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By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - mofaf1 on March 30, 2012
Can't really give an opinion on the recent filler seasons since I'm way behind and only get to see what is on CN. Sorry about the misunderstanding about the throne too. Perhaps some of the bigger bugs will snag Ajuga, much to Karin's distress, and get her to the throne on time ... to get Aizen out of the way for good. It is infinitely hopeful that Aizen is unaware of Karin's and Ajuga's bloodline proximity to the throne; it's always nice when the bad guy has a dozen or more potential targets in mind and you know he's shooting blind because the real threat is the one or two he doesn't expect. I so hope that the espada are all plotting against him after what has recently happened. I'm sure there are those who noticed that Jushiro was missing from the battle that took place earlier in the day; but then again he has been undergoing treatments.Hmmm ... I wonder if any of his other friends might want to visit Jushiro while he is in recovery ... if Ulquiorra is informed of the attack by Aizen on someone else's pet he might be a bit stressed and if Orahime overhears it she might want to see Ukitake, I'm sure Rangeku would feel the same if she thought Nnoitra might let her visit. Tatsuki would definitely want to see him and I'm sure Tesra would probably let her. If the other two girls weren't able to visit I'm sure Tatuski would inform them of what happened and his current state (and we know how they would make sure their significant males knew of their distress). If Toshiro heard he might even be distressed and we know that Haribel already doesn't tend to be overly trusting of males (like Aizen) in the first place. Can so see Rangeku and Orahime going all out with the waterworks and demanding to know what their 'owner' would do if Aizen tried to do something like that to them with little to no real reason and without saying a word to the owner first.

Hopefully Jushiro is able to survive the week or so of torment from the nightmares. I'm also hoping that Aizen, Barragan, and Yammy (in no particular order) get their just desserts soon. I'd also love to see the rightful heir actually get to the throne soon .. .even if they don't know they are the heir ... lol

Glad the pregnancy is going well.
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From Codrynae on March 30, 2012
I've missed you so much TT^TT sorry for not reviewing in like � a decade, but you know: life keeps anyone busy.

Coming back on the subject .. I�ve missed 5 or 6 chapters and this happens � Ukitake gets slashed by Aizen, Orihime gives birth to a beautiful boy. My god � you make me love this story more and more.

I wanna kill that bastard! AIZEN!!! GRRRRRR!!! He really pisses me off.

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From ANON - Aviary on March 30, 2012
Oh no poor Jushiro!!!! I feel so bad for him but I can't say what Aizen's actions are surprising. I like how Aguja didn't know how to control her instincts. I also love how every is giving Szayel a way out.... I can't wait to see Grimm-ji's reaction to Karin being hurt and what Aizen did to Jushiro, and I'm curious of Byakuya's reaction. For your question, perhaps Yachiru I think she's still alive in this one or maybe Rukia can come with Nel.
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From Nelarun on March 30, 2012
Aizen's slowly alienating his Espada. :-/. Oh dear. Poor Juushirou!!! As cruel as it was, at least Aizen offered him one last beautiful view before he attempted to steal his sight (I hope that it isn't permanent!). Good to see Gin getting more page time, and Starrk's alpha coming out.

Once again - a simply amazing piece of work!! I eagerly look forward to the next chapter!!

Nelarun
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From ANON - frozenflower95 on March 28, 2012
Very dramatic Chapter! I love it! Well I mean the style of writing and the way the plot is going, not for poor Ukitake-san :'( Man that's terrible. It's different to be born blind, but to be able to see for centuries, and then suddenly have that taken away from you because of your compassion for others... T_T For some odd reason I really liked that scene when Ajuga was struggling and tearing the flesh of Karin. At first I was like "NO U BRAT! CALM THE F"CK DOWN!" xD and then I went to "D'awwww she just really cares for her 'take-ji" >.< Very well done :)

Btw about the newest Bleach chapters... I can't believe Stark is dead T^T He was such an awesome espada! How in the world did he dieeeee?? I really liked him during that espada arc, but then when I started reading ur fics, I liked him even more. I hate how kubo killed him off D':

Anyways how's your baby doing? Hopefully happy and healthy? Best regards I know I haven't sent a review for a long while but I have been reading ur fics as soon as the chps are out! I really love this story :D
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From ScarletScorn on March 26, 2012
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From ANON - Nightqueen on March 25, 2012
I didn't think I could hate that bastard Aizen more than I already did! This chapter just proved me wrong! My hate knows no bounds when it comes to that evil piece of crap!! He needs to pay and pay dearly! I just hope everyone that has found new families and people to love can band together and do something about this.... I can't even think of something evil enough to call him! LOL Terrific chapter!!!
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From ANON - Tokolosh� on March 25, 2012
The attack on Jushiro seems to be the catalyst that is needed for others to take action against Aizen (I can only hope). We at least have Stark now really taking notice. Love to see how this will affect the story now. Hope Jushiro will have some sight left and is not completely blinded. Don�t think Aizen will overlook anyone that helped Jushiro.

Glad that your pregnancy is going well although not so nice about feeling tired constantly.

About the question. I also think that there were definitely other survivors but don�t think that they will make an appearance soon. I am so looking forward to the next Manga chapter and hopefully more explanations. Think Ichigo is holding back information from his friends (Ishida).
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From try10 on March 25, 2012
I have to say that I've fallen in love with this story. Even if some ppl find a couple of scenes dark, I think that they are awesome. You need to have a lot of talend to write something like that. Sometimes when I read your story I imagine the pain that the characters feel. I really like the fact that they don't act OOC at all. :D Please continue writing it cause you are doing a great job. XD

This is the best Bleach fanfic I have ever read.
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From JOler on March 24, 2012
Love the chapter.

Poor Byakuya for having to put up with Yammey every night like that. Poor Karin for getting hurt while keeping Ajuga from being so reckless. And most of all, poor Jushiro for being attacked so viciously because he expressed concern for someone else to a person he felt needed to know and whom he thought might have a reason and way to help the distressed individual. Hopefully Karin is ok. Again, hopefully Gin, Szayel, and Starrk don't get reprimanded for aiding Jushiro. I wonder if this will finally start an underground movement to overthrow Aisen ... perhaps with the help of the hidden survivors. I know Orahime will be seriously distraught when she hears. I wonder if she will find a way to express her feelings that will actually reach Ulquiorra (ie If someone tried to hurt our son while you were gone and I did something to protect him but that made HIM angry enough to cripple me like that so I was useless in battle and at home would you still just accept it?!). As sweet as Jushiro is I'm sure many of the arrancar respect him highly. Some like Yammey and Barragan might not but most of the others probably do. If Karin and Jushiro are both unable to hold down the taichow post for a while (Unohanna might insist on bed rest for Karin too) who would cover the squad (they'd balk at an arrancar leading them).

I'd honestly like to see most of the supporters/friends/subordinates of Jushiro baracade themselves some place safe during the next attack so that the bugs are able to bypass the defenses (and the few who are fighting or being forced to fight) and let the bugs actually reach and destroy Aisen ... I know it won't happen but still. It would also be nice to see the command bugs find Karin when Szayel is near enough to overhear them. Even if she dismisses them he'd ask the all important questions "why is she so important?", "what do you want to do with her?", and if satisfied that it is in everyone's best interest (ok maybe not Aisen's or Yammey's or Barragan's) he'd be the one to realize this and possibly even ask "how can we help ... and still survive?"

Of course what I'd like to see the most is for Ajuga to visit Gin and sit her tushie on the throne then get a rush of power as it races to her, mama Karin, and papa Grimmjow ... and all away from Aisen (preferably leaving him weaker than a normal human). And then Orahime is given the go ahead to heal everyone while the ones who took too much pleasure in the pain of others got their due.

Also would still love to see Nnoitra freakout if Rangeku got preggers. Hmmm .. And Renji get his Zanpakto and soul back.
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From bleachfan7 on March 23, 2012
poor juushiro! aizen is so sadistic he can't even behave in his own best interest, preferring to shoot himself in the foot to satisfy his own disgusting bloodlust & ego. on the plus side, its another event that is gonna get the 'good' espada to eventually turn on aizen (we hope). also wondered when reading, given karin's wounds, why not have orihime reverse them instead of going to 4th, where treatment is gonna be to just patch her up. won't she be debilitated significantly for possibly weeks w/her arms & torso shredded? how is she gonna fulfill her work duties, fight if there's another bug attack, or just do the regular mom & home things, like the cooking & laundry & now also helping take care of blind juushiro? since i'm not reading current arc, not sure what you were referencing with nel (but yes, baby talk is hard to follow for long). happy & healthy continued gestation!
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From ANON - Nelarun on March 23, 2012
Oh my goodness.... This is honestly, the most amazing story in the Bleach fandom that I have EVER read. The characterisations are perfect, the situations are brutal but honest. I've been reading this for three days (a welcome relief from study) and wow. My heart cries for Byakuya and I am sincerely looking forward to Yammy's downfall. You are a master of the pen (or keyboard as the case may be). I love the emotions that I feel when I'm reading it, and though it's a long story (my favourite type) it honestly doesn't seem all that long. It's a surprisingly easy read - in spite of the darkness of several chapters, but darkness is good: the darker those chapters, but better the resolution is going to seem.

I love the idea of Claiming, it really is ingenious. Another concept that I really admired was the fact that you stressed that the Arrancar's treatment of this pets was no different to what many people endure every day.

I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter - hope your pregnancy goes well (and quickly by the sounds of it!). I honestly love the way you wrote everyone and the entire situation. My heart bleeds for Gin, but I look forward to him getting a happy ending(?).

Nelarun.
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From ScarletScorn on March 21, 2012
I had to come out of lurking to tell you that I love this story.

In all honesty I had given up on Bleach for a few years and while reading your story I had to constantly research who was who, haha, but it was well worth it and you even had me caught up in it enough that I went back and even re-read and caught myself up with the whole Bleach manga story line. I'm glad I had come to the Bleach fanfiction section on a whim, haha.

I look forward to reading future chapters and all your other stories and I will definitely be making time to make some fanart
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From bleachfan7 on March 17, 2012
can't wait till aizen gets his! really hope gin gets to be the one that makes him suffer. too bad ori can't draw ulqui's reiatsu like karin can from grimmy. the family scenes were awesome. baby is already too cool for school. guess he won't need to be burped every time either if he's gonna be chowing down when she's not awake.

hope gestation is going well.
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From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2012
Damn Aizen *continued muttering and weird speak about "karmic justice"* Please o' Please dear author, before the last page in this tale, wreak author sadism down on his head. And while I am already pushing my luck, please make Gin and Jushiro either find a woman for them or have a kind ending. Now back to reviewing. Excellent view of how unstable Aizen is, along with Gin cracking jokes despite undergoing torture that would leave most people gibbering madly in pain. Love the cuteness! So...much....... Believable family cuteness! Sob. My only complaint is that the reading of the chapter leaves one wanting more, as all good stories must. It is a good thing. Gift of the bard, check.
Can't wait till the next update!!
In eager anticipation,
TheMysticalFett
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