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From ANON - Codry on October 30, 2011
Sorry for the late review, but I didn�t read your new chapter until now.
I loved this chappy � god damn it �cause I love them all. And Ulqui had been indirectly saved by Karin *snicker* so much for the great 4-th Espada

I had a little add for the previous chapter which can related to the actual one �I wonder if Aizen did send Uliqu there in order to check Karin�s range. And I am curious to know who was the one Aizen was really looking for. Anyway I�ll find out at some point, so no need to worry�

Karin is such a vixen. I love her so much (even if Kubo gives a fuck about her existence). And Grimmjow is a lucky guy and vice versa *sigh*

You know I�m not a big Orihime fan. As a matter of fact I don�t like her too much, but for some reason I kinda liked her in this chapter.

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From ANON - bleachfan7 on October 27, 2011
adored this chap, i guess because it included so many character's views/feelings. adored the final ulquihime parts, and for all the complaining about how difficult it is to write ulqui, you do it amazingly well! believe in your writing skills.

the grimkarin parts were great too, grim's rageful slaughter because they tried to hurt his mate was wonderfully sexy in a way, especially in noting in the shower scene he did what she needed as opposed to his 'old' self that was more about self-gratification. ajuga's feelings of accomplishment & karin feeling pride in her was a great little bit as well (& neat that no one was able to catch her despite the fact she's only 2+ years old chronologically). even szay's excitement over having so much new data/specimen's was funny & adorable in a way.
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From ANON - B on October 26, 2011
It took me till this chapter to realize just how far the story has progressed. I really love this story and look forward to reading it every week. Keep up the good work you wonderful person you
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on October 22, 2011
another good chap. i got anxious when reading the summons to aizen, immediately jumping to the torture scenes of gin & szayzel, so i'm glad things did not go badly thx to attack distraction. freaked a bit at idea of sending ajuga off to szay alone, even if she is quick--if swarm knows its karin's child, & they know karin has royal blood, its logical they will target the relatively defenseless little one down the road. were the numbers the location of where portal opened up, for szay to investigate?

hope we get to hear about the effectiveness of karin's team-building exercise on the unit, and of the effectiveness of not just shinigami but humans ori, tats, & karin in fighting, protecting & healing post-battle (ori can reverse wounds & karin can use kido & medical knowledge from growing up at clinic, & tats can help out w/bandaging & helping out w/arrancar, since as you wrote early on, the shinigami caregivers were skittish around them).

Feel better. have they talked about doing an endoscopy, to peek inside your GI tract? you might have GERD or bleeding ulcers.
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From The_Dark_Soul_Magician on October 20, 2011
O.O must have more... This is one of the best Fan Fics I've ever read. You really should think about publishing it.
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From ANON - Codry on October 20, 2011
I like the idea of Karin standing up to Aizen(when she said about finding her brother), but at the same time realizing that he�s stronger and not to be �upset by anything�. It was an interesting discussion and it became interesting once Aizen got into his bossy demeanor.
Good job with this one again *thumbs up*
I did see the image BlackStorm had drawn, because yesterday I searched on deviantart grimmjow&Karin photos. Anyway amazing photo and an amazing chapter as well.
I hope your stomach is fine and it�s noting serious; who knows maybe you�re pregnant *giggle*

As always your story keeps me guessing and your amazing writing skills arose my jealousy (maybe awe is a better word � idk)

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From JOler on October 18, 2011
Love the scene in the garden. Poor Ajuga ... She didn't stop when told to and got a big booboo. Yoruichi got a bit of a shock too. Wonder how the others will react to the news that's taken back. And the ice cream distraction ... a guaranteed way to distract almost any kids.

Poor Szayel (and consequentially Karin), wonder what Yammey did to Szayel in order to get his way again ... Otherwise why would Yammey be so happy? I'm sure Karin will take aside trip to see what's going on.

Chap was great.
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From ANON - B on October 15, 2011
how did you become such a good writter
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From jensofia on October 15, 2011
I haven't reviewed in awhile so I am going to say that I loved the way you handled all the character interactions in the last 2 chapters. Lets hope Ulqui's hollow form is a fruit bat Orihime will have enough to worry about a kid that can fly away from her let alone hunt everything that moves. Speaking of which I thought Orihime would have a craving for fruit. But oh well normal food for Orihime is funny too. Based on Tatsuki's reaction to Szayel'a question I am now fully for her having one since it would be a lot more interesting to see Tatsuki fight Szayel every step of the way when it comes to any sort of cooperation. Plus it would be funny to see a kid that loves to play in mud for more Szayel torture which I can totally see Tatsuki using that as a sort of revenge for having to put up with his experiments. Just hope for that kid's sake he or she inherents more human-like physical features than Ajuga did.

Yikes! I have a bad feeling Aizen knows about Karin's ability to claim.
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From ANON - Codry on October 14, 2011
�Only you could make text look intimidating, Byakuya-bo,� � this phrase made my day. I�ll keep it in mind for eternity *laugh*
And Ichigo might find out about Karin&Grimmy having a child.

� Aizen having an �interest� in Karin is a BAD thing, very bad. I guess I�ll have to wait and see.
Also I have to admit I�m pretty much sure that if Aizen finds out about her blood lineage, since he cannot conceive with Unohana (you told up so a few chapter back), he�ll force himself upon her. I don�t know what scares me the most: the possibility of Aizen raping Karin or Aizen raping Ajuga. I think the second because for some reason I think Karin would be tough enough to get over it.

BUT I don�t want either of them. Seriously, none!
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From ANON - Codry on October 14, 2011
Sorry for my late review and I must add that this is a review for your previous chapter, I mean chapter 65, because I didn�t find the time to read chapter 66 (& I wanna review after each chapter I read)

So first of all � I HATE YAMMY! more than I hate Aizen (and you made me hate him pretty badly in your story) Tatsuki was amazing and so IC that it scared me (I found her threats incredibly funny, but I doubt the mad scientist shared my opinion ).

Ok .. gotta go finish the next chapter

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From ANON - bleachfan7 on October 13, 2011
adorable chap. i really enjoy the 'domestic' chaps, ori's interaction w/ajuga & ajuga's saying ulqui smelled like food was my favorite part. so cute. definitely nice to see human karin showing she's got something to contribute & in general showing that all the claimed human women are competent & powerful in their own way, despite not having the level of reiatsu that espada have. dying for batbaby to make his/her appearance. really hope its a boy & the story goes long enough for ulqui's son & ajuga to become mates when grown. the royal blood business & aizen is really creepy (w/the implications of what aizen would do)--no safe place if anyone found out, since bugs may have an equally bad ending in store for the royal blooded folk as aizen would (he'd kill ukitake & all nobles left that might have some royal blood i'd assume).

til next chap, which i'm guessing will not be fluffy at all.
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From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on October 13, 2011
Yay~ Yoruichi's back! :D Pfff...the image of Ajuga nomming on Ulquiorra got me laughing into fits (again), I can picture Grimmjow laughing his ass off coupled with a maniacal proud grin somewhere....until he had to grab Ajuga safely out of Ulquiorra's reach the moment he felt him react....*stares off into space in amusement*
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From ANON - dragoon_gal on October 11, 2011
I just want to say I LOVE this story! It's amazing and I've been reading it for the past few days. I have to say keep up the good work and the cliff hanger on the end of 65 was mean, just saying. I hope you update soon though! Thank you for helping me procrastinate, I'm suppossed to be writing a term paper but your story was much more interesting. Again thank you so much for writing an awesome story!
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From JOler on October 11, 2011
The visit with Szayel was definitely amusing ... and at the end it was a bit distressing. Hope Szayel is ok and Yammy gets stuck carrying any baby if he forces Szayel to do gene splicing. Nice seeing the interactions with Byakuya. (hoping something happens to Yammy soon).

Hmmm ... Sounds like Yoruichi got a bit more of an active 'welcome to the garden' than she is accustomed to; hope she is ok.
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