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By : NovaAlexandria
  • From moodymel on July 15, 2012
    Great update! I had a feeling that Nel might be able to help with Renji's situation, but I had no idea what a great chapter it would be. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see how you finally take Aizen out! Please update soon, again!
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  • From satterb on July 13, 2012
    This is one of my favorite chapters in this story. The beginning was hilarious. It was sooo cleverly put together. I loved how we get to see all the things that happened to and with Renji while he's passing the time. I also love the dynamics between Karin and Szayel. LOL And what a treat...I love Nel! The sex was beautiful and touching. Very believable. thank you for updating. I know you are very busy and it was a real treat to get an update!
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  • From ANON - Black Storm Van Pendragon on July 12, 2012
    Oh my god...oh the irony, now I know how dumbstruck Renji felt about Karin with Grimmjow and so forth, I'm being just like him there going: Nelliel and Renji.....Renji and Nelliel.....never saw that coming in a million light-years.....her fraccions are gonna flip.....oh my g--pfff....*chortles in amusement*
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  • From ANON - teddyboom on July 12, 2012
    I love ur stories I've been reading then for so long but nvr reviewed >.
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  • From moodymel on July 08, 2012
    Wow, all I can say is this is an epic story. I had to read it all before I could review and boy was it worth the wait. I can't wait til you kill Yammy off, because he deserves it. Hopefully his death and Aizen's will be suitably brutal. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Nightscream on July 06, 2012
    Love this fic, I look forward to each and every update. And congratulations on the beautiful healthy baby boy. :)
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  • From kadajclone on June 30, 2012
    Nice to finally see more or the escapees and is there any chance we could get a Soi Fon chapter? not complaining just curious cause were geting little bits and pieces of her and I'm surprised yuro didn't ask about her at all.
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  • From cori07 on June 24, 2012
    Aizen is such a bastard in this story! I love this story so much. But, Aizen makes me want to jump through my computer screen and kick his ass!
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  • From TotidemVerbis on June 23, 2012
    Hi! I'm a new reader/reviewer, and I just wanted to say that the past few days I have spent reading this were absolutely amazing! Although, I kept getting weird looks whenever I, uh, started yelling or cooing at my computer. lol. I've been on AFF before, but this is the very first Bleach story I've ever read on here. I can honestly say that I'm glad yours was the first! Putting Karin and Grimmjow together was a wonderful idea, because their personalities really do mesh well. And little Ajuga is just too adorable! I love how the whole plot has played out as well. This is also the first time I've read an "Aizen won" story. Well, I could gush all night, but I'll reign in it. You're a terrific writer, and I look forward to what comes up next.

    PS: Congrats on the new bundle of joy! My best friend just had a little boy of her own, and I attended a baby shower today, so I guess it must be baby season. lol.
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  • From ANON - bleachfan17 on June 23, 2012
    poor daeimus! please make it fixable--been dying to see him get some cute mini-ulqui type of dialogue. also, to have him be more emotionally demonstrative, at least with orihime. he can be as 'cold' or outwardly unemotional as ulqui with everyone else, but i'm hoping we get to see him be a momma's boy since he is half orihime, and she is so caring & compassionate & sweet-natured, etc. i'm so surprised you wrote him a disability. as anxious as ori is as a mom for his safety & well-being, i imagine we'll see that multiply when we next read their characters. we never got any follow-up with ori & ulqui regarding his using of the claim to prevent her from helping ukitake. i thought that scene had strong emotional impact & potential for finally getting ori to verbally explain how hurtful his actions are without intention because he's still not aware of human/arrancar differences. seems like a lot of strife & stress is gonna be coming up for all of the characters with the bug war & aizen's plots & cruelty, plus day to day stress of living in that world & being parents (or someone's pet & having to tolerate abuse, etc, depending on which character is being focused on). would be lovely to have ulquihime on same at the same level of emotional understanding & intimacy & openness that you've written grimkarin pairing as having. its so odd to have grim be more in-tuned with his mate, being the hyper aggressive--fight-seeking & rebellious creature he is--when compared to the "all-seeing" and much more analytical & reasoned ulquiorra. its something that lends itself to comedic potential actually, since grim can rub that in ulqui's face--i'm a better husband than you... the thought written for ori about wishing there was some way to return the claim made me hope that karin might show skill to manipulate another's reiatsu, so she could help ori return claim (without sex, like w/szayzel, or how you wrote its done w/kids).

    i love your version of grimmy. he's still feral & aggressive, but a great hubby & dad & fabulous, attentive lover! brash real men w/his type of qualities often are more concerned w/their own pleasure & would not be interested in anything beyond seeking own pleasure. wish i could find a grimmy in real life!

    hope pregnancy continues to go well & prep for arrival of little one is also going smoothly!
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  • From ANON - Ura on June 22, 2012
    Hmm. You up dated. Very nice. Very nice. Sad for the kid though. No voice. Also, Ichigo needs to fight back and Karin needs to take the thrown. Or at least learn of it. If this was a book you would be on book 2 by now and the main plot point would be barley started. No rush though and happy baby time!
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  • From Quietreaper on June 21, 2012
    loved the new chapter orihime kinda freaked out a bit but he was gonna learn how to truly fly sooner or later and i think ulquiorra got a little annoyed with her about the stress he felt from her. gotta love grim and his stress relieving ideas haha im gonna love when ichigo truly finds out whats going on between them i have a feeling his hollow if gonna have the best chance he ever had to take over at that point lol. cant wait to see the next chapter :D
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  • From ANON - TeamGRIMMYKINS6 on June 16, 2012
    I swear, i get so worked up reading this story. I go from loving the crap out of a sex craved Grimmjow, to wanting to crack Yammy's skull open with a brand new hammer, to wanting to be in Orihime/Tatsuki/Rangiku shoes, to wanting all hell to be released on Aizen. He hurt my Szay Szay !! He Will Paaayyy! Oh yeah! Renji's back, sooooo awesome! This story is my addiction.

    Congrats on the Pregnancy, come back soon and update because i miss your writting so much! DX
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  • From Aviary on June 14, 2012
    That was an awesome chapter, poor Renji at least he's no longer soulless. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'd be interested in seeing a bit more of Soi Fon, I wonder if Barran will take that advice he was given just a few short chapters ago.

    That's great your ok! I bet that was a scary time for you though. I'm glad you and your baby are okay. Ever 3-4 hours is normal and their is such a development in the medical care that is given to premies. It's great. In the 1990's you had the experimental cow saliva so the babies lungs wouldn't stick together. My sister and I were born in that time. 25 weekers, only weighing a pound and a few ounces (1 pound 5 ounces and 1 pound 11 ounces). I hope things get easier for you! You'll fall into a rhythm I've been told, it's rather interesting.
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  • From ANON - Namika on June 10, 2012
    That's amazing!!!! Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    A baby boy, that's great! I kind of envy you, because I dream of having a boy!
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