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Reviews for Crossbreeding the Future

By : NovaAlexandria

From Tiptipnaway on September 30, 2009
aww Gin was so cute. I love the extra peice! One chapter left, I can't wait.
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From ANON - Mademoiselle on September 30, 2009
I'm amazed that I liked this so much. More chapters soon, maybe a baby for Grim?
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From Kazeshini on September 30, 2009
Ohh they're so cute! The dads I mean,lol. I don't think I spotted any typos, so kudos to you. I can't wait for the... intimacy **hehe** I have no quams about people knowing I like adult stories, I mean, thats why we're here. I love this story, it's riveting :D and very well written. Next chapter please :)
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From ANON - limegreen on September 30, 2009
I guess the conspiracy continues on. ;0) "Servered" should have been "served", and I think you meant "the hyper duo" not "the hyper due". And I forgot from last chapter, "waist" not "waste". These little misspelling buggers won't leave you alone.

I don't know, but I felt kind of disappointed in the chapter. Though you said in your reply that there won't be any love between Rukia and Grimmjow, I get the feeling they will be sleeping together by your answer and the tone of Rukia's thoughts. I wanted to hope her relationship with Ichigo wouldn't be compromised, and they would get back together before something like this could happen, but I guess not. It depresses me already since you mentioned the rescue party won't be arriving yet. I "pray" Aizen won't be checking for proof this time. Please.

I didn't feel any progress with Stark and Unohana. He may be spooning her in his sleep, but there was nothing else. In the previous chapter, it had the feeling the relationship was moving forward with him touching her growing belly and picking her up so she wouldn't have to walk the long distances. In this one, it was like a stalemate. Maybe the next chapter there will be a release of some pent-up emotions.

Can't say I'm looking too forward to next chapter, especially if there's anything between Rukia and Grimmjow (I sure hope not). I am curious to know if Isane will be expected to have another child as well, and if so, with who.
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From AnimeAngelSisters on September 29, 2009
Again, another awesome chapter. I'm glad Rangiku is finally getting away from Barragan, but I'm still worried for Byakuya-sama and Toshiro. I hope they'll be ok.
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From Tiptipnaway on September 29, 2009
I still love it. I love that when ever I wake up there is a new chapter. ^.^ IN fact I was having crazy dreams about this story the other night. Aizen throwing babies into a fire....it was weird....Anyway, just a few more chapters left right ;_; You said it would be 11 chapters long, right? I can't wait for the update. More babies! yay!
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From ANON - Kashima on September 29, 2009
I have to say this is an amazing story. I applaud you for being able to take a story that would normally have such depressing overtones and still making it pleasant to read. I have to admit i randomly came across your story and then sat down and read all eight chapters in just one sitting its that engaging. I am very fond of the way you paired the characters and as huge fans of stark and grimmjow i am very happy with the way you have realistically portrayed their characters. i can't wait to read future chapters and i hope you keep up the good work
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From ANON - limegreen on September 29, 2009
I kind of feel special, since you look forward to my reviews. Thanks. ^_^

You wrote "board" again instead of "bored", and it should have been "comatose".

Seriously, poor Byakuya. Is he going to father loads of children and not know any of them? Why hasn't Aizen ordered the capture of more male shinigami to further along his project? And what about Tousen and Gin? Why haven't they contributed to this? Byakuya can't be doing it all by himself. It would seem a little ridiculous for nearly most of the children born in Hueco Mundo to be his.

I do hope the relationship between Rukia and Grimmjow stays the way it is. I want her and her child to make it back to her husband-to-be without any baggage. Please.

Again, hooray for Stark/Unohana. I had wondered if Stark would show any interest in his children, when previously he made no acknowledgement of the "child" being his. He had referred to it as "the child". Good to see he was curious and awed by being a soon-to-be father. Hopefully, during the time skip there will be more progress between these two and their growing family. Like I said before, I love this pairing. And all because of you. =)

Can't wait for the next chapter, and see what two years brings. Oh, and that rescue party better get their asses moving already.
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From ANON - Kazes on September 29, 2009
Yes! You're right a little bit of disturbing never hurt anyone :D So the children are finally here! I laughed when Grimmjow was like "You got something to say" and then shit himself when she cried! Hahaha Nawwh I love Starrk :D Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - limegreen on September 28, 2009
Another word - "straight" not "strait".

Please, say it ain't so. I don't want Rukia to be forced to have anyone's babies but Ichigo's. Damn it Ichigo, save her at least! Or better yet, Grimmjow, free her somehow! I'm going to be biting my nails till they're nonexistent.

Poor Byakuya. I get why Aizen is sending females to him, since it is easier for a male to impregnate more women. However, if Aizen is "trying" for the others to form bonds with their partners, why not Byakuya and Halibel as well? I do get she had violent mood swings, but if they have a strong child, wouldn't he want them to be together to have more? A bond would probably make it less volatile between them. And I do wonder if all that drugging won't make him sterile. Just a thought.

Hooray for more Stark/Unohana. The "romantic" dinner set up by Lilynette and Hanataro was very cute. Too bad Stark needs to step up his game. =) I hope there will be more progress with these two soon.

Can't wait for next chapter. I am curious about the children, and I await for their overdue rescue before things get too worse for everyone.
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From ANON - Kazes on September 27, 2009
Wow, this story is fantastic... a little disturbing... but captivating none the less! I feel bad for Matsumoto :( I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for the next installment :)
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From ANON - limegreen on September 27, 2009
Another word to watch out for that you had - "quite" should have been "quiet". Hell, even I miss that one sometimes, so don't worry. Also, be careful about overusing phrases. You used "she couldn't help but..." quite a few times just in this chapter alone. Keep a lookout for that too.

Ah man, this chapter had me feeling real sorry for Toshiro and Matsumoto. He finally broke, and she did as well, while also feeling jealousy towards Unohana. But in a situation like that, it's certainly not surprising. I thought you caught her emotions real well.

I'm starting to wonder if Aizen is going to know right away Rukia's baby is Ichigo's. To me, it kind of seems doubtful that he wouldn't be aware of someone leaving Hueco Mundo to the real world without his knowledge. I'm thinking he was counting on something like this happening from the start. Maybe? Just a wild guess on my part anyhow.

Again, you're making me like the Stark/Unohana pairing more and more. I don't know why, but I do like them.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope there will be something from Byakuya's POV, and I'm curious to see what you mean about the little twists involving the children. Either way, I know it will be good.
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From Kazeshini on September 26, 2009
Oh I loved this chapter! It was such a wise pairing and so true to character. Very nice! I love Stark, so I'm hoping for more of him, especially with how well you write him! I would read it all at once, but I don't have time, I'll be back for sure though!
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From AnimeAngelSisters on September 26, 2009
Congrats to Rukia. And I am worried about Rangiku and Isane. Personally, I'm kinda hoping it's Aizen's child, because that might help Isane-chan get some better treatment.
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From ANON - limegreen on September 26, 2009
Don't worry about the spelling mistakes, though you put "mater" again. It happens to everyone even with the supposed help of spellcheck. As long as the story is good, a few misspelled words isn't going to bother me.

I absolutely loved this chapter. I got more Stark POV, Ichigo and Rukia action, and Byakuya telling Rukia that she's going to marry Ichigo (loved that the best). As I read the beginning of the chapter, I had a feeling of where it was going. When it did happen, I was like "hell yeah". I love that pairing. And the interaction between Ichigo and Grimmjow was very believable for those two characters.

I wasn't too surprised the most motherly of them was the first one to get pregnant. I really liked reading Unohana's thoughts on the baby, and her earlier conversation with Stark. You're making me like this pairing more and more.

The last part of the chapter with Stark, Lilynette, and Hanataro was probably my favorite. His thoughts and agreeing to their demands and pleas was great. And I liked how he knew he is changing, yet it didn't bother him all that much. Great job.

Can't wait for the next chapter and read what you're going to do next with everyone.
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