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Reviews for Reflection

By : Mirrors1984
  • From Bleachwhore on January 02, 2011
    Thank you for updating. I did write you two long reviews while i was reading last night, but the site was acting up and refused to let me post them. I am sorry i flipped out, your story had me really emotional though. It grips me, and doesnt let me go. I couldnt stop thinking about it. Anyway sorry again, ill ask nicely this time, please please please continue!
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on October 25, 2010
    just wondering if the story would be finished (especially given A.N. about being tired of unfinished dark ichi/hime stories)...
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  • From brainfear on October 18, 2010
    Gah! You must continue this soon!

    ch20
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  • From NeemaAdaeze on September 18, 2010
    Nice!
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  • From NeemaAdaeze on September 15, 2010
    Nice!
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on September 15, 2010
    hurray for hime calling out rukia (despite first having to get beaten down)! Was waiting for this scene with baited breath. Thought the number of physical strikes should have been more equitable but I hope hime's one was a nice solid wollop... will this have an hichiXhimeXichi vibe? just wondering if now that ichi's eyes are opened (and I hope he was conscious during the rukia/hime fight & heard it all, including the fact that rukia went after him only after learning hime loved him) will he really SEE hime & have real feelings for her?
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  • From Vidori on September 12, 2010
    You're not being too harsh on her at all! I actually think that this is too damn realistic. Everyone is acting/responding as I would imagine them doing. I'm glad you like my image of her on a pike. XD

    Also, Ulqiuorra! Omg, I can't wait to read that one. I'll be sad when this one finishes, but all good things must come to an end.

    You've done so beautifully well. I'm sure your next will be nothing but spectacular!
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on September 12, 2010
    my review is longer than your chap--almost.

    Wow, short but AWESOME chapter. The reveal at last & confrontation was flawless ('cept wish hime had not been slapped, rather shiro steps in & saves her in my imagination). Still want someone to call Rukia out on her f'd up behavior--hime is too nice to do it, & shiro isn't in control, but now that the sh't has hit the fan, maybe tatsuki or one of the other nakama can provide rukia w/an accurate presentation of how f'd up she was, objectively speaking. Some lessons need to be painful, & right now even though she had that brief mental insight of the now occurring b/c of past affair, she seems to be very easily deflecting the blame again. To call hime a whore for behavior that is less grievous than her own is an order of magnitude greater than calling her a hypocrite (don't know enough vocab to find what is worse than regular hypocrite label). Love how you write the characters & their internal thoughts/emotions--makes them really easy to imagine & 3-dimensional. Please let poor shiro/hichi catch a break--him I'm very sympathetic towards, despite how harsh he can be w/hime--that's just their kink, but he clearly cares for her in his own way--her sadness is like acid to him--love that imagery. Great job.
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  • From Erosu787 on September 12, 2010
    It's P.ours and thanks for reviewing my fic, so sweet any how on an important note your two last chapters BLEW ME AWAY. How bad I wanted Rukia to find out this way and I knew it that she had an affaire with Kaien. Woah good one. I am impressed with this storyline I kind of dont want it to end.

    Posase bring moré!
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  • From NeemaAdaeze on September 12, 2010
    Nice!
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  • From Vidori on September 12, 2010
    *puts Rukia on a pike and dances around*

    Burn her! Ha ha, just kidding. I actually loved this chapter, but I guess that's nothing new. I loved the way you wrote Rukia going slowly crazy.

    His eyes, oh god, the eyes. *shivers*

    Perfect!
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on September 11, 2010
    Well, in reference to rukia in this fic, knowledge she was the "other woman" in the past w/a married man--not even a boyfriend, but a husband, makes her pain at moment her karmic due. I already thought she had it coming for going after a man she knew her friend was in love w/especially w/hindsight knowledge that ichi was dense as poop & just hadn't "seen" orihime before. W/o rukia chasing him, he probably would have ended up w/ori. So now its doubly offensive w/knowledge of affair. So, hard to be sympathetic. She may not be evil, but her behavior was f'd up, so she's now feeling the pain her actions inflicted on the women that were supposedly friends. Repeat, really hard to feel sympathy, its more like satisfaction of cosmic payback (though only in fic do people really get what they deserve, unfortunately). Can't wait for next chap.
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  • From NeemaAdaeze on September 11, 2010
    Aw, I really like this story. It's one of those stories that get me more and more curious at every chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From brainfear on September 07, 2010
    Holy cow, English is your 2nd language?! No kidding. You write so well; like you were born in an English-speaking country.

    Anyway, more please! I want more juicy smut! *lips smacking*


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  • From lenabear9 on September 04, 2010
    very interesting pairing! 17 soon!
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