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Reviews for He didn't even see it coming!

By : DameonGrey
  • From ANON - Woot! on March 23, 2009
    Woot!! That was violent & still smexy!!
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  • From ANON - Tami Chan on March 23, 2009
    This was brilliant hun! I'm sure he'll love it! It was so hot, even if I don't know the story all that well, I love it! What I liked was that at times your sentences didn't seem so much sentences used in fiction writing, they seemed to me like they were structured a little more like poetry, like a fragment of the sentence would seem to have more of a hidden meaning than simply, "He walked through the door." if you catch my drift. Anyhoo, keep it up! I want to go read that other one you did now. I'll see you next week!
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