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Reviews for Betrayal

By : Kazeshini
  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2010
    I love your style! Can't wait to see where this is going!
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  • From NovaAlexandria on January 18, 2010
    Ask, and you shall receive. Either you will get this message first or you will see the posting :)

    Excellent chapter and I am pleased to see you posting again. Catch ya on the next, hopefully easier challenge :)
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  • From Tiptipnaway on January 18, 2010
    Gin and Aizen! It gets close and then you cheat me. >.< so mean! It's not nice. Other then that the story is very good. I miss Nova too. Where did she go? ;_;
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  • From NovaAlexandria on October 05, 2009
    Seems like her ability in far more intriguing than originally anticipated. I would offer to help with the one shots, but I have never in my life written one. Somehow I just know it would end up another full length novel. That tends to happen with me. See ya next chapter :)
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  • From PandaPon on October 03, 2009
    Wow...i'm really likin' this so far, hon! Jus' started readin' it 'bout 20 minutes ago, but i think i may already be hooked! xD

    Yer mention of oneshots caught my eye, i must say... Hense, i would be ETERNALLY greatful if ya could find the time ta write a Nnoitra x Szayel fic. They're my OTP, but...i can't seem ta ever find anythin' with 'em. Makes me sad. -sighs dejectedly-
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  • From NovaAlexandria on September 29, 2009
    You got a nice little story going on here and I must admit I am curious about her power. I got a base idea that it has something to do with reading/controlling a persons mind/intent. Hence why Ulquiorra would be an easy first target since he is already so loyal and rather in control of his emotions. Little reprogramming needed.

    Was an interesting last chapter. And you called me disturbing ;)

    I find myself counting hits more then reviews on this site. I find a lot of people are too shy to admit they like this stuff to leave reviews [I am usually one of them :)]
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  • From errihuseamonster on September 27, 2009
    I'm really interested to see what kind of dynamic you create between Grimmjow and Nnoitra. That's a crack pairing if I ever saw one. What I see so far seems in character, and I like that.

    I like what you've done with Starrk and Hallibel. Again, it's in character. Keep writing.
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  • From errihuseamonster on September 25, 2009
    Post more. I'm interested in seeing where you are going with this. You cracked me up with the bit about the breadstick.
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