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By : tantgredelin
  • From Yakumo on July 31, 2009
    -massive nosebleed- I liked. A lot.
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  • From buntroses13 on July 31, 2009
    FINALLY! It's about time some one gets it right. great story! I'm so happy that you described it correctly. i was getting so sick of people describing it as a bundle of nerves. they need to study male anatomy more. This was really acute story. i hope you write more! ^_^
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  • From satterb on July 30, 2009
    Baby...you can write about fingering, rimming, verbal abuse...anything your little heart desires! Just don't stop writing this stuff. So so good! More dirty talk, that's all I ask! Thanks for sharing this. Looking forward to more.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 30, 2009
    Damn. Just--damn.
    That was smoking hot *still fanning self* I've only rarely read an Ichi/Renji fic where Ichigo is the top, but you make it sound like that's the way it should be and everyone else is insane for making Ichi an uke in their fics. And though I haven't read the original on ff.net, I will be hurrying over there as soon as I'm done writing this to read.
    Btw, you said that was unbeta'd--you don't need a beta at all (why mess with perfection). No spelling errors, the grammar and style were perfect--and I'm sooo jealous. Lol. I can't wait to read more of your work.

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