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Reviews for Flawless Imperfections

By : WannaBePirate
  • From lovelessjayson on June 08, 2008
    Ahhh threesome come on it is easy and not to mention kinky...``mind wonders`` ok back to the review thanks for posting the new chapter I love it great job
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  • From maidenhair on June 04, 2008
    Hot, sweet and romantic. I think you nailed it. Good job! :)
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  • From lovelessjayson on June 01, 2008
    well so far so good would love to read more.
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  • From PandaGaara on May 31, 2008
    I enjoyed it!! It took me awhile before I could write lemons for my FF.net account too. XD So what I did was read a bunch of GOOD stories with GOOD lemons...and before I knew it I was a writing my own pervy lemons LOL.

    And yeah its ok to not like butterflies...I dont trust then either because once one flew INTO my EAR!! God I FREAKED!!

    Well I'll be watching out for your next chapter. Until then Ja ne!! =^_^=
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  • From PandaGaara on May 30, 2008
    LMAO!! I love this story! Ken-chan is so horny XD Though I bet he'd get farther with Rei-chan if he was more patient and sensitive XD though its hard to find those kinds of men these days *sigh* =^_^=

    Anyway I hope you update soon! Ja ne!
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  • From lovelessjayson on May 28, 2008
    PERV...well ok so your not tooo bad lol. Good chappy thanks for posting can't wait to read more.. with real smut between them
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  • From xSTALKERx on May 26, 2008
    I'm liking this story...


    To me though, the voice in her head, her "sword" is sounding more and more like a hollow every day. New vizard perhaps?
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  • From lovelessjayson on May 26, 2008
    ahhh I love this story up date soon please please
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  • From SFPANTHER on May 26, 2008
    This is a great story. I love the way it is written and hope to see more soon. I await paitently for the next update. Great job.
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  • From maidenhair on May 25, 2008
    I'm curious to see if she can control her zanpakuto or will it control her? Nice touch with the inner struggle Zaraki's suffering with.
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  • From maidenhair on May 22, 2008
    Lovely. Two troubled people finding each other in that chaotic world. You gotta love it! I really like how you describe Zaraki and his mixed-up feelings. He's not a man to handle such emotions well. But he recognizes the effect she has on him. Wonderful!
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  • From maidenhair on May 21, 2008
    I've chosen to review this story here rather than at FF.net for two reasons...first, I was stunned to see that you hadn't received any reviews thus far. Second, I've been lazy and haven't reviewed it yet despite enjoying all the chapters. It's a great story. Especially if you love Zaraki like I do. You have some great elements...a unique, well crafted OC, humor, sex and lots of shinigami shenanigans! I'm curious to see what happens next for these two. Keep up the wonderful work!
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