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By : Rockyshores
  • From Dorkchic on November 15, 2009
    Lets not forget the ever popular spooge, spunk, and baby batter. LOL! I feel retarded just for typing that.
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  • From ANON - BlasterBlurby on November 15, 2009
    *hyper speed* cum, shot, milk, cream, ejaculate, load, goo, spat, dick snot, penis sneeze, white stuff, and love juice. *pant* *pant* Did I win a prize? ;)

    XD nice smut as ussual I can't wait for the next installment. I esspecially enjoyed the out of control with lust Stark. Who woulda thought with all of the cock-blocking he was doin to Shiro that HE would be the one to lose it! Hypocrite! XD
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  • From Dorkchic on November 15, 2009
    Just some notes. You wrote that Stark wiped the back of his mouth, but I think you meant that he wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. Second, you wrote 'quack' (the sound a duck makes) when I think you intended quake. Although, I did have to stop reading and laugh for a minute at the mental image of Ichigo quacking at his partners in post-coital bliss. And third, so sexy! I loved how Stark reached his breaking point and then just snapped like that. I wonder if either of them will receive as well. Like in the case of a threesome/ or foursome?
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on November 15, 2009
    "And that's how you share a spit-fire uke between two strong semes. Lesson over!" Sorry i couldn't help it ^^ This is good, and glad Stark was the voice of, um, lusty reason here. But if makes me wonder how kitty (i saw grimm's releashed for alst night) and ken are gonan go about this. Very good ^^
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  • From MasterAkira on November 15, 2009
    Oh, sexy. Poor Ichigo being coerced into sex...haha, he loves it. Yay, Starrk and Shirosaki are finally getting some action.

    I cannot wait for more! I hope Grimmy shows up soon! Thanks!
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  • From Shinjichiro on November 11, 2009
    Aaaaaa I luv this chapter *__* Stark is so mature and cool, that's kind of like him XD I feel like Shirosaki would really rape Ichigo if they were both alone /not that I mind XD/ but good thing Stark was there, poor Ichigo^ O^ Make Stark the first to go, neee XD I adore this pairing, especially in this story >heart
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on November 08, 2009
    Oooooh my what a chapter *imagines the threesome* Me likely that, kinky ^__^
    Aw they are still all so sweet to Ichigo in thier own ways
    Yes uke Ichigo is just *drools*
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on November 08, 2009
    Oh good, no Stark going "troublesome" ^^ but I like how he's taking ichigo's feelings into account. And in his own way he's protective so thsi is great ^^ Though about those Perfects being killed, no one is gonna miss them 'cept other Perfects who should be dealt with in a bloody. painful, gruesome manner. Hell I wouldn't be surprised if it was a insane perfect who's doing this instead of a Nocturne! (so sorry if I misspelled anything) And yeah, I see Hiyori as an Imperfect ^^ What about Nel? Or Halibel? This is great though, can't wait to read the rest ^^
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on November 08, 2009
    wow so its gonna be Shirosaki Starrk and Ichigo first... I cant wait!! ~_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2009
    xD That's so Shirosaki.
    I think it's going pretty well. I mean, there are romantic feelings involved, but there's a lot of lusting going on too, and that helps smooth things out.
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  • From Dorkchic on November 08, 2009
    For some reason I get the impression that the killer is a perfect. One of those crazy racial purists. If they wanted to get rid of the "lower" castes then having the government do it for them would be ideal. Kill a few perfects...preferably ones that were already friendly with the other castes and therefore already "tainted" and you would kill two birds with one stone. Plus the government would do a far more thorough job than one serial killer ever could. Reminds me of those disgusting camps that the american government put american citizens of japanese origin in during WWII on the off chance that they were traitors. You know- something completely insane yet diabolically clever. Man that was a horrible thought.
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  • From Selene89 on November 08, 2009
    You're doing really well.
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  • From ANON - Skye on November 07, 2009
    I think you do so well portraying these characters!! You have nothing to worry about!
    I'm so excited to see how you make them learn to share, as well as the plot itself!
    And the smut. So looking forward to that!!
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  • From ANON - Kazes on November 07, 2009
    AWE-SOME :D Haha Shirosaki cracks me up. lol Stick of butter. Tehehe. I think, so far so good with keeping it all in character and the "sharing" despite emotions. I think you're doing brilliantly, but I'm thinking it'll be tough to get the three of them in bed without someone feeling jealousy... I mean who gets first crack? I just love how both of them talk about it like Ichigo will be totally fine with the whole idea. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
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  • From butterflies1974 on November 07, 2009
    I think that you are getting it right. I love your dark seme's.
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