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By : Darkprism
  • From darklynoon on April 19, 2011
    Sweet Lord... This was amazing!
    Not only you had me glued to my laptop for four hours straight, reading every single sentence at least twice. You also made me change my panties three times. This was without a doubt one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Even as an original story it would be very pleasurable to read. The characters are well developed and their relationship feels very real and natural.
    Passionate, rough, fluffy and at times heart-wrenching. Very well balanced and not overdone or cheesy.
    You really have a way with words, I love the way you describe thoughts, atmosphere and emotions with such a colourful vocabulary.
    This story made me laugh, cry, shiver and cum in my pants. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of art.
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  • From Demykinzluv5434 on December 04, 2010
    That was freakin' AWESOME!
    Loved the way it was written, and especially liked the ending :P

    great work and keep at it :)
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  • From ANON - Kagome on August 31, 2010
    Wonderful, simply wonderful. I was utterly surprised that you managed to keep them into character even if it was an AU story. I don't think there are more than three or four Bleach fanfictions that I've ever really liked and now I can proudly put yours between them. It was deliciously explicit, with a pinch of angst and good humor. You really made my day ... and night ^.^ I'm dearly looking forward to reading more from you!
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  • From TokiMirage on May 25, 2010
    DUUDE!! omfg that is some of the HOTTEST SHIT I have read in for fucking EVER!!!!!! *wipes sprays of drool off her screen*

    HOT. DAAAAAYMN! *still reeling from the hotness* I can't be more eloquent than that. Hot. Fuckin. DAMN.
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  • From ANON - Maja on May 24, 2010
    I feel like there should be a sequel to this or that you should find someone to go with Shuu (Kensei?). Overall it was awesome and I'd love to see you do something like this again!!
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  • From zhanghii on May 12, 2010
    Superb. This is one of the best (and wonderfully written) ByakuyaxRenji stories I have read. Amazing descriptions and great use of the English language. The ending put a smile on my face. I can only hope you will write more stories in the future.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2010
    Well damn, thank you for one of the, if not the best ByakuRen stories ever =D
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 04, 2010
    I fucking love this story!!! That was such a good ending! Bravo!!
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  • From ObsidianJade on May 03, 2010
    Much as I'm sad to see it end - and I actually did cry 'oh, no!' out loud when I saw 'Final' noted on this chapter's heading - that was the sweetest, most perfectly lovely ending one could have asked for. This story will remain a perennial favorite for all the right reasons; exquisite writing, detailed plot, dead-on characterization, and of course screen-meltingly hot sex sequences.

    I hope this means we will soon be looking forward to your next installment in the Bleach fandom?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 03, 2010
    Another awesome story, like I have to tell you. I could only imagine all the things Byakuya and Renji did for two whole weeks in that hotel. So hot. Anyway, I loved it!
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  • From ObsidianJade on April 24, 2010
    Better than ever! I love the little details you work in, like the origin of the beads that Byakuya wears. And of course, the, ah, larger details.

    Also, a suggestion/request, although I don't know what your limits are with your writing, but I would love, love, love to see Renji fisting Byakya at some point along the line. We already know Byakuya's a kinky bugger with a bit of a masochistic streak, so he'd probably get off on it, and Renji would probably have just as much fun doing it. As I said, only a though to take as you see fit. Delighting in the story as always.
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  • From ANON - Anna on April 17, 2010
    Dear Darkprism!
    I have been following this story for a while now and I must show my gratitude for such quality work as the one you presented us with. It`s a rare occurrence that such intense and easily visualized writing is found and every time I do manage to come across something more than the usual I take the time to look into the author`s other posts. I must congratulate you again for your unbelievable talent and skill, and though I know nothing of you I can only imagine that you are a brilliant person and will continue to follow your work here on AFF. I wish you the most prolific career as a writer and hope you will continue to keep us entertained for we, your fans, are greatly appreciating your efforts.
    Love and a huge thumbs up,
    Anna
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  • From jordash00 on April 14, 2010
    While I cannot even begin to delve into the psyche of the characters you have created here in Renji and Byakuya because I am still a bit on edge regarding where you are taking this with the plot, I can comment on a few things....

    As usual, you continue to have me in awe with your gift in bringing forth emotions so vividly, not through words, but with gestures and descriptions of movement. I say this referring to the interaction of the two characters in chapter 7. It was not with words that Byakuya's inner turmoil or struggles was related to me, nor was Renji's strong desire and need for "reality" and "gravity" to set in; rather the gestures of these men through narration was this communicated to me as a reader. The tightening of an arm, the caress of a cheek, a body facing forward, "a little exasperated puff of air", a thumb caressing a jaw, a joining of hands, etc., etc. These are but a few of many, but hopefully my point has gotten across.

    Also, along the same lines, the intimacy you have created between these two characters who have yet to truly get to know one another on "any" level has left me quite speechless, and once again you have achieved this through gestures as opposed to dialogue and narration telling us so.

    As this story continues, I truly hope to take the plunge and "get into" the minds of these men. (highlighter and tea in hand)

    As with your other stories, your attention to detail, plot, and characterization is nothing short of breathtaking, and if that little "liason" in chapter 6 is but a taste into the sexual realm of this world that you have created with these two men...........

    Once again, my lovely Darkprism I humbly bow at your feet!
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  • From ANON - BRfangirl4ver aka MyRedPineapple@LJ on April 06, 2010
    I don’t want anybody but Byaku. And everyone else pales in comparison.
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  • From ANON - ByakuyaRenjiFangirl4ever on April 06, 2010
    I don’t want anybody but Byaku. And everyone else pales in comparison.
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