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By : Darkprism
  • From jordash00 on March 17, 2010
    Mmmmhmmmm!

    There is just something absolutely primal and delicious about that Abarai Renji. I am not quite sure if it is the tattoos or the wild child attitude, but seeing either that smirk or sneer just puts me in a mood of utter submission.... and in YOUR hands and in YOUR world of Monoshizukanohi where CARNAL and HEDONISTIC indulgence is the norm..... mmmmmm. I lick my lips, lower my eyes, and kneel at your feet in anticipation of up and coming chapters.

    For you see, I detest the depection of the fiery and beautiful redhead in the anime and manga as he is brash, brutish, and ignorant. Even in fiction he is often portrayed as the poor street rat who lacks manners and must be subdued and whipped into shaped by one stoic and untouchable Kuchiki Byakuya - Boohoo!

    In your first chapter, you have given me the primal and delicious redhead that I desire and believe Renji to be. He is the hunter, entreprenuer, intelligent, and deliciously sexual human being. And most importantly, when pit against one uptight Brunette, does not cower in a coner but goes after what he wants! I will admit there was some submission there, but was it not on equal ground! A bit of give and take if you will!

    I have not been so excited for a story in a very long time! These two are absolutely heavenly, and I anticipate some sort of powerplay between them considering the world of Monoshizukanohi and Byakuha's words, "Most call me, 'Sir'." Which in your world can mean many things.
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  • From Yakumo on March 16, 2010
    I liked this a lot! So much smut. */////*
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  • From ANON - xgangsofasiax on March 16, 2010
    Is this just a one shot or will there be more?! OMG, I love these two together and I hope super duper mucho that you write more of this!! I'd like to see what happens when Byakuya actually calls Renji and what Rukia's reaction would be when she found out. The fact that Bya walked out without saying anything made me laugh.
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