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Reviews for House Arrest

By : Morales89
  • From Raymy on September 07, 2012
    Here's another plea to continue with this story. It appears that you had every intention of doing so last summer but must have got bogged down in real life. I hope you still have a muse for it. I would love to see it completed. (check mark in the little box on the to do list is so satisfying) First person narrative, almost "Interview with an Arrancar", is usually a bit more than I can handle but I've really grown to enjoy it. I like how each couple slowly develops toward the consummation of their needs. I expect that the remaining unwritten chapters could well be mind blowing as you've teased the readers along toward this end. Don't leave us hanging and unsatisfied. Bring us our release!
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  • From jennipea on September 04, 2011
    I'm only on chapter 2, but I'm really enjoying your story,so far. I am amazed, because I usually skip any story written in First Person Narrative...especially fanfiction, because I often find that my idea of what a character might be thinking or feeling in any given situation, and the writer's idea don't often sync-up. However, I think that you've definitely nailed Grimmjow's inner dialogue.

    I haven't read all of the previous reviews for this story, so it may have been pointed out to you earlier, but the super-smart, super-powerful Hollows with the broken masks are called A-r-r-a-n-c-a-r, not a-r-r-a-c-n-a-r. I know, it seems like a nit-picky sort of thing to point out; however, the spelling is wrong in every iteration I've seen in your story so far, which leads me to believe that it's not just a typo that you're making, but a misconception.

    It wouldn't be a big deal, except that every time I run across the misspelling, my brain automatically pauses to correct it, and it interrupts the flow of your story.

    Your author's notes indicate that you have at least one beta, so it might be a good idea to make sure they know to double-check for that misspelling, when they give your new chapters the once-over.

    Other than that one insignificant thing, your story is completely making me happy. Keep up the good work!
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  • From vbruce on September 02, 2011
    Your work is greatly appreciated. I know how much RL can get in the way when you're too exhausted to think much less type. Thank you for continuing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2011
    I got so excited when I saw that this had been updated, but then I was bummed that it wasn't a chapter. Anyway I'm so happy you're continuing the story!! Can't wait for more. This is one of my favorite stories on AFF.net!!
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  • From ANON - Saki-chan on March 17, 2011
    Oh please tell me that you are still continuing this? I adore this story!
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  • From segundaetapa on February 06, 2011
    You really need to update this, I loved it :3
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 29, 2011
    Totaly,Totaly love this fic...Keep
    up the grate work....MORE CHAPPIES
    PLEASE...X)
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  • From venicenichols on August 10, 2010
    Oh Grimm-kitty, I hope your new job doesn't take too much time from your writing, because I can't wait long for more chapters. You are on my favorites list at fan fiction.net (if you're that Grimm-kitty)and I haven't figured out how to make you a favorite here. This story is amazing.
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  • From TheReapersMule on July 16, 2010
    Oh. My. God.
    I clicked on this thinking it was going to be some silly fan-girl induced smut fic but...It is so much better than that!
    I have to say that I am actually very impressed with the fiction so far and I can not wait until you update it. I would though, like to see some more
    focus on Stark and Kira. There isn't really much of them through the chapters.
    KEEP GOING!
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  • From vbruce on July 15, 2010
    Huzzah for a new chapter. Very happy to see this one. Sorry it took so long for the review. Excellent work as usual. Very interested to see how everything plays out.
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  • From ANON - Chanii on July 10, 2010
    Okay, I love this fic! I have read this from the beginning and I am so sorry I haven't reviewed until now. Anywho, I love the pairing and how you make them make sense. I sincerely hope your muse continues to whisper in your ear for this fic. Thanks!
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  • From NettChan on July 07, 2010
    YES! a quick update! I loved Renji in this chapter! He's so blunt and tactless, but thats what I love about him!
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  • From ANON - Jordan C on July 06, 2010
    Hey love the story and so glad you updated and really hope you keep it going ;)
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  • From NettChan on July 06, 2010
    HELL YEAH I'm still reading this! Don't quit on me now, the story's gettin so good!!!
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  • From Sindy on July 06, 2010
    such a yummy lime XDDd oh and I feel sorry for halybell
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