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Reviews for Death and the Strawberry

By : Rockyshores
  • From ANON - Tiramisu on May 14, 2009
    You are doing great!! Thank You!!
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  • From MasterAkira on May 14, 2009
    Delicious! It's the perfect thing to read right before bed (ah, sweet dreams...) Is Stark going to accompany him to the KaraKura town?

    Most Importantly, what do you think Ichigo's favorite play is? (Mine is Midsummer's Night Dream, btw) Has Grimmjow been tamed?
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on May 14, 2009
    Maybe everyone was waiting for this chapter? Not a full lemon but close enough :) I like this part, it gives food for thought and I just wonder about Ishin and the girls. I mean how are they gonna take seeing Ichigo as he is now? Anyway i like it and I will always like masaki, I just hate how she died too damn early. Yay for uyou updating!! :D
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  • From gaara89 on May 14, 2009
    You're not doing anything wrong. The story is good, especially since you're building up their sexual relationship from the ground up instead of plowing right into intercourse like a lot of other writers do. Sometimes when stories get into later chapters, readers just forget to review. It happens. Sometimes we just forget, I know I always do. So what ends up happening is that you'll get random numbers of reviews on any given chapter. If you were doing something wrong that made people not want to read, you'd definitely have at least one flame. So if you don't, then you're good. Great chapter by the way, I'll be looking forward to the next one.


    ~Reigh~
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  • From ANON - Yellow on May 14, 2009
    That was so sweet! I loved it! Great job, I can't wait to see what you do next!
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  • From keraizaki on May 14, 2009
    Whoop! ^^^
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  • From MasterAkira on May 11, 2009
    Aw, how cute! Stark can't even say 'the four-lettered word.' He so deserves it. They are so sweet together!

    I feel bad for Stark, that's so sad. I want to hug him...Ichigo too, and Grimmjow, and.... Anyways, I hope Ichigo can make Stark feel again *squee!*
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  • From Snapelicious on May 10, 2009
    Not one of your best, I'm afraid. Like, how in the world is Nel in any position to give orders? If they're preparing to attack Karakura, then Nnitora would have already betrayed her with Sayzel. Ichigo's already a hollow and an arrancar, so he never helped her return. Is she just there so Halbel can be a lesbian? She's already got a harem of fraccion, she doesn't need anachronistic-woman to be there too.

    also... Hyouka? wtf?
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on May 10, 2009
    Thanks, I'm still trying to learn more about Hollows and arrancers and such. This is a good chapter and well, I jsut hope for the best with ichigo. Stark really does care and heaven help any bastard that tries to take 'strawberry' away from him :)
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  • From setoswifey on May 10, 2009
    This fic is hilarious! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Yellow on May 10, 2009
    So sweet! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love this story!
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  • From Yakumo on May 10, 2009
    Purring Stark made me smile..
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  • From keraizaki on May 10, 2009
    Whoop! ^^ Another awsome chapter!! I LOVED the quote "You don't have to understand, emotions aren't meant to be understood. It is just something you feel. If you could explain them then they would be thoughts, not feelings.” I think it was just perfect!!! :3 WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!! XD *Hugz*
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  • From CrimsonAlchemist on May 09, 2009
    yay cute loved this chapter too. wow keep up the Fantastical job ~_^
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  • From Yakumo on May 04, 2009
    Ooh, nice little make out (I think you could call it that?) scene between Stark and Ichigo. Also, I'm glad that you had Ichigo's mom in this chapter. She's awesome.
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