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From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on February 11, 2012
Whut?! The end?! NoooooOOooooes~~!!! *melodramatically shakes monitor as if hopping it'll spit more out* D':
Loved the chapter so much I re-read it twice, and I dare say my heart itself might have felt kinda squirmish (and queasy) at -er- their meal *nervous chuckle* Grimmjow having such a bold adult talk with his daughter was quite............well, "amusing" feels like an understatement XDDD Oh gosh....

*almost had juice drink down the wrong pipe at the first A/N* I'll say....pfff...and I don't think Grimmjow would want an additional person in 'charge' on how he raises his daughter and adding to a bigger hornets nest....*wipes away tears and bits lip to stifle further amusing round of chortling*

As for your "weekly question"...hmm...I'm not too sure (although I'm leaning towards Karin for some reason, I suppose it's because logically I would have asked), they're both about equally at fault since neither of them are quite familiar with each others' customs and such.
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From Codrynae on February 11, 2012

Grimmjow � you are one strange father. Does he always have to be turned on by anything related to Karin. I mean how can a growl be interpreted as hot? Anyway I�m glad that Karin has good intuition.
For the first time Ajuga has a mini-fight with her mother. The daughter part in me wanted to say �Don�t worry darling it won�t be the last�
�sheath I am permitted to put that sword in is Karin� the best phrase ever *snicker* I just love these messed up comparisons.

Offf Hiyori I love her, but I�m more than sure that if the two firecrackers were to meet(in the anime I mean), that�s what would happen. I love the discussion between Szay and Grimm. Maybe I read too much between the lines, but I think Szayel has strong feelings for Karin; don�t know if they are just friendship, but frankly Grimmjow was right: he cares a lot if he was willing to get raped instead of revealing the truth.

I�m happy to hear your baby is fine, but I�m not so glad to hear you�re not sleeping at night. I would like to have a child of my own in the near future (need to find a man first) but you�re really scaring me (because I looovveee to sleep)

Answer: that�s a hard question. I would say both since it was Grimmjow�s duty to inform her, but she should have asked anyway (she�s so stubborn)
The next chapter will be very intersting (and welcomed by hitsukarin fans --- not that something will ever happen between them, but at least an interaction)

Btw did you know that Grimmjow is alive! Kubo didn�t really state he was alive, but he said that it might be possible (as in very possible) for him and Nel to appear in the next (last) arc.

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From JOler on February 11, 2012
Think the blame should be split evenly.

Loved the hunt. Understand why Grimm-kitty is pissed (would have loved seeing Karin's reaction to him momentarily losing his inner battle with his inner Tomcat ... not acting on it but briefly speculating ....). Somehow I get the feeling Grimmjow is gonna be a bit put-off about what's eating Karin (he probably assumed ...) Get the feeling Grimmjow has finally figured out that Szayel can be trusted abut with Karin's secret. Speaking of that secret .... Aisen did transform into a hollow too before becoming Kami didn't he? And he can become royal if he has a kid by Unohanna (a less direct heir) right? So, does that mean that since Karin is the rightful heir, and Ajuga is the next in line behind her, and Grimm-kitty is mate and daddy to the two respectively ... does that make Grimm-kitty legit royalty and technically Aisen's superior because Aisen is just a wannabe?
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From ANON - rubyblade on February 10, 2012
Sorry I've been away, too much busy over here! Anyway, great chapter, though I must confess I am still unhappy that Yammy has not died of blunt or sharp force trauma. LOL Gin is so amazing, I didn't love him until about 5 chapters before his death scene. Now, I can't get enough, and I adore the chappies with him in them. Congrats on your own baby! I remember being that excited to see mine on the ultrasound.
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From ANON - Saka_Sandora on February 07, 2012
You know, I was wondering what would have happened if Grimmjow had taken/captured Ichigo. Would Ichigo be dead? Claimed? Tortured?
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From Codrynae on February 06, 2012
Wings and a boy � I�m so happy *making plans for the wedding � between him and Ajuga of course* my head if full of crazy ideas of what might happened after the baby is born *khe* there are so many that I cannot distinguish between them *sigh*

�Wow, so other than Starrk-san you have never slept with anyone?� -- only Orihime could ask such a question.

Good chapter, but I must confess that I�m literally dying to find out what will happen in the next one.

Hmmm � though question *staring at the empty wallet* There are many places/countries I would like to visit. Being a European my first choice would definitely be somewhere in Europe. Though I find Paris/London/Berlin/Vienna/Rome kind of consummated (also my mother had been there and she loved it, but they are not my first choice) I guess that somewhere in Eastern Europe, especially my neighbors because sadly I know nothing about them: Serbia, Bulgaria and Hungary. I wanna go to Kiev as well and maybe Poland. Yep � if only I could teleport myself there it would be more than fine.

Anyways I loved this chapter!
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From JOler on February 04, 2012
Too many places I wanna go and just as many reasons for wanting to go to each....

Love the scroll Ajuga made for Byakuya ... I think he and Zenbonzakura needed the little emotional and psychological lift it gave (and continue to give).

Hmmm ... Sounds like a pretty little girl is already getting a bit jealous of the new baby (not playmate ... It's a ....boy ewwww ~ Ajuga's perspective of course). My guess is she has a 'school-girl' type of crush on Szayel and will be jealous of anyone that might threaten her ownership of the title 'favorite experiment'. Of course she's gaining interest in Gin too ... and might bond somewhat over the mutual dislike of Aisen now that she knows Aisen is responsible for Szay being hurt so bad and for Gin's mistreatment .... and that Gin tried to kill him like she'd probably like to do ....

Hmmm daddy-daughter talk and hunting trip ... Interrupted ...hmmmm. So is Karin upset because Ajuga is too young to hunt? Or maybe the topic of the convo? Or possibly the outcome of the interruption? (she'd probably wail on his ass if either Barragan or Bugs dragged her baby girl off ....)

Kinda hoping for a very preggers Orahime and Ulquiorra to have a romantic lake-side wedding with many in attendance ... and Hana and Ajuga whistfully watching the grown ups dance ... and wishing in softly spoken thoughts that their current crush would ask THEM to dance. (ie Hana likes 'sensei' and Ajuga moons over Szay). Of course Szayel and Unohanna are both there ... Aisen would insist on performing the ceremony himself and with Orahime due at any time having her doctors in attendance is only wise...

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From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on February 04, 2012
Yus~! I knew it'd be like Ulquiorra's Segunda Etapa and a boy~! *punches fist in the air, and sympathetically pats pouting Ajuga* Ah the thought of Ajuga drawing is quite an adorable sight.

As for the weekly question....well, to be honest, I never really gave it much thought because of various personal reasons and financial issues *shrugs*

Ooooo...I kinda miss all the family moments between those three (Grimmjow, Karin and Ajuga) *squirms with curiosity and anticipation, and waits patiently for the next chapter*
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From ANON - Tokoloshe on February 04, 2012
Actually forgotten why Aizen want to have the child in the first place. He really is a tyrant through and through! Just hope that Unohana just don�t fall pregnant and if she does a rescue will happen soon for the safety of the child. Orihime is having a baby with wings! So cute. Yes also think he will be a heart breaker. I loved what Ajuga did for Byakuya � really heart warming. He needs the kindness after what he has been through and still enduring.
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From ANON - gollumsfriend on February 04, 2012

Awww!!! Such a sweet chapter! I *almost* got teary as Ajuga was giving Byakuya her gift.

A really lovely update overall, thank you!
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From bleachfan7 on February 04, 2012
sweet chap, both for learning about baby & cute ajuga scenes.

think i'd either go to new zealand, because it looks amazing from what i've seen in movies like the lord of the rings trilogy & whale rider; or alaska, since it too seems amazing from what i've seen in media & what i've heard from friends who have gone.
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From ANON - Nightqueen on February 03, 2012
Ajuga did an absolutely beautiful thing. That scroll, the picture and the words upon it gave Byakuya a little piece of himself back! It was truly a wonderful heart warming moment to read about! Orihime is going to get her adorable baby wings included!! I loved that scene when she found out the baby was a boy with a tail and wings!! This is truly one of my favorite stories and I look forward to the update each week! Thanks!!!
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From ANON - Joyleaf on February 01, 2012
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to go up! I am so excited about Ulquiorra and Orihime's baby! :D I feel so bad for Ran and Gin though, but you are doing such a great job on the story!
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From Codrynae on February 01, 2012
Poor Gin � I really feel for him and now that Ajuga knows what happened with her precious Szay � I think that Ajuga has the potential of becoming very powerful and smart and I love the way you�ve decided to present her evolution. As always I am mesmerized by your writing *smile*
Also I am a fan of MatsumotoxGin :)

Cola FTW Even if it depends of the country. For example in Canada/USA Pepsi tasted better, but in my country Cola is yammy (this comes from someone who drinks water once a month)

Sorry for the late/short review but � exams

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From JOler on January 29, 2012
Whine ... soooo wanna see Nnoitra taking Rangeku to the 4th because he thinks she may have gotten sick fighting the bugs ... only to faint (yes ... Nnoitra faint) when Unohanna says something along the lines of "Oh my, it looks as if you will be pulled from the front lines for a while Ran-chan. It appears you're going to be a mother. Congratulations to the both of ... uh Nnoitra-sama are you ok?" (both women looking down with surprised expressions as they take in the sight of the espada who is passed out on the floor). Several members of the 4th rush in to aide Unohanna after hearing several crashes coming from the room (you know he had to knock over a few things on the way down) and stare in stunned amazement. Rangeku chuckles nervously and to break the tension quips "I never thought I'd see the day he'd go down without a fight ... and to a female that didn't lay a finger on him at that."
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