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Reviews for Misguided Manipulation

By : Crya2Evans
  • From Yakumo on March 10, 2009
    Do you have the Espada get aroused when their masks are kissed or touched? Maybe I read that somewhere else but when you had that line about Stark-san shivering when his mask got played with it made me wonder. >.>;
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  • From ANON - dizzle on March 10, 2009
    Oh wow, this is take two of this review. I have no idea what happened to the first one I wrote, but I'll try to remember what I was talking about.
    Oh yeah. You should totally make this an epic fic. No six-shot. Sixty-six, maybe, but this story just has so freakin much potential. You have really caught Ichigo and Stark together and it is reads so well and easily. And this is your best Urahara too. I love Minutes to Midnight but Kisuke was a little too goofy. But not here. You've got him down just great. And the chemistry between Ichigo and Stark is hot. From their first kiss in chapt. 2 I was hooked. Stark is obviously stronger but you don't have Ichigo as this whimpering submissive and its awesome. And Stark is caught in his charisma along with that hot body, its so freakin believable!(well as believable as fanfiction about manga/anime characters can be, you know what I mean) And to see how they could get through the war and afterwards and how all the friends deal would be an awesome read. Sigh
    Just keep up the great work and I can't wait til next week. Just think about elongating this story. Or at least a sequal? Pretty Please? :) Whatever you decide you know me and everybody else will still be reading you stuff :P
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  • From ANON - Ranna on March 10, 2009
    Stark is possessive. Who'da thunk? I'm sad we won't get to see more of his personality in the series. He'll probably get killed off.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2009
    seriously...I thought Stark had killed Barragan until that line about him escaping....
    can you imagine my reaction? it was like this--> weeeeeeeeeeeeeee(reads the escape part)eeeeeeenooooooooooooo!!!!!
    oh, stark...yes, you should've killed him while you had the chance.

    and on a sidenote: yes!!! top-Ichigo is win!!

    and also, where's the swearword?
    --->the old bastard growled in surprise, drawing back. “What the (it's not here) do you think you're doing?”
    Barragan swearing?=awesome
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  • From Emyrei on March 10, 2009
    The "you could hear Szayel's pants drop"-part was made out of pure win.
    Everyone wants Ichigo. But Stark is the only one who gets to have him.
    Yay XD
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on March 10, 2009
    *ponders* -_______- Yeah, I can't see Stark as the kind of person (Espada... whatever) that'd say "I love you." Actions speak louder than words, after all. *giggle* X3

    But what now? Now both Stark and Ichigo have Aizen after their heads. And if the other Espada ever decide to gang up on 'em... *shiver* X(

    Mya~! I'm really enjoying this fic, even though I'm only up to vol. 24 of the manga. lol X3
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  • From ANON - alisteal on March 10, 2009
    Awwwww They really are so so damn cute together!
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  • From BlueRose22 on March 10, 2009
    I enjoy this story, I must say. But, the Monty Python reference this chapter just made me laugh. Just wanted to say that.
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  • From Sagenwarrior on February 26, 2009
    great fic, can't wait to see more.
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  • From ANON - Yaoi_Vixen on February 24, 2009
    Another great chapter; loved the smut! And possesive Ichigo =P. Can't wait for the next chapter =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2009
    Have I ever told you how much I adore the way you write Aizen? Because I think I've gushed over it before. Regardless—I love your Aizen. He's perfect. And now I also love Stark, something I'm going to blame entirely on you.

    Can't wait for an update!

    -Mizu.B
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  • From satterb on February 24, 2009
    i am loving this just as much as MTM. I was totally suprised to see Ichigo take the initiative. I didn't see it coming. Please keep up the great work. I look forward to more.
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  • From Emyrei on February 24, 2009
    I think I might have drooled a bit. So undignified.
    That's what your porn does to me.
    Huzzah.

    You know...I think Ulquiorra has a personality. I can imagine him being really really quirky.
    Quirky like Szayel. And he knows it too. But he hides it really well.
    And that's all part of his quirkyness.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on February 24, 2009
    Oooooo~h! What's Stark going to do now? 83 He can't betray Aizen, and something tells me he won't be able to betray Ichigo's, either. X3 Eeee! I can't wait for the next chapter! XD This fic is just so cool, I can't stand it! X3 *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2009
    I was thinking, Uquiorra playing fetch with Aizen wouldn't be that unrealistic in canon....I could see it happen XD
    ah, sweet imagery...
    and yay for erotic smex-time! Aggresive-Ichigo is slightly more facinating than Submissive/weak/undecisive-Ichigo.
    He's been portrayed that way in fics too often in my opinion, so this Ichigo is refreshing ;3
    Do I detect the possibility of Ichigo topping in the future?
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