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By : YamiBakura
  • From missbri88 on December 10, 2008
    LOL. YAY!!! Nice chappies! ^^ Cant wait for more.
    I'm always putting things off for whatever Im reading, like: food, water, bathroom breaks. lol.
    But Im writing a fanfic... Its just slow going now can Im working alotta overtime, so ideas/plot bunnies are drying up and my muse has run away.
    But I'll see ya next chapter!!!
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  • From SarahTaylor on December 09, 2008
    Yes, I even love your story when the authors note is longer than the chapter XD

    To prove it, it is now midnight and I have to be up in 6 hours to go to work but I couldn't go to bed till I'd read this ^-^
    Ok so it might be a little weird if yama-ji were to get a crush on her but most of the others I could live with XP
    Ok, really gotta get some sleep. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 09, 2008
    I love how everyone's reaction to Ichigo is their awe at how short he his, you would think that it would be more about the fact that he's shaped like a girl *snicker* I had been wondering if Mayuri's plan would work if Ichigo just went to SS did what he had to do and then went home, it didn't seem like enough time for the whole plan to happen so I'm glad you addressed that in this last chapter. It seems despite the fact that Mayuri is a raving lunatic he's actually thought this plan threw, I was kind of hoping that would be the loophole. I wonder if there is a reason behind Mayuri wanting the top spot or is it just purely a lust for power, honestly what is it with shinigami and a need for power and control *rolls eyes*
    Thanks for the long reply I love reading what you have to say, sorry my review was kind of short but my internet's been acting sketchy and I just want to make sure that I get this done before it decides to cut out again (stupid technology) I hope it's not serious but just as a warning if I don't review a chapter it's not because I don't want to but more like I can't. All that aside I'm interested to see what's going to happen next and if anyone is going to start to figure things out, cant's wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From SarahTaylor on December 08, 2008
    Yay for updating frequently XD

    My fav line is 'The soutaichou's desk was legendary for it's contents; an entire chicken was once found under a pile of papers, and people still snickered about it occasionally.' That brought about a giggle ^-^ The fact that even yama-ji is slightly messy is just perfect.

    You just keep throwing those suiters in, pretty soon the entire male population of serietei will be after Ichigo, which might be kinda interesting XD

    Oh and I completely get the Hitsugaya thing, I really hate spelling his name because you can guarantee that you'll miss something so I just type 'Shiro, so much easier ;)
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  • From missbri88 on December 08, 2008
    Nice chapter, and I must admit, "Why are you short" was/is a great line. And the chicken thing was too. I laughed so hard I cried. ^^ And you spell Toushirou like I do too. And I do mess it up every now and then, but its mostly the Hitsuguya part that I forget the U.
    But again nice chapter and the plot is amazing and I just cant wait for more!!! Even though Im pressed for time and Im late for work right nows, I just had to read your newest chappie. ^^ Now my day is made! I can make it through 8 hours without fanfiction(I should work on my own story).
    See ya next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 08, 2008
    (6) You're extremely quick on the updating, that's not a complaint by the way I like you updating as much as you want! :) As for the story and Mayuri, it's an interesting idea for taking over SS but I'm assuming(hoping) there's a flaw that he hasn't considered so it doesn't resort to that. I loved the captain's meeting and the reactions of everyone, it'll get even more interesting though once he starts meeting up with people one on one and seeing their individual reactions, him and Renji should be interesting :)
    I read your author's notes and realized that we're similar in being all over the place when it comes to pairings, I like ish/ich and bya/ren as much as the next fangirl but they aren't my one and onlys. Actually with Renji I like him with Shuuhei or Kira, or better yet just throw all of them together into a threesome *drools* I also love the idea of Ukitake and Byakuya together, I like the idea of Byakuya with someone who could easily stand up to him. I think that's what's great with Bleach there's just so many to chose from which you seem to be taking full advantage of in this story, that's part of the fun :) Like with Shinji, I think it's partially him wanting to torment Ishida and/or Ichigo and partly lust ;)
    I do realize that I'm extremely weird in that I like to respond to author notes so I apologize for rambling on but sometimes I just can't help myself but I'll stop now so you can stop reading this and go back to what your supposed to be doing-writing the next chapter (or sleeping) ^_^
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  • From SarahTaylor on December 07, 2008
    Two chapters again, yay :)

    Mayuri (you're right, it's just easier ^-^) really is evil, that's quite the plan and so believable too. Don't worry about the short chapter, it works. If it had been any longer it may have spoilt the effect XD

    I can't wait for more but don't become too sleep deprived, trust me, after a while you end up falling asleep at the computer and that can really hurt you arms ^~^ XD
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  • From missbri88 on December 07, 2008
    Oh wow. I like this story. Its cute and something new for me. Girl!Ichigo... IchiIshi... *fangirling around room* I love it. And I feel sorry about your lack of sleep. I understand your pain. ^^
    "With a Silent Step" seems to ne building and progressing beautifully and I look forward to more from you.
    Dont work to hard either! See ya next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 05, 2008
    I can't believe that you turned Ichigo into a girl *snicker* I don't think I actually believed you when I read that in your email. It's funny how it seems that it's just the outside that's changed and he's still acting like Ichigo, it's just so much more amusing that way especially considering his penchant for freaking out ^_^ I have to admit that I'm usually on the fence about the whole turning male characters into females but since there was a reason as to why Ichigo's a girl it doesn't seem as random as it does in some stories. I can't help but think that this is definitely going to be a fun read but on a serious note, I also want to see how they deal with Mayuri and his plans, especially since I'm sure Ichigo doesn't want to find himself a girl forever.
    By the way I loved the email you sent me and I would never think it creepy that you would send me one, that's why I leave my email I figure if I've got things to say about the story you should be able to respond to it plus that pretty much guarantees you reviews from me in the future, I'll be looking forward to the next update! :)
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  • From SarahTaylor on December 04, 2008
    oh...so...funny XD

    That last bit had me in stitches, I almost fell out of my chair. Poor Ichigo, it's just not her week :)

    Thank you so much for the dedication XD I love reviewing, I know how nice it is to find out what people like about your work. I am really enjoying this story, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
    (And I totally agree about Draco's work, a must read!)

    And thank you for the double update *claps hands in glee* XD
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  • From ANON - Anise on December 03, 2008
    This really was a fabulous start to the story I even loved Shinji in this (the little pervert), only he could completely fail at his job of protecting Ichigo and blame it all on Ishida. I have to admit that when they made mention of a bracelet I thought that it would be Ishida that Mayuri was actually after especially considering his interest in the Quincy and while I'm glad Ishida is okay, poor Ichigo is most certainly not :(
    You've definitely caught my interest just in this first chapter and I will certainly be looking forward to the upcoming chapters ^_^
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  • From SarahTaylor on December 03, 2008
    Really, really good, I'm dying to know why Ichi is mentioned in the notebook and what exactly Kurotsuchi is planning to do with him XD

    Can't wait till you update :)
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