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Reviews for The Crumbling World

By : Rockyshores
  • From gravybaby on November 23, 2008
    Don't pay attention to that jerk. Whoever they are their just friggin' jealous! I happen to enjoy your writing very much and look forward to you next update. I send you many ::hugz:: and e-cookies!

    Oh and to that other person let me clue you in to something.....
    ITS CALLED FANFICTION FOR A REASON, EINSTEIN!!!! DON'T LIKE IT? DON'T READ IT!!!!

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  • From MasterofPie on November 21, 2008
    Yay smutt!
    I love this pairing and Ichigo with Urahara. Odd, but fun pairing, and I do hope you continue to wrie this fic ^__^
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  • From ANON - Pickle Reviver on November 21, 2008
    Oh! And bad dead, Bad! Let's all be nice~! C:

    Bonnenuit, your characters may be OOC, but you know what, that thing makes your stories special and different from the others! (I like your stories because Ichi is always so deliciously uke-ish xP) That makes your stories popular! C: Just keep on doing your thing. *thumbs up*

    It's okay dear! Mama's here! *GLOMP*
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  • From ANON - Pickle Reviver on November 21, 2008
    Yeah! Go fuck him! WOOT!!!
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  • From ANON - another author here who prefers to remain unknown until the time being on November 21, 2008
    To Dead, I don't know if you find so much satisfaction in flaming other people's works or not, but there's what we call an etiquette when it comes to reviewing other people's works... You hide behind an anonymous name which can mean that you might probably be one of the author's here(aff net)too. Everyone commits mistakes and I'm sure you're no exception to that.

    And also, have you ever heard of AU (alternate universe)? OOC (Out of character)? If you are an author or reader, I'm sure you should be aware of those terms. If you do know them, then we should go back to the matters of etiquette. Why are you still reading and reviewing if you a lot of comments? Really now, YOU ARE LAME!!!

    Have you ever heard of subtly? Or should I say, breaking it to the author gently with regards to whatever errors that you have found? But it seems to me that you don't. You're crude and selfish. You disregard others just to satisfy your "noble" cause so that it would fit into your standards.

    People like you really step on my last nerve. You don't show some decency to respect others neither do you have any for yourself. If I were you, just shut your trap and move on with your life. We're not begging you to read fanfiction, and I'm sure the author doesn't kiss the ground that you walk on so that you would leave her a review. I pity you, really.

    And besides, not all of the writers were born or raised from wherever you're from, or received whatever education was given to you so get your friggin head out of your ass!!!



    To the authour, bonnenuit:

    Just let it pass, don't let the reviewer get to you. I'll gladly reveal myself if need be. For now, just write whatever is in your heart. I'm sure you attract more that enough readers in every story that you write.


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  • From ANON - fan on November 21, 2008
    Dead, What's wrong you seem to have forgotten your own fanfiction link?
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  • From ANON - dead on November 21, 2008
    Incorrect. Your spelling and grammar are terrible. You can't even spell 'summary' correctly. I wrote badly on purpose because I knew you would dismiss the review and reviewer.

    And you have no understanding of Kenpachi. The person you portray in any of your stories is a totally different character to that in Bleach. Your first attempt at first person writing was laughable.

    To return your own words to you: 'Get off your high horse'. I read your stories to remind myself how bad some fan fiction can be.
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  • From KitsuneNoMari on November 20, 2008
    I feel for you... Don't worry about that Biatch of a reviewer who threw you a flame, what matters most is that there are readers who love your stories. =^____^= (like me!
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  • From ANON - Pickle Reviver on November 17, 2008
    Woahh! Ichi's getting grumpy! xD
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  • From SarahTaylor on November 14, 2008
    Never doubted that the story had a plot XD

    Love it!! I'm starting to like this pairing more than Bya/Ichi and it's all your fault ;)

    Next chapter soon please :)
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  • From ANON - Pickle Reviver on November 14, 2008
    A review! So now you have to write faster! WOOH! Cos I wanna read more! GLOMP
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  • From spiritfoxks on November 14, 2008
    Hehe, Ken-chan's getting possessive!
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  • From Gnat on November 13, 2008
    I'm burning with curiosity! Poor boy. As a GrimmIchi fan, I'll say don't be afraid to let anything happen there. u.u ...Well, maybe I'm biased, I know the story is about KenIchi. You're getting better and better at writing, which makes the story ever more enjoyable to read. Continue with all due speed!
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  • From nekogirl1 on November 11, 2008
    Oooh love this idea & plot so far. Hehe can't wait for the next chapter & to see what pairing happens next!
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  • From ANON - Pickle Reviver on November 10, 2008
    WOOH!!!! Ichi has to marry Renji, that's awesome! Ichi's gonna be so pissed about this when he finds out! xD
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