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Reviews for Pedestals

By : Starspear
  • From GudenMulle on April 15, 2010
    I understand your frustration at not getting reviews, so I'll give you one.
    Well, I usually don't read OC, because they tend to be Mary Sue, but I thought I'd give this one a chance, since I think you write very well :). Kiku is Mary Sue-ish, but not so bad that I'm leaving this for good. Their (the girls') names confuse me, I feel like a moron because I can't tell who is who, unless it says Kiku XD. Are you going to continue?
    Now: guessing who did it! Hmm.... Not Gin, not Tousen, not Hitsugaya (becuase I simply REFUSE to believe that), not Komamura (nooo, he's a fluffy man-fox-bear-thing. it's all about justice and what Genruiysai, I can't spell that name) to him, he wouldn't), not Ukitake (just NO!), not Shunsui (because I mean, come on, he is a flirtatious, ass-grabbing, sake-drinking man, but NOT a rapist), not Byakuya (he is tied on hands and feet by his honor), Aizen... no, it's just too obvious, especially with the way that Gin is thinking about Aizen's plan, and making Gin look like the ultimate bad-guy and stuff.. Which leaves Mayuri. But again, no... So now that I've concluded that none of the taicho's did it, here's another possibility: Someone WEARING a captain-haori(is that what they are called?) could've done it! (Yes, I'm just that desperate, I don't know XD)
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  • From Kazeshini on October 30, 2009
    Hmmm in character I'm thinking it could only be either Aizen or Kurotsuchi... But the name of the story "Pedestals" makes me think of Aizen, because before his betrayal everyone loved him. Or perhaps that was in reference to all the captains being assumed as honorable and above such acts, ne?
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  • From Tiptipnaway on October 29, 2009
    *hugs Gin* whew. Well it would have been to obvious for it to be Gin. So lets see lets see. My next choice is Mayuri, again another obvious choice. So it would have to be a Captain no one would expect. Byakuya and Ukitake then...Oh but I don't see that ever ever happening. Then Aizen is someone they would never see coming. Hmm.... Well, I think my choice is going to have to be Mayuri. Followed by Aizen. >.< but i don't knooooow
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on October 29, 2009
    That's quite alright. I usually check AFF a couple times a day if I have nothing else to do (which, right now, means I procrastinate like crazy when I should be writing, but that's besides the point).
    Hmm, not Gin, definitely not Konamura, not Yamamoto (though if I'm wrong he's a damn good actor). Dear lord, I have a sneaking suspicion that it's gonna be someone completely unexpected...
    Hmm, I'm torn between Byakuya or Ukitake, but I'm gonna have to lean towards Byakuya, cause he's the LAST person anyone would ever suspect. Then again, no one would ever expect Ukitake either..damn! Okay, Byakuya?
    I'm ruling out Mayuri cause that would be another obvious choice, as would Aizen and Tousen. Same goes for Kenpachi and distantly, Shunsui. To be fair, I'm not completely ruling out Hitsugaya just yet; he has got to be frustrated that everyone looks at him as a kid when he's not--but I can't see him as a rapist. So yeah, I'm down to Ukitake and Byakuya.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on October 29, 2009
    And again--beautiful! I changed my mind--not Gin. Not at all, cause that would be too easy after this chapter. It's going to be someone unexpected, someone no one would ever suspect...hmm, I have to think more on this.
    One problem I had was the fact for a minute I couldn't understand why the two girls hated each other so much when in the first chapter they had been best friends; I'm glad you cleared that up, but maybe a note that this is a year later?
    Anyway, I think you've got a great deal of skill as a writer, and I look forward to reading more of your work, especially in this particular fic.
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  • From Kazeshini on October 29, 2009
    I don't know... I just can't think that it was Gin... I have to admit, I was surprised that it "came out" so soon. Don't get me wrong, it's good because one could easily lose interest but after this chapter I'll be back to see how things unfold :D
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  • From Tiptipnaway on October 29, 2009
    BWAAAA! I know I think it was Gin but I hope it wasn't. ;_;
    This is a good story. Bleach murder/rape mysteries are a rare find. Done right they can turn out great. I look forward to more.
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  • From Kazeshini on October 28, 2009
    Hmm, it's hard to say... I'm thinking Aizen, but only because of the Zanpakatou threw her chest... I mean if someone really did that she would die right, but Aizen could make her think it happened. Hmmm tricky... :p Nice writing though. Defiantly got me interested :)
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  • From Tiptipnaway on October 27, 2009
    AH, it was Gin. ~.^ I'm not a fan of OC stories, but I'll give it a chance. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on October 27, 2009
    *clasp* Very nice beginning. I don't usually like OCs, but yours is quite well-written (funny, I should like OCs since I'm a novelist in my other life, but I've read too much badfic over the past few months; it's nice to see one that is well thought out).
    Anyhow, I'm gonna say possibly Gin? I know he's the obvious choice and all, but I don';t have nearly enough info in order to lan towards another one of the captains; that and I can't see any of the others raping a student.
    I like her zanpakutou's voice too and look forward to further chapters. Would it be too much if I left me email for notifications of updates? It's gypsygrrl_420@yahoo.com
    Anyway, thank you for a beautifully written first chapter!
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