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Reviews for Chained to an Escapist

By : Lances
  • From Jicky on April 26, 2009
    Despite this story being in a twisted nature, I can't help but hope Byakuya will come to treasure Gin as someone he loves.
    Sincerely hope you will continue this story to the end!
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  • From storomoon on December 03, 2008
    dear god!!i absolutely can't wait for a update,you know how to keep gin in perfect
    character,its just amazing.i haven't been so interested in a fic like this in months,waiting for a update is killing me.this fic is driving insane how good it is. so please PLEASE more.
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  • From sakurakitten234 on October 27, 2008
    Awesome story! It's so hot - and it can only keep getting hotter! *Takes off pants in preparation for the heat*

    So . . . it looks like Gin isn't going to get those fingers back, huh? But maybe he can still get some use out of them, wink wink nudge nudge? (Translation: Ass. Severed fingers. Now. PLEEAASSE???)

    Please keep writing - can't wait to see more!
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  • From vbruce on October 17, 2008
    I am SO happy I decided to read this. Beautifully crafted imagery. I hope you continue soon.
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  • From enslavementthesis on October 14, 2008
    Firstly, she's going to say that she is really enjoying this fiction. Both the concept, and the way it is written are wonderful. Byakuya seems rather spot on, and she loved the little scene with Rukia and Gin. Him poking her in the knee? Priceless.

    The Kuchiki clan meeting seemed like a really good touch, too. It was very plausible. She enjoyed that particularly.

    She loves your writing style, too. You try to combine just the write amount of humour in a serious situation, and vice versa. You pull it off very well.

    There are a few bits and pieces that could do with some tweaking. Namely Gin's speech - she knows that it is difficult to try and replicate, but it really does add a lot more to the fiction if you try. -'You' equals 'Ya', 'Your' equals 'Yer' - et cetera et cetera,

    Also, his miserly behaviour seems a little out of character. She just can't see Gin feeling remorse or regret, or indeed really crying. He is a selfish, thrillseeking character with a remarkable lack of empathy for others. He is also quite manipulative and sly (which could be a lot of fun to see explored in this fiction - say getting other slaves into trouble after he intentionally did something wrong, or something) - she couldn't see him submitting to being a slave without a fight - no matter how many body parts he lost. Perhaps he would simply do it so he couldn't be punished.

    If you're having a little trouble with his characterisation, she would suggest reading TillThatTimes' "Sinner" (this is one of the only fictions she has seen where somebody has explored him harsher character, rather than trying to soften him up), and watching the episodes where he is prominent religiously. Also, there is a doujinshi called "Scent Of Power". Search for it on bleach-fap at LJ, or just google it. It's just got hints of Gin x Byakuya, but it's a perfect example of how she thinks the two would interact in such a situation.

    She could imagine how difficult it would be to write a proud, sadistic character like Gin in such a vulnerable position, and she commends you for doing such a wonderful job so far. Seriously, she can't stress to you how much she is enjoying this.

    Oh, that reminds her. There is a small meme on LJ which is a Gin x Byakuya, with a humiliation theme. Other than this fiction, it's the only one she's seen with this kind of setup. it's worth taking a look at, if you haven't seen it already.

    Anyway, keep up the good work, and she is really looking forward to an update.
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  • From nightfox39 on August 06, 2008
    You write beautifully. I mean it. Your word choice, the way you phrase your sentences- exquisite. I will keep checking for updates from you- in fact, I have this story bookmarked :)
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  • From thenightwanderer on August 04, 2008
    wohooo! I check the site and all of a sudden my favorite story is updated again! I believe they are IC... Since I think Byakuya is capable of doing things like that. He will always be the most cold hearted bastard I have ever seen in a manga-anime. And I like the way Gin seems a lot more himself and aware of the situation he put himself in.

    Great chapter! Thank you!
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on August 04, 2008
    That last chapter made my fingers hurt lol. Captivating...I can't wait to see what Bya-kun makes Gin-kun do next...or chop off...or eat...*shudders*
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  • From thenightwanderer on July 25, 2008
    Damn it... This fic is fantastic beyond reason. This is the first time I have ever read a ByaxGin fic... I doubt there is any other fic with this pairing. What is more of a huge plus is that you made the situation that Gin is in so believeable and tragic I felt really sorry for Gin. I have never disliked him, and you presented him under such a humane light that it is impossible to not think of him as a betrayed and disillusioned man-child... And All the characters are so in character that I must applaud you for achieving it in just two chapters... I will continue reading and reviewing this pearl of a fic...
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  • From enslavementthesis on July 24, 2008
    The first half of this chapter reminds her of Albert Camus' 'The Outsider'.

    ...She's always liked that book.
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  • From Sweetsong22 on July 13, 2008
    Ah, this seems to have alot of potential indeed, it's not a pairing I would have imagined but I think it will make for a great storyline. I think there are alot of Gin/Aizen pairings which I think are mostly consensual, I must admit that my curiosity is peaked at a potential submissive role for Gin to someone other than Aizen.

    One thing I wanted to point out, though I suspect you may already realize this. In one of the paragraghs, you mentioned that Gin would have to open his eyes in order to roll them. Well even though it appears his eyes are closed, we the viewers are to assume they are merely narrowed so tightly we can not see his pupils. We can blame this on poor drawing of the character. The few times it seemed to us that he "opened" his eyes, was merely him widening his eyelids. I wasn't sure if you were going to write this entirely under the concept that he walks around with his eyes closed.

    Either way, great first chapter, I look forward to the next chapter where hopefully Byakuya will begin mixing it up with Gin. ;)
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  • From Catarotta on July 12, 2008
    Loved it! I'm a huge Ichimaru fan and I enjoyed this immensely. Please continue this. It is a very original idea. Can't wait for the next chap. I'll be keeping an eye out for it!
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  • From enslavementthesis on July 11, 2008
    This is rather good, she's very interested to see how this will turn out.

    There are a few issues with dialogue and speech affectations - Gin's accent needs some work.

    You have a poetic writing style, which is very enjoyable to read and flows very well.

    She can't wait for the update!
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  • From Cindyip on July 11, 2008
    Oh Gin, please don't get yourself killed you are way to awesome a character to just let go:)
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