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Reviews for Building From The Ashes

By : MarinLiliz
  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2016
    Please Please Please!!!!!!! Finish this!!!!! I like the story development and I want to see what happens!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2015
    Every time I get to the end of a good story that is incomplete I wanna cry!!!!! OMG! Please tell me your gonna finish this. I want so bad MORE!!!! This story described thing that one would expect after war and some not. I like the detail of the battlefield. The emotion and for some the lack of. It's very descriptive and moves along very nicely!!!! I'm also hoping for some POV changes to tell of others struggles and how they over come. All in all very good...no...EXCELLENT!!! story!
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  • From Bloodlilly on February 07, 2010
    I am really enjoying this story, cant wait to see what happens when Renji wakes up.
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  • From ANON - Karma Chan on September 18, 2009
    I like Chiyo; she is a great character. I also like how Byakuya handled the Kuchiki elders. ^_^ Can't wait for the next update in two weeks! See ya soon.
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  • From ANON - Karma Chan on September 05, 2009
    I still really love this story!
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  • From arabuzumaki on August 28, 2009
    my favourite part of that chapter was the part with Ukitake, it really tugged on my heart strings ^_^
    the part with mayuri made me laugh. i just pictured his bland expression from when they were in hueco mundo.
    i hope renji looks like his normal self (all his tattoos look like normal) i can't picture him disfigured. please don't do that to him.

    and i hope you focus on everyone even if it's little updates ^_^
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  • From arabuzumaki on August 24, 2009
    soutaichou is a total bastard ^_^. lol is aizen controlling him? i can't help but re-read the chapter on the deaths it's really captivating ^_^.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on August 24, 2009
    Oh my--I've been reading this on LJ and came across this chapter here first, so I'm commenting here--I hope you don't mind?
    Anyhow, I loved this chapter. How on one hand things are given freely (the vizards being allowed to live/come back to SS; Urahara and the Yourichi (I know I spelled that wrong, I apologize)no longer being exiled), but the things that aren't or are taken away (Stark, refusal to help Ichigo)paint a picture of a torn SS and what might create a whole new host of problems--insubordination? civil war-ish unrest?--in the near future.
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  • From ANON - Karma Chan on August 24, 2009
    Amazing chapter! *Bows to your greatness. lol. I am so excited to find out what happens. Poor Ichigo. After everything he did for them. I am sure it will work out. ^_^
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  • From ANON - KarmaChan on August 04, 2009
    I really do love this story! Thanks a bunch for writing it.
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  • From arabuzumaki on August 04, 2009
    I'm glad baldy is alive, but he doesn't remember Yumi :( I'm so excited, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From arabuzumaki on July 25, 2009
    omg!! this fic is amazing. when you captured the deaths it was fantastic!!! i look forward to the rest of this.
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  • From ANON - KarmaChan on July 25, 2009
    I really like this story so far. You are a great writer. Sorry if this isn't the greatest feedback, but I wanted you to know your story is appreciated.
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  • From ANON - velvet chaos on July 18, 2009
    Nice story,
    keep it up,I look forward to your next update~
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  • From ferlerrr on July 10, 2009
    HI! It seems I am the only one who writes reviews... but I said I will make up my lazyness :D I hope others will take the trouble to do the same...
    I will patiently read the next chapters so build up your story as you want to and as you need to.
    I was shocked that Unohana was healing Renji. And Byakuya doesn't dare to give up... although this story should end here if he does... so I am not so worried... just little bit...
    Poor Rikichi... as I see he died. I think a lot of people died in this war :(
    However, keep up writing. I like your stories and your writing style as well! And I believe not me the only one. (I didn't click on this story more than a hundred :D )
    I'm curious what you have in store for us.
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