Click Here!

Reviews for Like a Tiger Treading on the Flowers

By : Rockyshores
  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on September 11, 2008
    OMG roflao Owowow oh god I'm in pain!! I don't know who to feel more bad for, I just can't decide!! Oh man, to see the look on the clerk's face when someone like Kenpachi comes asking for some help on condoms ^^ This is great. Man I wish I could think of a plot idea you can use, i really do!! Ken is like MY FAVORITE character in the whole series!! *blinks* Why am I going for the sadistic type lately? Anyway this is great and man I so wanna read more!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Beth on September 08, 2008
    I'm very much enjoying this particular fic. The pairing is cute, and I like how you made Ichigo uke, but he still has his aggressive personality. And your first attempt at a first person pov is very good. I love how you write Kenpachi. You do tend to revert back to third person pov sometimes, but that's very easy to do, and just as easy to fix. Over all, very nice.
    Report Review

  • From SarahTaylor on September 08, 2008
    Really like the stories, and to say you've never done first person before you did really well. There are a few places where you revert back to your original writing style but that's easy to fix. The story flows well enough.
    Report Review

  • From Shaylilin on September 08, 2008
    Your first person is good for the most part.
    I noticed the same thing that happens to me when I write FIrst person though,
    and sometimes your pronouns slip into third person.
    The story works as first person overall though.

    And poor Kenpachi and all the trouble with condoms...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nusku on September 08, 2008
    Poor Kenny...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - alisteal on September 03, 2008
    OMFG!! I'm having the most hilarious pictures in my head with Kenpachi buying CONDOMS!
    Report Review

  • From nightfox39 on August 29, 2008
    very nice, kudos and cookies!
    Report Review

  • From Afrieal on August 28, 2008
    I swear to Kami that Kenpachi is either part wolf demon or vampire... with his blood fettish either would be hot *snicker* keep up the great writing gotta go change the drool buckets now we've filled them with both stories

    Af and Rysh
    Report Review

  • From ANON - alisteal on August 28, 2008
    I REALLY REALLY liked that one!! Keep em comin!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Nusku on August 25, 2008
    oh my! such boldness
    Report Review

  • From nightfox39 on August 25, 2008
    haha, you give kenpachi the funniest lines. ^__^ cute.
    Report Review

  • From spiritfoxks on August 25, 2008
    That's it Kenny right to the point!
    Report Review

  • From nightfox39 on August 24, 2008
    haha, you're humorous as always.
    two things i did notice that could use some revision: one sentence, you said, "Kenpachi fought down the urge to bask as Ichigo went on about how fucking awesome that it." I think you got a little distracted there, and towards the end you typed 'sense' instead of 'since.'
    but, good little ficlet so far ^_^ I'm interested in seeing what else you come up with.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ur_new_best_friend on August 23, 2008
    he should just go up to him and be like you i like you then ichigo goes oh i like you too then ken-chan goes no i like like you
    Report Review

  • From ANON - alisteal on August 22, 2008
    AWWWW poor Ken-chan!!! Hmmmm as for ideas......maybe writing it in the sand somewhere.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!