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By : crunchysalad
  • From Qiedia on January 11, 2011
    Yay, it's updated again! This was such a yummy chapter and I am so glad that Ichigo finally got his wish fullfilled, it was really hot if I may say so. I read you author's note in the begininng and I just gotta say I am so glad that you decided to post this fic, despite that you were afraid of what people would say about it, beacuse this story rock my socks. And the dirty talk is amazing, not at all cringe but instead totally hot. :)

    I just gotta say that I think it was so cute when Byakuya asked Ichigo (or rather demanded) to borrow Grimmy. I was sure that he had been scared for life after that session but I am glad to see that he wasn't. And it's really gonna be exciting to see who the knew client is. I have my suspicion that it might be Ulquiorra but since I am wrong most of the time I guess I'll just have to wait and see. ;P

    Anyway, this was really a great chapter and I am looking forward to see what will happen in the next. Now when I think about it, that will be the tenth chapter. Way to go CrunchySalad! You've done an amazing work with this story. :)
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  • From ANON - mangofox on January 11, 2011
    Its ulqui, isn't it? Yeah, its ulqui, trying to steal ichi away from grimm. >)

    Anyway, phew! -fans self- this story it hot, definitely looking forward to more.

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  • From ANON - Cricket on January 11, 2011
    Heh, I didn't mean to sound tooo demanding in my previous comment.xD I just got a little carried away.. I do that sometimes.. can't wait for the next chapter. Glad I inspired you.xD I loved this one. =D Daw, I think Grimmy is getting a little sweet on Ichi.x3 Takin' him into the bath by themselves, then wantin' to carry Ichi 'cause he thinks he'll look cute, but still screwin' him senseless whenever he can.xDD And HA! at Ichi smaking Byaku. Ichi pimpin' Grimmy out.. for some reason the phrase "slap a bitch" comes to my mind, don't know who it's referring to.xD
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  • From satterb on January 10, 2011
    Yes! Yes! I love that dirty talk! I found it incredibly sweet that Grimmjow had noticed that Ichigo wanted to go to the hotsprings together! I also thought it was sweet that Byakuya has a crush on Grimmy! LOL thanks for updating. I love this story, and I look forward to more of it and ALL your other stories! Thanks for all your hard work!
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  • From ANON - Tokoloshe on January 10, 2011
    Hot chapter. Can not wait for Ichigo to get back to Tokyo now! Love to meet the new athlete.
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  • From ANON - Amy on January 10, 2011
    Oh wait I remember now that you said your were gonna write a one-shot in this universe with Kensei and Shuuhei ; so maybe you're not gonnagive Shuuhei a "big" role in this fic ... I don't make any sense, haha. This mystery man is mysterious xD
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  • From ANON - Amy on January 10, 2011
    Ah, I feel like the last chapter was aaaaaages ago ! I needed my fix, haha x)
    And it's so so~ good, as always.

    And now I'm really wondering who that next athlete is ... As a huuuge Shuuhei fan, I'm kinda hoping it's him xD Oh, well, I guess it could be anyone, you'd make it hot xD (or well, maybe not anyone anyone xD)

    Anyway ^-^
    Can't wait for more =D
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  • From nivell on January 10, 2011
    Oh my god, Byakuya actually had the guts to ask Ichigo to pimp/loan out Grimm?? I'm sad that Ichigo didn't agree!! Lol, looks like Byakuya has a lil crush, or the sex may have just blew his mind away, hahha. I would love to see another Grimm/Byakuya scene since your Byakuya seems like he would be a freak in bed!
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  • From FlyinGShadoW1314 on January 10, 2011
    Argh, YES fer onsen sex! Ah, I've been waiting fer an update on this. Tanks so much fer posting! This fic is just utter debauchery and I luv it~

    Also, I really, REALLY hope his potential new client is not Ulquiorra. DX And if it is, he won't have a deal with him like he does Grimmjow and that he'll stay mostly with Grimm. Loyalties, man! Haha. :D
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  • From ANON - Hitsuzen on December 31, 2010
    Fantasy porno land it may be but this is THE hottest and most eagerly awaited fanfiction I'm reading at the moment (and I read ALOT of fic!).

    It's SO good that I've even started trying to hunt down a copy of the Cincada manga that you based it on! I can't wait for the next update and for more of Ichigo's reactions to Grimmjows increasingly high-handed manipulation of his 'toy' (that punch was BRILLIANT by the way!) and Bya-kun's reaction to the whole situation. While it may be awkward to the extreme I cant help but hold out hope that Ichi will be able to sign Bya as a client (and possibly as a prelude to meeting Renji or Kenpachi for more Twink!Bya porn!).

    Keep up the good work and Happy New Year!
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  • From Lethargy on December 27, 2010
    I love the dialogue in this chapter! That was the perfect way to end it, too. XD
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  • From ANON - kat on December 19, 2010
    Next chapter soon?
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  • From ANON - Nivell on December 19, 2010
    Normally, I am not an Ichigo uke fan but this was just too damn hot. Your Grimm is a sex machine...and now that you have brought Byakuya into the frame, I would love to see some Ken/Bya action soon. Byakuya does need a good dicking in that perfect slutty hole. =)
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  • From ANON - xpinkcloudx on December 19, 2010
    I'm more GrimmUlq fan but this pairing is okay too...and I like the way you write them here. I'm enjoying this a lot. Oh my, the way you write the sex scenes..very hot. Your Grimmjow is perfection...I love the dialogue. Some of the things he says is how I imagine he'd be if Bleach really was filled with yaoi smex.. My fave guy in Bleach Renji..I'm so glad he's here.. cute the way he's all embarrassed.. I was hoping he and Byakuya would somehow get together...but oh well..Grimmjow sure gets a lot of action but who would want to be with him..such a hottie. I most definitely will keep reading this.
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  • From ANON - Pickles on December 16, 2010
    Argh argh arggghhh! Ichi really needs to get laid in the hot springs! Rawrrrrr!!
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