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By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - Ratraccoon on September 20, 2011
Looks like Karin is going to have to teach Ajuga the golden rule. That would probably be the best way to get her to understand why both of her parents hate Aizen since they can't openly talk about that. Like that you had Grimmjow did what he did at the end with the food.

I'm kind of interested in knowing where baby #3 will be from. Best bet it's either going to be from Karin and Grimmjow or Tesla and Tatsuki. 3rd best guess would have been from Nemu and Szayel if weren't for the fact that I highly suspect that Nemu is secretly taking that same contraceptive drug Gin was slipping Unohana. It was said that Kisuke developed it so it's ingredients were most likely listed in the 12th division's data banks.
While I am on the topic of Szayel; I really wish to know what Szayel exactly said to Tesra. Given his concerns in chapter 62 combined with what was mentioned about the bugs in this chapter he would be even less likely to be persuaded by whatever Szayel says.
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From ANON - Riley Killer on September 18, 2011
I must say that I really do enjoy your story, it is quite intriguing, well structured, and as a rereader, I enjoy how it has been playing out thus far. This is my own problem with it. (And take this in comical sense please) the amount of beef you have placed in your story has made me have a huge craving for it! Particularly with the meals Matsumoto prepares for Nnoitra! Now all I can think about is how I want asian style BEEF! Woe to my wallet because of your story.

But no, in all seriousness, keep up the good work!
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From ANON - FY on September 16, 2011
! I got busy and haven't had the chance to read lately. Everything is so exciting though! I'm excited for you and potential baby and your boyfriend! I'm semi excited got Orihime too. I'm curious to see what you make their baby look like and wondering what kind of job Karin is going to be offered. Thinking it'd have to be something seriously good for her to even accept considering she didn't want to join the academy or training formally considering her baybee.
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From Scorpinac on September 15, 2011
Hmm, yeah, that could probably do that to a soul reaper(poor Renji, poor Zabimaru...). Although, given his own twisted nature, wouldn't you think Kurosutchi would have already done similar experiments, most likely on his own subordinates?(He had turned four or five into living bombs at the time he fought Uryu, after all.) Laters.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on September 13, 2011

i am a huge fan of the 'domesticity' and 'tenderness between partners' type of scenes. the little moments in a couple's relationships, family moments, friendship moments--those scenes are quiet but show so much about characters. also found szayzel's worry over ulqui's reactions during delivery very humorous. ulqui w/preg hime is what i'm most looking forward to, as i've said before. once baby comes, it will be all about the chibi-ulqui & ulquihime dynamic (like getting in time for romance) so i can compare to the grimkarin way of handling things at the same point--will ulqui seek out grim's advice? he's been helpful before... thoughts of nervous ulqui make me happy (esp if grim doesn't let him live it down).

i prefer dogs but i do like cats too. am just extremely allergic to cats (moreso than dogs).
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From JOler on September 13, 2011
Hmmm ... Adore pups (and dogs) but the same goes fir kittens (and cats) ... It really depends on the personality of the animal in question ... So put me down for both.

I somehow get the feeling that asking Orahime along on the visit to Szayel's would be a good thing ... He might let Tatsuki and Tesra have a bit more say in the timeline of the experiment if he knew Ulquiorra would indirectly have some concern about it ... Though Tesra or Tatsuki could mention the claiming agreement including the 'keep HER happy' clause. Upsetting Ulquiorra seems to be pretty high on Szayel's 'Not To Do' list.

*raises an eyebrow* Rangeku putting her hand on her tummy while talking preggers with Tatsuki? Can I hope it means what I'd like it to? Will we get to see Nnoitra facefault at some seriously unexpected news then become seriously over protective and doting in regard to Rangeku? If that is the case I wonder how long it will be before anyone notices ... the split may not be as noticeable to Karin or she could assume any shift in energy is due to Heiniko being returned and mixing with Rangeku's riatsu. A hollow-shinigami hybrid pregnancy might be of interest to Szayel as well but I wonder how much of a strain it could end up causing between him and Nnoitra since those two are currently more or less friends. I'm sure a very doting and protective Nnoitra would put a serious damper on any experiments Rangeku was concerned about or distressed by.

I wonder if Tatsuki offered to let Szayel examine some of her eggs (not a whole overt or anything that drastic ... Just a few eggs) to compare them to standard hollow and shinigami female's eggs ... Would that be enough for a while? See if there are any natural barriers in the hollow or shinigami eggs that the human ones don't have which makes conception easier for example. If the ova's potential riatsu must be overcome to allow for conception to take place he might be able to come up with something to break down the eggs natural barrier long enough to allow conception or, conversely, something to strengthen the male contribution temporarily to allow it the chance to breach the ova's defenses if an offspring is desired. ... Just a few thoughts on alternative experiments he could do while waiting for Tatsuki and Tesra to warm up to the idea of having kids. I'm sure he could spend quite a while doing the analysis and any supplement development while waiting for them to be ready. On the other hand such research and potential supplements could also be of interest to Unohanna and the 4th so it could be treated as a joint effort (Aisen would also have an interest since it could lead to a heir ... and it would make Szayel getting a fertility sample from him possible without Szayel having to ask ... perhaps Unohanna could suggest that her end of the research might be showing some results on the males contribution ~ Szayel's team would be looking into the female half) ... Don't know but could be a stall tactic to use in any case.

I'm sure Karin would be overjoyed to join Tatsuki and Tesra in the visit to Szayel as well ... that might be a more distressing prospect than Ulquiora getting upset about his request (her threatening to have him 'drop them and bend over' right there in front of his visitors would probably put the breaks on anything that would upset Tatsuki).

Can't wait to see what Karin's job will be ... Or how the meeting with Szayel goes. (and waiting to see if Rangeku is gonna get blown off her feet with a shocker for Nnoitra).

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From ANON - James41 on September 13, 2011
I have 3 cats, but I like cats and dogs equally.
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From JOler on September 09, 2011
Hmmm there are one or two more options I can name but don't squick or laugh ...

Urahara (cute in a rugged beach bum way, calm, strong, laid-back, smart, there for ya in a pinch, kinda mysterious, and he's a guy who likes CATS)

Szayel (gorgeous eyes, hot body even if he is a bit thin, when it comes down to it he's smart, gotta love a guy that can pull off pink and not get ripped for it ~ even if it is his natural hair color, again he's calm most of the time, resourceful, and ooohhhh those super smexy built in glasses along with a great ~ though slightly psycho and sometimes maniacal ~ smile)
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From ANON - Codry on September 09, 2011
Amazing chapter and Grimmjow was so cuuutttee with that �Language � my ass� Karin can be such a hypocrite sometimes. Well you do with your life what you want. I do not like meddling in other�s stuff.

Arrancar: � nothing coming right now
Shinigami: I think I can find someone here, but the problem is I cannot choose
Let it be � Ichigo (he�s the main character after all) well he�s funny, confident, powerful, protective, very hot and the last but no the least Karin�s brother (does that count as an attribute?)

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From ANON - bleachfan7 on September 07, 2011
omg, i luv fluff so damn much! the two scenes were wonderful. while i wanted nnoi to die originally, if he's changing slowly, as he seems to be, then i'm really only hoping for yammy to have a slow, painful death w/bya giving final blow, and aizen of course, w/gin giving final blow. as much as i luv ginran, i'm ok w/her being w/noi if he's to become worthy of her. i almost ship retsu w/gin here, given their shared grief under aizen... its a place from which their bond could grow. as for future babies, will guess its tats & ran that get knocked up next, unless karin or ori have a 2nd preg (assume lots of time will have gone by in fic when we get to your mentioned section).

ulqui is loyal, curious, protective, sweet in his own way, promotes ori's inner strength, and is hot.
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From ANON - Ratraccoon on September 06, 2011
Listen I once witnessed (not as an actual legal witness) a wedding where the couple was dirt poor but very much in love. They just got married in a park wearing their regular cloths with the priest from their church marring them off. They couldn't even afford wedding rings yet they got married so they could get their license for the tax break benefits and so they could enjoy their special occasion with their friends and have cake afterward. I suspect that this may have been a shotgun wedding but even if you are better off than the people I mentioned you still have to consider all the expenses children cost and the marriage benefits that will help you pay for them.
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From cdkobasiuk on September 06, 2011
I love your story.

Marriage isn't expensive over done weddings are. And now a days there are no rules about weddings, which aren't as important as the marriage anyway.

cdk
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From ANON - Nightqueen on September 06, 2011
Tatsuki and Tesra are tooooo adorable I really love this pairing and hope to see more of them! Karin and Grimmjow are my favorite and I love how in-love the feel!!! You truly are an amazing storyteller and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - Onba on September 06, 2011
Good chapter.

FYI, to get legally married you don't need a ceremony at all, you just have to do some paper work. I have heard stories were people simply walked in and out of the courthouse in less then a day. On top of that married people have tax cuts! But anyway, its your life and you have a right to live it like you want to.
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From JOler on September 06, 2011
As for expensive weddings and dresses. Talk to your priest, reverend, rabbi, whatever and explain you want a minimum size, no frills wedding with as little fuss as possible, can he/she announce it the service AFTER it takes place (congratulate our newly marrieds so-and-so), and see if he/she knows someone who can be discrete to take a few pictures or tape the ceremony. Figure out howmuch he/she charges and when the church would be available for a short time during the week. Get a couple witnesses (think two are required ~ tell two friends you are going some place special for dinner but need to make a pit-stop first that you need them there for) ... get any required tests, licenses, papers in order ... Wear a somewhat dressy outfit that you are comfortable in (like you'd wear to a nice/fancy restaurant), have some flowers you got at the local grocery trimmed short and tied with a ribbon (the traditional LITTLE bouquet), pay the clergy fees and add a small extra donation to the church while you drag your stunned friends inside, have the simple ceremony, celebrate by taking your mind-blown and still in a daze friends out to one of the nicer restaurants in town then head off for the weekend. The parents will get over it or you can tell them you'll have a second 'for show' wedding but that they will have to foot the whole bill and it is your choice of dress.

Just a suggestion, but that way it's cheaper and you can make the families happy in a more leisurely timeline. (kind of a cross between eloping and an informal wedding ~ it ain't being done by the JP).

Mofaf1
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