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Reviews for Perpetual

By : Cuchulainn
  • From ANON - moodymel on August 22, 2011
    Great story! The last chapter was the best. I just loved the way Orihime took charge and took revenge. I would definately love a sequel too.
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on February 11, 2011
    Honey this was just unbelievably fantastic please say your writing a sequel as we speak. I liked how Starrk pointed out the obvious and made Orihime face the facts about herself. The fact that she cut Aizen's dick off with her powers was just tooo funny to me tlk about karma hahaha. aw not kool makin fun of Yammy he is smarter than your average bear. True art work can't wait to see any other stories ya got posted.
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  • From LadyOfDaGame on February 11, 2011
    Now this was a good chapter can't wait to read the next
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  • From ANON - erica on July 08, 2010
    BRAVO-BRAVO
    I REALLY LOVE THIS...
    THAT FUCKER, AIZEN. HE DESERVES THAT...
    Hime cut aizen penis?
    That is what I love the most.

    Made please ulquihime fic...
    I WOULD LOVE TO READ IT

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  • From ANON - taixi on July 08, 2010
    ummm, that was rather abrupt. I'm of course glad that Aizen met a fitting fate (Lorena Bobbitt with a satisfying twist). But wow, so much happened so suddenly in a single chapter - I wonder if this was your plan all along, or did you just tire of the story? I see why you concluded that Orihime couldn't be with Ichigo in the future, but I think it would have been worth perhaps another chapter to explore how she reached (and came to accept) a number of drastic conclusions (re: no future with Ichigo, staying in HM, and becoming empress) after Aizen's emasculation. Also, one can never have too much of another chapter (= chance for the characters to get it on) - perhaps also allowing for a chance to establish somewhat of a hierarchy among the paramours (or sex buddies, as you've left it...although it would be nice to think there is some degree of fondness amongst the remaining men for our heroine...)

    It was a great/engaging story, but this last chapter left me wishing it went a little slower (and pardon my pun - throw us a bone at the end!)
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  • From SSjDiizoid on December 01, 2009
    I may not have reviewed very often since that first time, but I've been keeping up with the story from time to time. It's coming along very nicely, and I do admit to being glad seeing characters are standing up to Aizen. The only real problem will be his hypnosis should it come down to a serious fight. Hope to read the next chapter soon! Go Stark!
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  • From ANON - Cltome on November 29, 2009
    Non-con and dub-con are my top bulletproof kinks, so naturally I like this lots. Needs more Ulquiorra, though. :D
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  • From ANON - Maki Maki O on October 21, 2009
    Ecstatic that you've updated~! This is my fav fic~~!!
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  • From ANON - Kashima on October 21, 2009
    Very good i have to admit despite the fact that poor orihime suffers so much i am very fond of this story. I hope the next chapter is posted soon as i am very curious to see how tousen will react in front of the man he is supposed to be loyal to.
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  • From ANON - Kazes on October 20, 2009
    Woah! Creepy, creepy Aizen! I like this story :D I started it ages ago and it's still good :D
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  • From ANON - Kazes on October 01, 2009
    Oh I read this story ages ago and I thought it had been abandoned! Apparently not :D Hmm I find it a little disturbing but I love stories with Grimmjow portrayed similarly to how you have him (kind of a good guy). I also love your explanations of Touson's actions, very clever indeed.
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  • From JOler on September 25, 2009
    It will be interesting to see how events unfold, especially once the rescue party is sighted. One must wonder if Orihime's partners will side with the rescuers in the end just to see her safety away from Aizen and his sick pleasures. One must also wonder if the rescue party will go easy on those helping Orihime if she pleads for clemency on their part - siting that they have aided her and seen to her safety and well being in one form or another and been relatively gentle and caring instead of torturing her as they could have. Personally I'd like to see how Orihime responds to each of the males once she is rescued ... including the rescue party and, of course, Aizen and the other 'bad' guys, including those she has been sleeping with. The question is ... are the Arrancars sterile or will she discover that she is actually pregnant one of these days? It could always happen even if she is healing herself afterward, who knows that might actually help keep any possibly viable sperm alive long enough to make her pregnant if she has a fertile egg at the right spot at that time. I wonder what Aizen would do then, and how each of the potential fathers would react. Finding out you are going to be a parent can seriously change the way a person thinks and behaves. It would just be an interesting twist to see occur.

    mofaf1


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  • From Tiptipnaway on September 11, 2009
    I've noticed to, in the show and manga he seems to be able to see a little bit. I'd have to assume that its his glasses or whatever it is he's wearing.
    I like it alot. Gin is my all time favorite. More of him is always welcome.
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  • From ANON - Maki Maki O on August 15, 2009
    Faints in anticipation for the next installment. Hopes for an update soon.
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  • From ANON - Emily on June 21, 2009
    I really like this story, the plot is definitly comeing out more now.
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