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Reviews for First Captain's Club

By : PrplGrl
  • From Vyper on April 26, 2014
    I love this pairing. It is so hot! Please write more!
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  • From hsosborne on October 21, 2008
    amazing fic! can't wait for more of your work and thankyou so much for the heads-up
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  • From Ryokitty on September 29, 2008
    Holy... crap. That is so freaking hot. I do hope that you continue this because.. just.. wow.
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  • From happygirl24 on September 22, 2008
    oh god please write more seeing a sub byakuya was so fucking hot please please PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - remyjames on September 22, 2008
    Wow, first a hot springs handjob and now a tied up Byakuya getting pounded. *fans self* You did good :)
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  • From Yakumo on September 21, 2008
    MOAR! You should at least establish them as a steady couple before ending it. If you end it here it makes it more look like a 1 night stand. Just my opinion; I hope you continue this.
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  • From ANON - Anise on September 21, 2008
    If given a choice I think anyone would pick to have more of these two, that was definitely some very delicious smut, especially with Byakuya all tied up and at Ukitake's mercy! ;)
    It's cute how Byakuya was acting just like a teenager with a crush and then to see Byakuya's reaction when he finds out that Ukitake has known that he's liked him since he was young was very adorable. I think if you do decide to write more they need to at the very least have some discussion about what Ukitake said to him-it's entirely up to you but I hope to see more ^_^
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  • From ANON - deejo on September 21, 2008
    more please!!!
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  • From FieldsofHeather on September 21, 2008
    More, More!! Don't stop there. I think you need at least one more chapter, where Shunsui finds out, much to his shock, that not only did Ukitake get over him but also got himself a super hot new boyfriend. *grins*
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  • From mhmartini on September 20, 2008
    Interesting. I really hadn't considered this pairing (or Shunsui/Toushiro or Byakuya/Kenpachi, for that matter) but I'm intrigued by them all now. Besides, cross pairing five male captains DEFINITELY gets my attention!

    A scene that really stuck with me is where Byakuya wakes up to Jyuushiro coughing and thinks back to Hisana. That scene just seemed very real. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
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  • From ANON - Arria on September 18, 2008
    Oh. My. Good. Goat. That was so unbeleivably good that I still have the shakes. Please write more for this story so few people write Uki/Bya that every one is a treasure. Yours stands out as being very involved. I think I fried my keyboard with drool hehehe... I know it fried my brain. SO GOOD!!!
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  • From Yakumo on September 16, 2008
    OMG BATH SCENE COMING UP???? Please update again soon!!!
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  • From nightfox39 on September 15, 2008
    oh the suspense KILLS! please update soon, the hot springs sound promising!
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  • From ANON - deejo on September 15, 2008
    love this story. update soon.
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  • From missbri88 on September 14, 2008
    PMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Oh... My... GOD! You picked up my absolute favorite crack pairing in this story aswell?! Byakuya and Kenpaki... LOL. I must say that you had me rolling on the floor in a fit of insane laughter. Thank you! Im liking the story so far though. Im looking forward to the next chapter.
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