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By : NovaAlexandria

From FatalMars on October 10, 2011
It's been awhile and I was happy to catch up to the story. You are so creative with the things you think of. Karin being able to claim is amazing. I am actually growing fonder of her and Grim dude a bit. I still dislike Orihime, but I see how it adds to the plot. Tatsuki and Tesla are pure gold. I love pairings that you wouldn't normally think of, but they fit so well.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on October 09, 2011
really enjoyed this chap. ajuga is such a cutie, & seeing ori & tatsuki in my mind's eye interacting w/the bundle of energy ajuga is made me chuckle, esp when at szayzel's. the scene w/bya at garden was lovely, but am wondering what (if any) horror befell ajuga at end of chap & also what yammy did to szay. update soon
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From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on October 08, 2011
Oh shit, I cracked up, split my sides, and keeled over in absolute helpless laughter at the thought of Orihime suddenly eating NORMALLY due to her pregnancy and Szayel's �So you are saying strange eating habits have become normal?� isn't helping it ROTFLMAO XD Genius! I never thought of that possibility before XD Ah, I felt sorry for the unborn child before, now not anymore X'D ....Pfff.....*kneels over again*

Thanks, this and your latest TRK chapter made my day *hugs you tight*
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From ANON - Onba on October 08, 2011
Uh oh, poor Yororich (how do you spell her name again?) is going to be eaten! I hope the gang can save her!

Great chapter!
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From ANON - gollumsfriend on October 07, 2011

Loved this chapter, it was so cute! (Except for Yammy being there, of course). XD

But NOOOOOOO!!! I don't want anything bad to happen to sweet little Ajuga!!!! I hope you PLEASE update soon---it seemed like this was a bit longer between updates this past chapter. Or maybe just my impatience for updates to stores I enjoy, I dunno. LOL
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From ANON - mandy on October 07, 2011
i know who the cat is... i know who the cat is.. poor chick she cant get a break at all.. and by the way will bya-sama get his voice back because i think it so hot and get rid of yammy he is sick *gags* but other than that i look forward ever friday to this this fic and i check everyday just in case u put an extra on up.. thank thank you for making this story
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From JOler on September 30, 2011
Looks like Ajuga, Hana, and to some extent Grimmjow are in awe of a mom's innate omniscience and are convinced she has teensy spies lurkingabout. The 5th has discovered a mom's command voice ... Guess Nanao was past that voice when she got the job or she deferred all that responsibility to Starrk or Ukitaki.

Can't wait for the Tatsuki Szayel interaction ... Guessing it happens around the time Karin picks up the kids from the pink haired mad man who's brain is frazzled almost to the point of sanity? Still hoping to see Rangeku send Nnoitra to his face by uttering three little syllables (two little words) ~ in her sexiest come hither whisper she said "I'm pregnant" as she nuzzled him when he got home. Or maybe with five little syllables (three little words) ~ she wrapped her arms around his neck and leaned back to look deep in his eyes, her hips pressing suggestively against his and her most enchanting smile gracing her face, "Welcome home daddy" she cooed... I'm sure his brain would take a moment or two to process what she said then do a total lock up and shutdown until it fully processed her words and had to come back up and on-line to confirm that newest bit of data ... And of course his reactions and changes after hearing the news. ... If she's one of the upcoming pregnancies that is. Otherwise I think either a pissed Tatsuki gets to tell a happy but distressed Tesra the news OR an annoyed Karen gets to snarl it at a gloating Grimmjow (but let's face it neither would be as funny as Rangeku hitting a blindsided Nnoitra with the news).
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on September 29, 2011
please please please let there be chaps w/ulqui and the kids! he wanted them, w/o knowing what rugrats 24/7 are really like--especially when there is more than 1 & you are outnumbered. to read of him wondering what he got himself into while ori is her usual cheery maternal self not overly fazed by noise & mess (while he looks the type to want all things contained & neat & controlled). if he somehow was able to warm up to kids in his own cold/unemotional on outside way despite whatever internal feelings may be around anyone but ori, that would be super awesome. i realize this is written a zillion chaps ahead of what is posted, so i won't hold my breath but i do hope we at least get a bit of ulquihime + rugrats as it promises to be funny.

looking forward to tats next chap. the female driven chaps w/ran, karin, tats, ori together (& nanao if she was available) are also highlights in a different way from the lemon/love/devotion in midst of aizen's hellish reign & bug apocalypse chaps. if forgot what the ques for this chap was.
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From ANON - Codry on September 29, 2011
So COOL *staring mouth gaped*

I understand why did you have to think about it and redo it, but god it was perfect � On a scale from 1 to 10 you get a BIG 11 *clapping*. Amazing job with this one and I can say that it is now my favourite! Cannot choose between this and the one in which they lose Ajuga.

Seriously � I want an anime after this. Who needs Kubo when we have you *hug*
Not that I do not like Kubo, after all he created these amazing characters, but your story is 2 amazing T_T

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From ANON - Nightqueen on September 28, 2011
Karin was simply inspiring! You did a wonderful job with the speech! I was ready to jump up and follow her! With every chapter this story evolves and becomes richer! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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From JOler on September 22, 2011
Ongrats to Karin. Hmmm ... Good try Grimmjow but Karin seriously needs to teach Ajuga (and probably Szayel) the GOLDEN rule ... though it would be interesting to see Lilinette get Hana and Ajuga to join her in a mad dash at Nnoitra (with Tatsuki and Tesra there to protect the younger girls at least ... they're still kids and are still learning boundaries sir). Too bad Szayel hasn't developed a kinetic absorption device that could be mounted in a play room for the girls so he could siphon off some of their released (and therefore free in the air) energy as a power backup.

I'd love to see Ajuga have a little quiet time with Starrk actually so she could ask HIM about why he got mad when he did and why it's ok to do things like that at other times ... just to see if he gives a different answer. We already know Karin's most likely response.

As for wanting to put off Ajuga's growing up ... I think every dad feels that way ... even human ones. The fact that Ajuga is already able to inflict damage to Grimmjow and Szayel is impressive ... wonder how long it will be before she would be strong enough to kick Aisen's tail ~ not that she'd know she could of course ... but others could speculate.

In regard to the favorite form of protien ... usually chicken but there are a few days every month when all I want is beef ... lots and lots of thick juicy beef. Then it goes back to chicken.
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From ANON - Codry on September 22, 2011
Sorry for not reviewing your last chapter, but I�ve been busy with an exam, but now that it passed (and I passes if I might add) I can finally review *tumultuous cheering*

err � daddy Grimmjow is AMAZING! And the discussion went smoother than expected. It always amazes me how visual is the entire story, like a movie playing before my eyes.

I love how Karin refers to their �contact� as molesting. Maybe she wants to vex him � dunno. Grimmy-kitty is getting territorial while enumerating some nouns that have the word �my� before them. Possessive+blue hair+hunk = Grimmjow

Definitely chicken! Chicken rules the world! I have nothing against beef or pork, but lamb � no. As for the other 3 I cannot pronounce myself.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on September 22, 2011
loved this chap! love domestic stuff. just b/c ori is preggers, ulqui isn't keeping her like she's made of glass, so that was a happy mention there. also wondered why not put ori & tats to do administrative duties?

i like chicken best myself.
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From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on September 21, 2011
I love this chapter a lot *grins in amusement* Ah, I know right? Tis why I'm rather awkward around kids (hell I'm not really good around them even babies to begin with -much to my mom's aghast *remembers being totally and pathetically helpless on what to do when babysitting her baby nephew*), I remember being barreled with multitude of questions from a kid once, staring at me just like Ajuga is and I so can relate to Grimmjow's predicament *sags* Anyhow...wait, it took you a MONTH around it? *le gasp*
Heh, I like Karin there, having both Ajuga and Grimmjow under her thumb in a way...hard to explain but it's admirably amusing.
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From ANON - gollumsfriend on September 21, 2011

Ahhh, the joys of parenthood. XD

I was happy (for some reason) to see Karin's anger at Grimm for not 'helping' out with the situation early on....and just as pleased to see how he tried to take on the challenge of sorting it out on his own. One would think he would do a bit of explaining to Karin about certain aspects of their child's hollow-side (like the food thing).....but I see him as the type who wouldn't be bothered with many details because he'll just take care of it himself (like you had him do).

Nicely done as always! And just like always, I already can't wait for your next updates--thank you!!
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