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Reviews for Kiss and Control

By : orionshadow
  • From Anithene on July 21, 2010
    Very glad to see this updated. I'm interested to see where this will end up going, can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - P.Ours on July 09, 2010
    Another beautifully written chapter, it amazes me how IC you keep Byakuya honestly you have a great talent. To read one of your fics is always a great literary pleasure since your prose is so well coordinated with the main character's situation. Cant wait when things start getting steamy. I really look forward of you updating this soon
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  • From Catarotta on July 09, 2010
    Omg! So happy to see a new chapter. Loved it. You're doing well to keep them in character, yet slowly work in how Byakuya would begin to change. Keep up the good work! Can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From Jennyt82 on July 03, 2010
    Yay for more chapters!! I wasn't sure you'd continue with this story but i'm glad that you have. Good Byakuya fics are few and far between and you have to know that i hold your writing in the highest esteem. =) I think this one has great potential. I liked Byakuya's meeting excuse i doubt it'll work a second time but i'd love to know what Ran was thinking at the time. Give us another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - P.ours on June 11, 2010
    This fic surely surpassed my expectations by miles considering the odd pairing but your storyline is very believable. I praise your ability to keep everyone especially Byakuya in character to even his proper manner of speech, which very few authors can do. I look forward to following this story as I have greatly enjoyed your excellent grammer and unique plot. I want to remind you that this fic is worth continuing. You have made me a fan so please continue soon
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  • From ANON - Catarotta on May 27, 2010
    I adored this. I hope you update soon. I'm a huge fan of rRan with Bya. I hope you keep the story going because its really interesting.
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  • From ANON - Hae on May 06, 2010
    AHHHH MORE
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  • From Jennyt82 on March 29, 2010
    I've got to admit i'm intrigued by the concept of a Byakuya/ Rangiku fic. I've never read one before but seeing as this is you i have every confidence it'll be fantastic, it's already off to a running start!!
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  • From ANON - taixi on March 28, 2010
    I really like how you allowed Matsumoto's inner thoughts to come through, demonstrating the depth and deliberation below her superficially flighty behavior toward her captain (turns out she's been looking out for him and doing her duties as a VC, to support and back up her captain, but in a nontraditional and underappreciated manner). It's not at all implausible but difficult to execute in a believable manner; you've done an excellent job. Also I'm finding this version of Byakuya is a great deal more likable than the one in the Different Circumstances universe (I don't know what you have planned for the future in that story, but as it is now he's quite unappealing based on his reaction to Kiyone et al).
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