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Reviews for Emerald Sun

By : rosuki
  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 16, 2011
    i love grimmy! he & tatsuki have been paired a couple of times & they complement each other well if you were looking for a side pairing for this fic that's not the same old cliche.

    the ulquihime scene was lovely. it was sweet how neither is experienced & are figuring it out as they go, working off instincts. love how ulqui is so much more open around her, and how she is more take-charge than around nakama/school mates.
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  • From KiraSahari on January 15, 2011
    hahahahaa that was so funny, Ulqui is so adorable asking questions like a three year old xD mmmmmmmmmm it would be very interesting to read how much he is going to learn about "pleasure" from Orihime hahahaha thank you so much for sharing, I love the way you mix your ideas with the original story, great job!!, take care, tons of love, XoXo.
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 15, 2011
    well nice that he's good to stay in LW. honestly prefer keeping focus on 2 main characters. the little bit that went into ichi & ruk i didn't care for (don't like pairing, but that's just me). i am much more interested in the ulquihime interaction in LW and how he'll adjust, plus it was mentioned in a.n. that hime would be preggers, so interested in how that plays out of course.
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  • From KiraSahari on January 15, 2011
    Love your story!! Glad you like the pics, they look so adorable together, I would love to see them with tons of babies hahahaha I agree with you that Ulquiorra would help Orihime to be stronger, the opposite of Ichigo, he always is trying to protect her, that only makes her depend on him all the time but I felt that Ulquiorra would be more like Rukia, he would help Orihime to be stronger, he would have pushed her to be more confident in herself and her powers =) and Orihime would have been so good to him, she is so sweet and kind, all the love she could have given him *sigh* They were perfect for each other. Thanks so much for sharing and writing so fast!! Can't wait for next chapter. Tons of love!! XoXo.
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 15, 2011
    yikes! will baby be from rape or from ulqui? since just days apart, guess won't know till birth (not sure if prenatal testing can determine father)... happy he's back & with her, though.
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  • From KiraSahari on January 15, 2011
    Loooooooooooooooooooove it!!! thank you, thank you, thank youuuuuuuuu!
    You want cute pics??
    http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lb4mi2SOIO1qe0vlfo1_500.jpg
    and I loveeeeeeeeee this one
    http://img403.imageshack.us/i/familydaybyruskybozd316.jpg/

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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 15, 2011
    read several chaps in sequence till this last one w/ulqui's death. its still sad to read that scene, though here it ends w/determination to bring him back. its also sad the boys don't understand her grief--but how could they. they don't know all she's been thru, or what he's prevented from happening to her. it would be nice if they had more faith in her though--if you risk you life to rescue someone, if you find them worthy enough for that, have faith they have a legit reason for their actions.

    seem to be more errors in last few chaps read, maybe b/c when on a roll to get ideas down type really fast or dictate if using speech-to-text software to catch things (like through instead of threw). if ever go back thru chaps, might take time to re-proof & edit, but not needed at moment...

    look forward to next chap.
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  • From KiraSahari on January 14, 2011
    Love it! It's hard work to try to make it work, to agree with the real story but at the same time add your ideas =) really hoping Ulqui is going to have a happy ending! T.T But you are the auhor and it is your story, this will go where you want it to go! Thanks for sharing and updating so soon! Tons of love! XoXo.
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  • From Mirrors1984 on January 14, 2011
    I liked how Ulqui and Hime got together to overwrite their traumas especially when such a huge turning point is looming. I'm really wondering what you have planned (I'm getting anxious at the thought of it actually! I keep thinking 'something-something is going to happen and I'm gonna cry myself to sleep just thinking about it (I'm an emotional masochist and sometimes sad endings just leave a huge impact in me that just keeps my head running)'... (won't tell because that might be where you're going and I don't want to give you away. LOL. Seeing the drama and emotions in here, I can't help but keep wondering.) The suspense is killing me now! Gah!
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  • From KiraSahari on January 14, 2011
    Ok, you have three options, one, you change the end and he is not killed (you will not be the first writer to keep him alive), second, you keep true to the end and kill him (please don't do it T.T) and third, you kill him but find a way to bring him back. Love the story, if someone was able to show love to Ulquiorra it was Orihime, I was devastated when he died, they were perfect for each other, she would have teach him how to love and he would have teach her to be strong, they were good for each other =( take care, thanks for sharing and hope to read you soon =)
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  • From Mirrors1984 on January 13, 2011
    Wow! For Ulquiorra to be going through that came totally unexpected to me, but its a good way to show why he's so cold and detached. Sometimes sex is a show of domination, a physical way of proving yourself or mind-control. I do like the fact that both him and Orihime kind of share the same experience and this could help them develop a relationship. Their pain brings them together. =)
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 12, 2011
    felt so bad for poor ulqui. their moment of togetherness & comfort was so sweet. can't wait for them to finally take it to next level since neither has experienced lovemaking. should be super tender to understand intimacy is supposed to feel good to you & you feel good making your partner feel good too.
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  • From Mirrors1984 on January 12, 2011
    I have to admit that I found Orihime's and Ulquiorra's interaction cute (since he doesn't understand humans and kind of takes things too literal and questions it). Loved it!
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 10, 2011
    i did read about half of rape chap till he started getting more vicious, then skimmed over rest skipping over what i expected to be too much.

    the last chap was very satisfying. grim may be battle hungry but he's so arrogant i think the idea of forcing himself on anyone would be insulting. i agree he wouldn't agree w/idea of rape. it was touching to see him protective & caring but still needing to save face/keep image by saying things in a callous way. wonder if he'll be portrayed as big brother type or if he'll develop romantic feelings for hime.

    ulqui's inner revulsion at sight of hime's injuries while keeping his features reactionless seemed perfectly in character (if ulqui was developing feelings for her). wonder if hime will follow aizen's command not to heal her hymen. guess she has to since she doesn't know if he'll repeat assault. but if she does, she could ask ulqui (or grim) to re-deflower her to attempt to overwrite the memories.

    look forward to next chap.
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  • From Mirrors1984 on January 09, 2011
    I'll admit that writing rape scenes is hard (I wrote one for my Grimm/Oc and I almost cried at make my female character go through that.), but I have a feeling that this event could play an important role in the story. Like a drama effect since Orihime will needs lot's of comfort and healing. I still like that you kept Ulquiorra in character, but how is he going to act around Orihime after what his 'lord' has done? Hmmm... So many questions.
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