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Reviews for A Mistaken Past

By : LadyKyou
  • From Ladylara on January 02, 2009
    wow, that was scary. Who the heck was that? Man I cant wait for the next chapter. Nice work
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  • From Ladylara on December 30, 2008
    Wow, interesting developments. I am curious to see what is going on. Why can she not go out after dark? Why does he care? cant wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Byakuyafan on December 28, 2008
    I hope you make things better between Bya/Tat...I like your story with this pairing...And I believe throwing in Hisagi as someone to help Byakuya see the error in his ways is perfect. I hope you pair Hisagi and Orihime up that would be sweet. I'm not a big Orihime fan, but, there is something about putting the two of them together that makes sense. Anyway, great story...keep up the great work and I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - alex on December 26, 2008
    awesome! keep going!
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  • From ANON - teresa on December 23, 2008
    Interesting!
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  • From ANON - Erynn on December 23, 2008
    surprisingly good pairing! i love this story so far. you're a really good writer.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2008

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  • From ANON - Rukiachan on December 22, 2008
    update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2008
    Keep going please Im curious who else will be interested in Tatsuke. Since one of the pairing is Tat/???, maybe it be Zaraki, hes hawt.
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  • From ANON - lanier on December 22, 2008
    Man I guess that went pretty well. But now I feel for them being stuck in the same household. This should be interesting. Cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Lanier on December 20, 2008
    Wow this story just gets better with each chapter. I cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Byakuya Kuchiki on December 20, 2008
    Kudos indeed a wonderful story with a bright and innovative new pair that actually focuses on a shinagami who hardly ever has proper justice done to him. Your story is amazing and easily among the best on aff i await further chapters with great enthusiasm.
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  • From sheastar334 on December 18, 2008
    This was awesome!!! I love Tat/anybody stories! I can't wait for the update to see where this story goes.
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  • From ANON - taixi on December 18, 2008
    I'm a little confused. In the summary it says this story is Tat/Bya and Ori/Ulq. Is that a typo or is Orihime eventually going to ditch Ishida and get together with Ulquiorra? (Assuming you continue the story of course).

    Also, you may want to add Ichiho/Rukia to the summary where you list pairings - since this first chapter contains a whole lot of Ichigo/Rukia (I'd say at least as much as there is Tatsuki/Byakuya, save for the actual sex act) and many people (me included) find the IchiRuki pairing really unpleasant. (It's always nice to have a warning so we can brace ourselves beforehand...). Unless of course, you end up having Ichigo and Rukia break up later on in the story and that's only a temporary pairing - sadly, that didn't appear to be the direction you're going with them.

    Finally, I love Byakuya x any female pairings, and it's always nice to see Tatsuki get some love. If you do end up continuing the story, I hope they manage to build a relationship based on more than just sex... it sounds like it will be difficult to accomplish emotional attachment between these two (Byakuya being who he is and Tatsuki being a commoner human) but perhaps Byakuya's highly developed sense of honor will come into play (maybe Tatsuki will get preggers or similar).)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2008
    Smut first chapter is a plus. If you would consider pairing options would you think about Tatsuke and Grimmjow. Bya is alright, he's a hottie, but she is spunky so a guy with an attitude is more her style. I hope she forgives Orihime.
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