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Reviews for The Sweetest Downfall

By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - Anise on March 20, 2010
    (9) It had always seemed a little convenient to me that Renji saw Ichimaru and Kira together and thought that it might not be an accident, nice to know I was right :) Actually I think Ichimaru was thinking that Renji would go and ask Kira about what was going on, probably his weird way of trying to help them knowing he would have to leave eventually. Course leave it to Renji to go off script and it's not like Ichimaru's going to look a gift horse in the mouth, especially when it comes to good looking boys ;) Great chapter though, answered some questions left us wondering a little about others but the portrayal of all the guys was great. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what you write next, maybe even in this universe again ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on March 17, 2010
    Yaaaay~! X3 Good ending. =3

    And Ichimaru, mysterious to the end. X3

    I'd say more, but I'm about to go and run errands. See you later, Draco-san!
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  • From Yakumo on March 17, 2010
    You always write the best endings: tying up the loose ends nicely and some nice smut. I was happy to see Gin there at the end. All around, this was an excellent story! I'm glad you gave Kira such an important role. Most stories I've read only gave him playing a bit part. Once again, great job!
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  • From ANON - Anise on March 06, 2010
    (8) No the outburst wasn't unexpected, more like it was inevitable that Kira would find out especially once we found out that Ichimaru was still alive. And you can't really blame Izuru for getting so mad, he was hurt by two different people that he cares about. That has to be quite the blow and on top of that Renji and Ichimaru were sleeping together, not things Izuru would be thrilled to hear about. But I did love the portrayal of Izuru in the chapter, again where so many people would have him the sad crying how-could-you-do-this-to-me Izuru, you went for just plain mad. And really with most guys when they're hurt they do tend to get angry and lash out. I particularly liked the description of fighter Kira staring Renji down, just a little reminder to Renji that he is more than capable of taking care of himself :) Also how much did I love Hisagi in this, I'm thinking Renji needs to talk to him more often maybe it would help keep him from running into so much trouble and make him think before he acts ;)
    Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one I just wish it wasn't going to be the last ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on March 04, 2010
    lol Yup, I was expecting the blow-up. XD But next chapter? Kissing and making up is what I expect. X3 Though I am looking forward to an explanation of Izuru's realtionship with his captain...

    And it'll be worth the wait, I'm sure. ;3

    See you next time, Draco-san! ^w^
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  • From MasterAkira on March 04, 2010
    Ah, I feel bad for Izuru. He keeps loosing those he thought he trusted. Renji seems like he just blunders his way through life, without any thought.

    Thanks, I cannot wait for the last chapter!
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on March 03, 2010
    OMG NO I was not looking forward to Izuru getting mad at Renji.... Oh man I really really hope its gonna be a happy ending I LOVE this story and I am so happy you updated xD Well next chapter is the last one eh that makes me kinda sad... well I am looking forward to see how your gonna end this =D
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  • From Yakumo on March 03, 2010
    Whoo, Kira blowing up like that made me go "O_O". Excellent job. I can't wait to see how it ends!
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  • From MasterAkira on February 16, 2010
    This is so great, so intense. The characters are so perfect. I really love your Ichimaru, you've really captured his creepy, predatory nature.

    I cannot wait to see what is actually happening under the surface, as all the little things come out in their personalities and complex relationships! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Anise on January 25, 2010
    (7) Gin does seem to give off this air of not caring and/or being indifferent but you can't help but wonder if he really is as uncaring as he first appears. On one hand even when he was young he seemed to have no trouble murdering people for no reason but at the same time he did seem to actually care for Rangiku. It's what makes him such an interesting and unpredictable character, there's just so much going on in that brain of his. As for Renji and Kira it wasn't only nice to see how their relationship had progressed but also to see how far along Izuru was coming personally. Even Renji seems to be becoming more mature about the people and situations around him, even if he does allow emotions like jealousy and possessiveness get the better of him at times ;) I love how good you are at weaving your story around the actual events of the manga, I find that rather impressive since I can never remember half of what happens without someone reminding me :)

    Hard to imagine there's only a little bit more to go, it feels like there's so much that could happen. I will also readily admit that part of me is selfish and keeps wanting more to read ;) I'm definitely looking forward to the next update, I can't wait to see what happens next ^_^
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on January 24, 2010
    Ohs I cant wait =D I love this story whole lots!!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on January 24, 2010
    .... Yay~ 8D

    OMG I love this chapter. X3 .... I've loved 'em all so far, but that's beside the point. ^/////^;

    Only two more updates left? Wow, that's two fics close to completion for you, isn't it? X3 *sigh* Good times, good times. -//w//- See ya later, Draco-san! *hug*
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  • From Yakumo on January 23, 2010
    I'm glad that you made Izuru aggressive when he was kissing Renji. X3
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  • From ANON - Anise on January 11, 2010
    (6) Love the idea of a predatory Izuru, Renji won't stand a chance and he'll have no idea what hit him ;) It's nice to see the progression of Izuru's change he's really starting to remind me of the Kira from the academy days which can only be a good thing :)
    Funny that you should use the phrase 'calm before the storm' because the whole time I was reading the chapter I kept thinking how everything's so sweet and perfect and going so well that I couldn't help but wonder what was going to happen to ruin that calm. Can't wait for the next chapter, I think it's going to get very interesting ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on January 10, 2010
    Yay, smut! lol X3 I want Izuru to get stronger, too. I'd love to see him give Ichimaru a piece of his mind. Or at least raise his sword to him and keep it steady. X3

    Will the mind-games never end? But I still want to see the next chapter. I have to see it! lol X3 See you then. ^w^ *hugs Draco-san*
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