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By : NovaAlexandria
  • From JOler on March 17, 2012
    Family is cute. Poor Gin, glad Orahime could help somewhat. Well, now Aisen at least has an answer to one of his frustrations ... now what will he try to fix it? (please let him forget the riatsu 'sampling' device Szayel has in his examination room ... the device that caused Karin to go postal on him in one of the early chapters. I wonder if the device could be programmed to only drain his riatsu and not Unohanna's ... lol could so see Szayel 'accidentally' calibrating it wrong so that it drew off too little the first time then way too much the second time ... as he 'tries to fine tune the settings'. I'm sure Retsu wouldn't mind if he was weak as a kitten for a bit.

    Hmm ... Not Gin or Szayel ... Can we hope for it to be Yammy and/or Barrigan? Hope he doesn't catch Ajuga sneaking about and punish her or her parents. Or try to take Diamus, that might turn Ulquiorra against him.

    Still hoping for a Rangeku-Nnoitra baby. Also hoping Renji's Zanpakto starts to reform. And kinda hoping that just sitting on the throne would be enough for Ajuga to dispel any chance of Aisen ascending any further ... she could sit there while visiting Gin while Aisen is away elsewhere (and Aisen would be clueless to his loss ... but Karin might notice the change since she'd probably also get a riatsu upgrade herself).

    Unfortunately the exhaustion is pretty normal since it takes energy to make anything. And yes, in this regard, men are the root of all evil and deserve what they get (and exponential return on any pain inflicted ... including labor pains).
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  • From ANON - Terra_Banks on March 16, 2012
    Hi there I was just wondering what happened to Rangiku in all this. I didn't come across her. Sad how her and Gin aren't together despite both being alive.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2012
    Wait....... THIS CANNOT BE!!!!!! I could swear I had at least 5 more chapters!!! *frantic scrolling through the chapters* Nevermind. Dammit. Now I have to wait. Kuso.
    This fanfiction has pleasantly surprised me, well maybe that's a tad bit of an understatement. Massive length, regular updating, plot, good spelling, believable dialogue, and engaging characters dfsr. Sorry fingers started trembling in excitement. Before I make this review any more awkward let me compliment you for writing a superb fanfiction that manages to start to supplant the source material in my mind. This is truly something I wouldn't mind buying at the bookstore. Well till next chapter or the next urge to rave about the concentrated just..... Wait I don't have a term to describe it. Let me work on that and get a good one. Till then.

    TheMysticalFett
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on March 15, 2012
    awesoem story, my peev is when the format is horrible, no puncuation(or at least trying) mispelled canon characters names, and sudden OOC like they are great them boom, mating/claiming/etc happens then sudden 360 on their personality it sucks.
    well i wish you luck with your baby and i hope it dosent take as long with you, as it did Inoue.
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  • From jensofia on March 09, 2012
    It is nice to know what Diaemus' eye color is. And I loved that scene whith Ulqui asleep with the baby.

    But I have a question about Diaemus' blood drinking does he still need milk too? Because that would be problematic for Orihime.
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  • From bleachfan7 on March 09, 2012
    ulqui can't seem to stop himself from putting grimmy down whenever he can--seems 2nd nature. would love to see image of that final scene of cuddly ulqui & sneaky ori taking pics for future blackmail. did get sad for ori's fears over aizen & realistically, ulqui's promise is the best he can do since he can't defeat him even if he tried to prevent baby's removal. aizen is stronger than each of them so saying no makes no difference in his ultimate behavior. thx for giving us some ulquihime/bat baby (vampire baby!) page time. now wondering when post-baby sex will be ok, & if there will be some sibs for diaemus & ajuga.
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  • From ANON - rubyblade on March 08, 2012
    Ocs are not my fave. I won't even open a story with that fact in the summary. I like my characters pre-established thank you! Anyway, good going on your pregnancy, I like reading your personal notes at the end. :) Have a great week, I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - empress11690 on March 08, 2012
    I totally hate the nick name thing too and sometime all the repatition is really annoying.smh. I getting really tired of the same plot lines with only a slight change in the characters personalities. I'm a new reader to this story but I find in different and refreshing, its something I have actually read before. I kinda feel that the smuttyness has been over shadow by the angst and Drama.lol, I really hate Yammy but I really really HATE Aizen!! I also thought that your mad scientist was going to get what he deserved but that was too horrible. WOW its was really bad for Gin too and a little heart flutter hit me when Karin disowned Ichigo and his name. I think she is being awfully unfair to him.He was late be he did come for them!
    As I said I'm really enjoying this keep up the great updates....And Congrats on your new addition!!! ;)
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  • From jensofia on March 03, 2012
    I am glad to finally see the Ulquihime baby yay!

    And I loved Unohana line "Yes, well, you did not witness your mate being sliced open and your child being forcefully removed from her womb, covered in your mate’s blood."
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  • From ANON - anon RN on March 02, 2012
    For future reference the umbilical cord is tied before it's cut and newborns aren't cleaned with water until at least a day of stable vital signs. The fluids are just wiped off with a dry warn cloth right after birth. Water can make them lose body heat very fast and they have already just gone through the shock from leaving a very warm environment to a relatively colder one.
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  • From ANON - Namika on February 29, 2012
    I love this fanfiction so much!!!!! Especially because Ulquiorra is gradually softening, warming up and getting used to 'feel'.
    Can't wait to see how the baby looks like!! Though I didn't expect that you would give him Orihime's red hair O_O
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  • From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on February 29, 2012
    *winces* Fourteen hours? Kinda like what my older sister went through with her first child (the birth of her second child went more smoother though, or so I was told) and she went through a mild post-natal depression afterwards (thankfully mom was there for her and somewhat helped her adjust). Hope all goes well with Orihime.

    Diaemus..........interesting, but how'd you pronounce it? *is comically speechless* I ALMOST misread it as Deiamon or something closer to sounding demon-ish *nervous sheepish chuckle*

    As for your weekly question....hmmm, I've some but mostly it depends *tilts head thoughtfully* Though I do agree with you about the constant 'nicknames' on Ichigo and Grimmjow *nods*
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  • From ANON - bright on February 29, 2012
    I hope you continue to write this story, I've enjoyed it immensely, as I did your Crossbreeding story and sequels.
    One thing I'd like to say, and I'm only familiar with helping to birth livestock, but doing anything to speed up the passing of the afterbirth is a huge taboo. Because of the way it attaches to the uterine wall, applying any outside force can very easily tear the uterine wall, and if that happens the ewe is likely to bleed to death. The afterbirth is (with the livestock I raise) usually passed within 30 mins on its own, and nursing releases chemicals that help with that.
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  • From ANON - kireban on February 28, 2012
    What elements of reading Fanfiction turns me completely off?
    amm... it must be if the pair that i read is strict seme/uke >.
    .>
    continue with the good work :)
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  • From ANON - Joyleaf on February 27, 2012
    So cute!!!! I love it! I am so happy that Orihime's baby finally came! Can't wait to see how he turns out!
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