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Reviews for A Shinigami Valentine

By : maidenhair
  • From xSTALKERx on August 08, 2008
    Hmm.... Kenpachi is a moron. Everybody but him seems to know the rumors are just that, rumors....

    I'm sure the lunkhead will come around eventually. Perhaps he will "overhear" Chizu mentioning how well her false rumors were working and she how big of an idiot he's been...
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  • From luna26 on August 08, 2008
    Another great chapter. Somehow I don't see Akina being a very good patient...though I have a feeling she'll be bored in bed for awhile still. At least Yachiru will come visit I hope. Though I'm more curious if Chizu will make an appearance while she's recovering. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From morgansgirl23 on August 05, 2008
    I absolutely loved chapter 23! It was filled with so much angst I could barely stand it, but at the same time once again brought a bit of realism to the characters and their actions. Honestly you can't expect a proud man like Kenpachi to drop everything he was feeling before even with a death scare, but I'm sure it's making him think twice about what's really important to him. Thanks so much for updating!!
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  • From xSTALKERx on August 05, 2008
    I liked the chapter. Sure there wasn't much action, in terms of fighting anyway, but it moved the story along nicely and gave us a deeper look at the characters.

    I can't wait for the next chapter, will Kenpachi see the error's of his ways??
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  • From morgansgirl23 on July 23, 2008
    Thanx so much for updating so quickly! Chapter 21 gave a nice closure on the motel room scene and gently transitioned onto the rest of her patrol. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From luna26 on July 21, 2008
    well, won't he feel like a total turd if she ends up really getting hurt on this patrol. What will the little pink wonder have to say about all this as well when she gets back and avoids him like the plague :)
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From morgansgirl23 on July 21, 2008
    Okay chapter 20 just came out of left field! I had no idea that was going to happen and I think Kenpachi was a total ass for doing that to Akina. I mean didn't he learn from the whole dinner disaster that Chizu is a liar and spreads rumors? I mean come on! I love Zaraki, he's one of my 3 top favorites on the show but I can't help feeling a little pissed at his lack of faith. All in all this was a very nice twist that I sooooo didn't see coming and I can't wait to read your next update!
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  • From xSTALKERx on July 21, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I literally screamed it at the end of the chapter... Literally...

    Right now I am kinda hoping that Akina actually kills Chizu. Violently. There must be lots of blood.
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  • From spooksies on June 01, 2008
    this reminds me of......ME!!! hehehehehehe.....anyways great fic! is the end in site?

    enjoying the funny and sexy captains!
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  • From lovelessjayson on June 01, 2008
    ohhh ohh another good chapter ``begs``` more more ok when you up date .
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  • From Cuchulainn on May 30, 2008
    Yeah. Interesting. Akina's pretty cute. Yachiru's a bit too much of a kid, but then that's how most people write her.

    So when is the bitch going to loosen up? She needs a good kicking.
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  • From orionshadow on May 29, 2008
    I liked this chapter. Nice level of explanation and complication going on and are you hinting (blatantly) at Retsu and Yamamoto? Now that's an interesting twist. It could work.

    I feel sorry for Soi, don't ask me why.

    And next?
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  • From spooksies on May 27, 2008
    the shit as hit the fan!! way cool chapter!

    keep going with this!

    love it!

    ~_^
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  • From orionshadow on May 22, 2008
    Like the meeting and the manipulation and the date. Feel the sexual tension. Zaraki seems to be getting a lot of action recently on this site. Weird.

    But Yachiru and Toshiro? It's hard to match Yachiru with anyone and I wouldn't be game to try. I suppose he was the best choice as everyone had to have a date. As least you didn't match her with Ukitake or wait a minute.... Yamamoto? Are you feeling nauseous yet? Hisagi and Soi...... And who is matched up with Kira? Questions, questions.

    Poor Ikkaku. He never seems to get lucky.
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  • From orionshadow on May 21, 2008
    Cute, cute. Yes, very cute. Thank goodness,some one who portrays Yachiru as something other than a very young child. She might like sweets, but that doesn't make her completely child like.

    Like the OC too.
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