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Reviews for The Sweetest Downfall

By : Crya2Evans
  • From CrimsonAlchemist on November 29, 2009
    I super LOVE this story Renji and Gin is wowowowowow so gosh damn sexy!! I was looking forward to you updating and you did yay cant wait for the next chapter ~_^
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  • From ANON - Spacetoy on November 29, 2009
    Hey, Renji and Gin are my favorite. Hope u can explore their relationship a bit more, so that it doesn't land in the pwp category. I would love to see Renji actually start to like Gin and vice versa..well as much as Gin can like someone lol. But of course i'm not sure where ur going with this exactly, even though Kira is a darling, i'm more for the other two, for I haven't read a pairing of them before, and ur doing a good job. :)
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  • From ANON - Satterb on October 26, 2009
    I love Gin! He's such a naughty fucker! LOL. Thanks for updating this wonderful story. It's clear even without confirmation, just how Kira feels. I can't wait for Renji to discover the truth!
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  • From ANON - Rowen on October 26, 2009
    You still are the most amazing writer! this is amazing already and I can't wait for more! thanks for another one with Gin in it =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Anise on October 26, 2009
    (2) I love the whole idea of the story and normally I don't much care for Ichimaru stories but the promise of Kira/Renji definitely captured my attention, there's not nearly enough of these two :) And speaking of Gin he's just so perfectly cunning but also suitably creepy, he completely played Renji and it didn't take much to see that. It's not hard to imagine Renji getting himself into this situation, he really needs to learn to stop and pay attention to what people are saying to him. I can only imagine what Kira's response will be when he finds out (they always find out ;) I'm thinking it'll be something along the lines of if we're such good friends why didn't you come and talk to me first before you got yourself into this mess. You certainly managed to nail Renji's personality in this, the need to protect his friends with his habit of acting first and thinking later. It's a really great first couple of chapters I can't wait to read the rest ^_^
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  • From MasterAkira on October 25, 2009
    Ooh, I loved this! Gin really is a mind-fucker, and yours is soooo good at the mind games. Renji is so conflicted about everything and I think that is just how he should be.

    I don't mind a poor, abused Kira if that's what he wants. It is only when it is non-con that it bothers me. I love DP too! I used to follow their releases weekly, but I've started college and its hard now (sadness, really)! Ninjiro Sunshine was actually one of my favorites they've done involving Gin. I cannot wait for more! Thanks!
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on October 25, 2009
    OMG that was so wow HOT Sexy Renji getting fucked by Gin *drools* I super loved that ~_^ cant wait for more. xD
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  • From DeviousMinnie on October 25, 2009
    I really like this story, i hope ya will update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on October 25, 2009
    Duuu~de. O______O *is in awe and shock* That was hot, despite the dubious consention. -////-

    But now that the deal's been struck, what the hell is Renji going to do? What will happen if Kira confronts Renji? OMG I don't even want to think of what'll happen, because I don't wanna be wrong! XD I'm just going to have to wait for the next update, aren't I? ;^; *wants more*

    Oh, before I leave... *hugs Draco-san*
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  • From Yakumo on October 25, 2009
    ooh, Renji and Gin. I liked this.
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  • From NovaAlexandria on October 24, 2009
    What indeed?

    I thought the play between the two was well done and both of them seemed in character. The chapter flowed smoothly as well, which is always a nice thing to see. I find it amusing that Kira is the one coming for the pleasure and it is something I can see in his character. I am definitely interested in the next chapter.
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  • From severuslover on October 14, 2009
    This was really great! Nice characterization of Renji. I eagerly await the next chapter :D

    Kay~
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  • From ANON - satterb on October 04, 2009
    I think I know exactly which doujin you read that made you write this. I agree, the possibilities of more of the story are great. Thanks for sharing this work. I love your stories, and even though I don't always review, I still read everything.
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on October 04, 2009
    omg I cant wait for more!! I think I know what doujinshi your talking about I seen it on youtube hmm well I cant wait to see how it goes mmmm Gin is sexy..... o.O
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on October 04, 2009
    O______O More. ..... Please? I'll even get on my knees! I need more! DX *grovels*

    It's been a long time since I've read the early volumes of Bleach, so it's a little weird to see Aizen as a "good guy" again. BUT! Since this is before Renji's promotion to vice-captain, I can understand having it in here. XP

    I'm rooting for you, Renji! Go get Kira back from that snake bastard! ...Although, that Gin/Renji thing worries me... *hugs Draco-san, then waves an R/K flag*
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