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Reviews for The Crumbling World

By : Rockyshores
  • From nekogirl1 on November 29, 2008
    Mhmmm, that cave scene was so hot & cute at the same time. Also, vote yes for the Ichi NC.
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  • From ANON - S.Venus on November 29, 2008

    A-I would like a rape scene.

    So...um yeah, I don't know any other to say this but STILL AMAZING! This story is actually doing a good job and I check up on it every chance I get. I would like to say that, I've read quite a lot of stories, but I think that it would be amazing to hear more of the other story plots, like Renji riding heroicly on a white stalion or Grimmjow in a dugeoun with pet jagurs or something. I mean you for one are braver then me to be able to write a yoai this cool. You're doing your style and you're doing it good. Keep it up!
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  • From satterb on November 28, 2008
    I LOVE this story...it is so much fun to read. I would be willing to read a rape scene as long as the story doesn't become too angsty. Keep up the great work! I'm glad that you update pretty regularly. I have already read everything else on your profile. I hope you keep creating for a long time.
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  • From SarahTaylor on November 28, 2008
    I like this story and if the plot calls for a rape scene then do the scene :)
    Everyone tortures the main character in their story at least a little bit, you just make it up to him later on, a good smut scene with Kenpachi XD
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  • From ANON - YellowBumble on November 27, 2008
    That was so hot! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love your story so far! Good luck with the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - S,Venus on November 26, 2008
    This story is absolutely amazing! A complete Favorite. I've never really stop to think about those two being a couple, yet in this story it's gotta be one of my top favorites. Can't wait till you update. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - StaplersBreak on November 26, 2008
    If you wish to contact me: hzlbyrn@aol.com. Other people attempting to do so will be ignored. Mind ya business.
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  • From ANON - StaplersBreak on November 26, 2008
    Hello, I have a bone to pick with you. Not about your writing because I have seen worse, and Kenpachi/Ichigo just tickles me to death! I believe (I know) that it was horribly unprofessional of you to highlight your flamers to other readers. It's none of our business, and you should respect reviewers more than that. At least they took the time to say something, proving that your story can at least motivate strong responses. And to everyone who targets someone for expressing their opinion (and using correct grammar while doing so) grow up! Its doesn't concern you anyway. Flames are just a part of fanfiction. Suck it up, thank the reviewer for their opinion, and keep writing anyway! There's a graceful and mature way to handle things...and I am not impressed with your methods.

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  • From Yakumo on November 25, 2008
    Ooh, nice lemon.
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  • From fullbloodartist on November 25, 2008

    I totally love all of your stories XD
    thanks to them I am now a compleet KenIchi-addict
    Keep up al the hard work (pun) ^.^
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  • From ANON - jade on November 25, 2008
    i like the story keep it up. i wanna see how it ends
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  • From Nanaka on November 25, 2008
    i love this story. it's refreshing to read a story with some OOC every now and then. Death is an idiot. your spelling/gramer may not be perfect but it is a long cry away from the worst i've ever had to read.
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  • From KitsuneNoMari on November 25, 2008
    I'm glad to see that dead didn't reply to all that. I hope 'dead' stays dead. XD

    Anyway dear, I'm glad we could help in anyway...especially what "another author here who prefers to remain unknown until the time being" said. She really gave a piece of her mind. (*wink*wink* I hope you get the hint here.) ^_^;;

    Anyway, loved your chapter and look forward to you next chapters.
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  • From pocketaces on November 25, 2008
    Just so you know, you're my favorite Bleach Fanfiction author, and I check for story updates daily, lol! Keep up the great work! This story has a really interesting base idea, and I like how you're developing it. Thanks for posting~!
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  • From gravybaby on November 23, 2008
    Another thing for "dead"....

    Before you rag on someones writing abilities maybe you should grow some balls and post your real name so that we lowly peons can bask in the so-called "glory" of your "talent"....

    [Geeze if the sarcasm were any thicker I'd need an 'effin shovel...]
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