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Reviews for The Sweetest Downfall

By : Crya2Evans
  • From Yakumo on January 10, 2010
    I'm so happy Renji and 'zuru were able to spend a little fluffy moment together. I'm looking forward to Ichimaru's appearance next time. ^__^
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on January 10, 2010
    That was a super sexy chapter!! I love this story so much it makes me so happy Izuru and Renji are so sexy!!!
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 28, 2009
    (5) I don't even think I could begin to tell you everything I loved about the interaction between Gin and Renji but the way Gin was trying to guide Renji and Kira together and how Renji reacted to him, it was just too good :) Also I like your Kira, he may be hurt and maybe a little lost (who could blame him) but you can see that he still has his strength and confidence he just needs someone to help remind him of his old self. And Renji seems perfect for that job and despite the violence and yelling it seems that the two of them have actually started to make some progress :) Great chapter I really loved it, can't wait for the next one ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on December 27, 2009
    Yay, consistent updates are coming! XD *squeak!*

    Okay, now that Ichimaru's out of the way, let's get Renji and Izuru together! XD And, as you say closer. lol X3 I wonder what that could mean~ ;3

    See ya later, Draco-san! XD *hug*
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  • From ANON - satterb on December 26, 2009
    OK, now it's getting busy. I'm glad you didn't let Renji fall into Kiras abyss. But it was promising to see Renji say "It's not supposed to hurt without feeling good"! Thanks for the great chapter. Ya know, you should write for yourself more often. LOL Thanks again!
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on December 26, 2009
    There's nothing wrong with writing for yourself, love. *grins* I liked this chapter. Poor Renji, I just wanna grab him up and hide him away sometimes, for his own good.
    "Always the knight, never the prince"--that line killed me. And Gin's parting kiss? (I actually LIKE Gin; he's not easy to read at all, and one has to wonder just where KT's going to go with his character development. I can't see him as purely villainous; so what is HIS reason for betraying Soul Society?)
    Anyhow, I look forward to the next chapter. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas!
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  • From Yakumo on December 26, 2009
    Yay, 'zuru smells like strawberries and cream. Renji and 'zuru were made for each other, ne?
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on December 26, 2009
    OH yay im so happy I love this story I cant wait until you update I want Renji and Izuru to live happily ever after teehee ~_^
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  • From ANON - satterb on December 21, 2009
    I was half expecting Ichimaru to be watching them. LOL Renji's about to get himself into a whole mess of trouble. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Yakumo on December 20, 2009
    I swear, you write the best Gin evar. ^.^ He's awesome!
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on December 20, 2009
    Yay I cant wait for Izuru and Renji to get together!! I love this story I am so happy you updated it!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on December 20, 2009
    Okay, now it's safe to call him a vice-captain. lol X3 Oh, the things we miss that're right in front of us. XD I've had it happen so many times... lol

    But hooray for complications! rofl XD But if Kira liked Renji, why was he playing tonsil hockey with Ichimaru? A kind of "can't be with the one you love, love the one you're with," deal? ..... Oh, I want another chapter already! XD *om nom nom*

    And yes, I'm pretty sure Ichimaru changes from fic to fic. X3 But that's not necessarily a bad thing. He's just so... Well, let's call him multi-faceted and easy to interpret in different ways. lol XD I've never seen so much fanfic potential in one man. X3 *hugs Draco-san*
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 20, 2009
    (4) There are times when I wish that we got to know what Gin was thinking because it seems to me he knows way more than he let's on and has even been guiding Renji towards Kira at times. You know he's playing a game but it's always a little hard to pin down exactly what it is that he's getting up to. I'm also kind of curious about how it all ended between Kira and Gin, did he actually say something to him or did he just stop getting together with him. I'm guessing the latter since Kira just seems confused, hurt and lonely - on the plus side he did make a move finally, albeit a drunken one. I wonder if he'll even remember in the morning, the upcoming chapter will definitely be interesting, can't wait for the next update :) Happy Holidays!
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  • From ANON - satterb on December 01, 2009
    Oh, to be a fly on the wall in that room! I love your Ichimaru. The kinkier the better. He's by far my favorite character. I'm really curious to see where you're going to take this story, and what kind of response Kira is going to have to the situation. I look forward to more. Thanks for all your hard work!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on November 29, 2009
    A very hot update, but something's confusing me. A few times, Renji's reffered to as a "vice-captain," but isn't this fic set before his promotion? I thought he was still in the 11th, and there's no way he's vice-captain under Zaraki.

    Poor Renji, though. Ichimaru's just too good. I think he's bitten off more than he can chew, and I still wonder how Izuru will react when he finds out about their deal. =(

    See you later, Draco-san. ^w^ *hugs*
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