ANON - FY on August 12, 2011
Hmm. I imagine SS just uses Reishi for everything. That's what it seems like. This chapters revelations make me curious for everything. The bugs don't seem like the bad guys but I wonder how far they'd go to get someone on the throne and I wonder how much of this Aizen knows.
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From ANON - Codry on August 12, 2011
I bit my nails the whole time. Finally the drama is here .. okay � �stop biting your nails� � talking with myself.
Zee=The � I took me some time do decipher it, but I�m not a math addict for nothing. Still that zzzzz was a nice touch and I could almost hear them.
So that�s why Aizen wants an heir with Unohana so desperately? Hmm � this story is getting interesting-er

�Bad bug� � :)) LOL
Now � the moment between Karin and Grimmjow was perfect :)

Happy birthday *smile* for reaching page 1000 �
That�s true. With this, even Tite Kubo cannot compare.

I have a hypothesis about SS electricity � I think they use spiritual particles. They said at some point that SS if full of them, just like HM ... and it�s the only explanation I can think of.

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From HollowedRose on August 11, 2011
I'm finally up to date with this fic after going MIA for a while and I must say that I love it more and more! That chapter with Azayel's punishment made me smile like an idiot the entire time while reading it. I'm starting to hate Nnoitra less now but I hate Yammy now more than ever. I remember you asked if we saw the Royal Blood twist coming and I didn't. And yes I have read the last chapter of Bleach and I'm happy I finally know what Urahara and Isshin were talking about because somehow I was imagining the worst. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From starteeth on August 11, 2011
I'd like to recommend a piece of fanfiction from here on the site, actually the piece that brought me here in the first place: http://naruto.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296789090

Sadly, its incomplete. I don't know how you'd feel about finishing another author's work, but I think it lends itself to your writing skills. Safe to say its been abandoned, last update (of any kind from that author) was early 2007.
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From ANON - Codry on August 06, 2011
Uuuu � I love Grimmjow and Karin so much.

Ohhh .. yeah I read the latest manga of Bleach. Truth to be told, I hoped that the mystery shinigami would be Karin, but I guess Kubo doesn�t want to make Karin important. After all she has fewer followers than Hinamori.
I�m not going to continue on this subject because I may exceed the M+ language limit.

I was a little unimpressed because the last manga was too predictable. It was a d�j� vu for Aizen�s impressive entrance. I was something like �Yeah, he�s bad � so? I knew that from the start. I mean, look at his face. Aizen version 2.0. Please upgrade it�

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From ANON - bleachfan7 on August 04, 2011
enjoyed this chap a lot. got a bit of ulquihime--thx for that!!!! wish scene had started at beginning so we knew how they ended up in park near grid. doesn't seem like an ulqui thing to do that outdoors where someone might see (definitely a grimmy thing), but the exchange of affection & the interaction w/zanpakto was such a nice touch. loved that most.

love the family scenes w/grim & ajuga doing hollow-stuff. the 'mama cook' was just so damn cute, even though i could imagine her w/blood & animal fur bits covering her face & body. to be karin (or any mom) in that setting & keep a straight 'oh what a good little girl' face on would take such inner strength!

the double date was cute too, & i hope things get better w/noi as he sees her fighting--that he deems her more of an equal than property.

chap of bleach not very surprising. the shorter hair & i guess lieutenant arm band on r was nice. i's updated outfit was nice too.
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From ANON - Sg41 on August 04, 2011
I read the new bleach and Im just happy things are somewhat back to normal.
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From JOler on August 04, 2011
Nice chapter. So Ajuga is turning into quite the huntress much to her mom's chagrin I take it. Cute scene with Ulquiora and Orahime. Love how sweet Nnoitra and Tesra are being with the girls. So glad Nnoitra and Rangeku are getting along better ~ hope Rangeku doesn't have problems with the bugs since she hasn't fought in a while. From his comment I wonder if Nnoitra would have given Rangeku her Zanpakto back if he had the option (what better way for him to say 'I love and trust you' to her ~ and shock the panties quite literally off her ~ than that?) I wonder if Rangeku realizes that she has Nnoitra hooked so completely that he'd probably give his own undead life to protect her if he felt it would keep her safe (and that he kept her hidden and locked away because deep down where even he couldn't find it an insecure little whisper kept telling him that he was totally unworthy of the Goddess he'd taken and she'd either leave him for someone more worthy or be stolen by someone who wanted to hurt him and take his greatest treasure).

Sadly no one locally carries the manga so I am reliant on the televised version and way behind the manga most likely.

As for Szayel, I'm sure from his point of view none of his punishments are humorous or enjoyable. I agree about the nickname and how kids are when teasing someone (shudder ~ given that hollows and reapers are pretty much immortal once they become adults ~ could you see Ajuga as a flirty fledgling adult setting her sights on Szayel as her first NON-food conquest ~ and literally going all 'sex-kitten' on him ~ not to mention the horror and mortification Karin, Grimmjow, and Nemu would feel). Wonder if the terror of watching those two will change his attitude about having kids of his own (especially if Ajuga decides he is a hunt worthy practice target ~ especially hen bent over so she can get a good claws assisted perch on his rump while nipping the back of his neck ~ not seriously sinking her teeth in of course but still grazing his neck).

Hope Ajuga is safe and well after the bug attack. Know mom & dad will be in distress ~ wouldn't want to be the one to tell either one that we STILL haven't found her ... Would be great if Szayel's tracking device was helpful in finding her though.
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From ANON - ana on August 04, 2011
i realy like your story. sincew ukitake is my favorite character, cant you make a love story for him too, when he is with stark aniway wy not with him. they match quiet well
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From ANON - FY on August 04, 2011
I did read the latest Bleach chapter! I nearly squealed I'm excitement. So excited.

Anywho, this chapter was nice. I'm glad to see Matsumoto happier. Orihime too! I'm excited for Ajuga to be growing up. That's going to be a hell of an adventure for Karin and Grimmjow.
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From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2011
Would like to see Unohana finally get hugely pregnant with a vengeance. Preferably with an element of public humiliation or pregnant by something like a dog, but Unohana getting pregnant at all is enough for me.
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From ANON - Kelly on July 29, 2011
U know, I have been wondering, what will happen when Aizen finds out Yuzu is gone? So anyway kill Yammy and let Grimmjaw "claim" him (read: let Karin persuad Grimmjow to let her claim her, since Aizen doesnt know who's who's pet). Been playing with that idea for a while... just thought I'd let you know. Love the story! Keep it up and give us more Karin/Grimmjow goodness.
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