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Reviews for Stained

By : Rockyshores
  • From ANON - kunitsu on October 24, 2009
    I actually thought it would be Shiro who would save him but then again I am biased since thats my fav pairing. Love the way you are working on thier relationship. Great update
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  • From MasterAkira on October 24, 2009
    Yay for Stark the Knight in Shining Black Armor! I love how this is progressing, I think Ichigo is starting to get used to some of them and reacting to the surprises of the others. I cannot wait for more!

    Thanks! He was wrong, Ichigo would make a good bitchy whore.
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  • From ANON - meshala101 on October 24, 2009
    I'm enjoying this fic so far the pairings are interesting but I noted that all the pairings have Ichigo with an Imperfect or a Nocuous if your story is about breaking away from sterotypes and labels shouldn't a Perfect fall for ichigo as well?

    And I think that Ichigo is handling being around Nocuous all the time a little too well, he might have seen or been around a few Nocuous's since that incident but not too many considering he still lives with his family in what I'm assuming is a perfect neighborhood and until recently was attending a Perfect school and now he's around them almost every day and they keep invading his space, pushing their energy at him and the feel of that dark energy should be haunting, even though his mind tells him that these nacuous aren't the ones who hurt him and killed his mother that incident still had a resounding affect on him, it changed him and shattered the life he'd once known forever not just by killing his mother but by changing how the world and people saw him.

    That had to be hell for a nine year old kid and thats not something one gets over quickly and not without some set backs. so in my opinion thats what I believe Ichigo should have, a set back maybe a nightmare triggered by his most recent attack, the feeling of helplessness and needing to be rescued, the gulit over still not being strong enough, should dredge up dark memories and even darker emotions causing him retreat further into himself, making him cold and distant. He then goes back to school and tells them all to stay the hell away from him.

    This will make the characters job of winning him over even more difficult because before they can even get Ichigo to fall for them they first have to get passed his inital resolve that says he shouldn't like them. Because to do so for him would be like betraying his moms memory or something, untrue yes, but still something for them all to work through and get passed. well that was just my long winded opinion lol and if you have a mailing list could you add me please. Meshala102@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - blasterblurby on October 24, 2009
    Yay! *jumps for joy* a new chapter!!! I much approve of a posessive Shirosaki, and a heroic Stark *swoons*.
    I've never been partial to kenpachi X ichigo but I think that the way this story is written with all my other favorite pairings I could come to like him, or atleast tolerate him.

    Keep up the great work! ^.^
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on October 24, 2009
    This is great and I love how you are mamanging to still keep everyone as we know them and love them, how Ichigo isn't falling in 'love at first sight' (that is getting seriously old much too fast, as well as some other cliche movie plots I won't mention here), and to be honest i thought it would be Shirosaki since he seems to want to play 'shadow'. Again another great fic and I was cheering when Stark beat Nnorita-whatever up. I normally don't despise male anime characters, but his attitude reminds me of my family. Sadly, I am surrounded by sexist/racist close-minded men. Well now it's down to one but still. Anyway anyway, this is great. Talka bout relationships hitting a bad start, for everyone! Though I'm wondering, are you gonna introduce some girls that aren't Perfect? Not that I'm complaining, jsut wodnering who else you would put as non-Perfect but infinity times better. Love ya and your awesome muses!!
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  • From ANON - Skye on October 21, 2009
    I really love this whole society thing you have going on.
    It's so complex and wow, it's amazing to think you thought of it.
    I'd like to be added to the email list.
    My email is: shasbad1234567890@yahoo.com
    I look forward to it. :)
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  • From ShadowofLight on October 19, 2009
    Thank you! Look I'm blushing! #^.^#
    I like this one. Ryu is a great guy and the first meeting with Kenny and Stark was also interesting. Grimmjaw is acting like such a damn baby and I would like to know why Shir-whatever gets, "hot under the collar" when someone calls him an idiot. Poor Ichigo, glomp the cutie uke!! *bear hugs Ichigo plushe*
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  • From ANON - kami_no_yami on October 19, 2009
    Thank you for updating so swiftly and for adding me to your mailing list! I love how you kept Ichigo's core personality and aura the same. The others core natures seem the same as well from what I have read. It is quite lovely how even though this reality is different human nature remains the same; power structure seems to work closely as well. I wonder which boys will have the harder time sharing Ichigo or if any of them will find it easy considering that they are all very alpha. Perhaps Ichigo's innate fighting/survivalist nature (thanks so much for keeping that!) will help them band together to overwhelm the little strawberry. Either way they all seem to to be in for a hell of a fight and seem to be a little prejudice against Ichi; which is to be expected with the way they are treated by others. Are they going to find out about how Ichigo became Imperfect or do they just assume he was just born that way(this dose happen in nature as I have seen it with two of my distant cousins, one them was born with her stomach and some other bits on the outside. she's has some funky scars on her abdomen as a result) or do they just not care? If they do find out will it be from Ichigo or some other source? And whatever happened to Rukia? Was she so horrified by the little fight at school that she no longer contacts Ichigo? What would Ichi's new "friends" thin of her if she did show? These questions and more are why crave your precious updates! Leave me not to wither in the agony of not knowing! Please Update Soon! Oh, are there any pics for this pic by the way? Ichigo with his scar and what not?
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  • From ANON - blasterblurby on October 19, 2009
    i love the story, can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on October 19, 2009
    Oooooh I am already in love with this story
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on October 19, 2009
    yay so cute cant wait for more! I love Grimmjow and Stark and Kenpachi Im not a super fan of Shirosaki but I cant wait to read what happens next....
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  • From MasterAkira on October 19, 2009
    Ah, the wonders of gym in any world... Ichigo is so bristley! What a little bitch
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  • From butterflies1974 on October 18, 2009
    How have I missed this story? It is great! I love how you have all the different fractions and powers...so cool. I really look forward to the next chapter. Here is my e-mail savannah1974@windstream.net
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  • From ANON - kami_no_yami on October 16, 2009
    This is one of the most interesting/original stories I have read in a while. Update soon! Can I please be on your mailing list? harvest_snake@hotmail.com


    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2009
    I'm totally excitited too see this new project! Looks really awesome! Can't wait for more!
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