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Reviews for Revive Me

By : Gnat
  • From steisi on June 10, 2008
    Hi love. I was ecstatic to see you'd decided to continue this, even if it is for just a few more chapters. This particular one almost made me cry. I loved it, don't get me wrong. I just found myself too caught up in it all, I guess. You're doing a wonderful job at making it all seem realistic in the sense that the characters act much in the way I think real people would given the more than stressful conditions of their lives. And that draws the reader in, makes him feel involved with what's happening. With the characters' thoughts and feelings. I'll be definitely looking forward to reading the next chapter, hopefully from Grimmjow's point of view. I'm very much interested in what his thoughts on Ichigo's behaviour would be. Kisses!
    P.S.
    I recommend you listen to 'Milk' by Garbage. It may be just me, but I think it fits the Ichigo from this chapter perfectly.
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  • From Rockyshores on June 10, 2008
    So bloody hot!!!
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  • From ANON - NeonOranges on June 03, 2008
    That was amazing, and probablly as in-character as I've ever seen Grim in a fan-fic. Nice.
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  • From Gnat on May 24, 2008
    Just thought I would stick this in here! Grammar corrections aren't annoying, don't worry. :) The tense switch was originally a mistake in the first part with Ichigo's POV. I went back to fix it, and decided I actually liked it that way, so I kept it up and mirrored it in Grimmjow's POV as well.

    Past tense was allowing them both to be introspective and deliver their thoughts, while present tense forces a revelation of what they actually feel and want without being able to censor it. That's what I thought, anyway. >.>;
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  • From Rockyshores on May 23, 2008
    I so love this, I am bookmarking it so I can read it again cuz its just so fucking sexy.
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  • From ANON - Pickles on May 23, 2008
    Arghh nosebleed! *dies from bloodloss*
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  • From steisi on May 23, 2008
    Yet another brilliant take on Grimmjow/Ichigo, love! You did beautifully, as usual. I loved the fact that you gave us the events in both their points of view. It's unbelievable, how alike they can think at times. They both wanted to feel something different, and they found it in each other. Ichigo wanted to feel alive, because he was dead inside. Grimmjow wanted to numb the pain of feeling too alive by conquering and taking death as he saw it; an-orange haired shinigami. I really love the psychological aspects you, even if it's subconsciously, explore in your stories. There's always a certain dependancy in your characters' personalities. They compliment each other, offer what the other needs. All in all, I loved this fic. I just want to let you know I spotted a few grammar errors; mostly in the tense. You seem to switch from past to present in the same sentence ithout any real reason. I hope I'm not coming off as annoying or anythong, I just thought you'd like to know. Otherwize, I aplaud you latest work and encourage you wholeheartedly to keep providing us loyal readers with your admittedly addictive writing! Kisses!
    P.S.
    Ichigo sucking on Grimmjow's fingers was hot as hell, by the way. Loved that touch!
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  • From ANON - =^^= on May 23, 2008
    This was just so beautiful and amazing, blew me the hell away.
    but this ---> "…Damn I’m good." made my day lol i can die so happy now lol Damn straight he's good.
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