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Reviews for Of Violence

By : Crya2Evans
  • From SarahTaylor on July 28, 2008
    The ending was perfect. The part with Rukia was really sad and the ending kinda lifted my spirits a little.
    I was wondering when the Byakuya/Rukia convo was gonna come. I've been imagining accusations and home truths all aimed Byakuya's way. He's not gonna be able to deny his feelings for long after that.
    Byakuya playing pretty, pretty princess *giggle snort*
    Next chapter please.
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  • From Shaylilin on July 28, 2008
    I totally called that it was going to be Pretty Pretty Princess. I keep trying to get my husband to play it with our daughter. Anyway, great chapter. The reality of the whole separation thing is hard to read, but makes it that much better. The story is just awesome. I feel so bad for Byakuya. I mean, you're supposed to be on the side of your family, but when it's their fault... ugh, this story is so close to home. I just wanted to say everything seems to be captured perfectly.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on July 28, 2008
    Are we going to get to see Rukia's side now? I'm looking forward to getting more insight into her character.
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  • From Yakumo on July 28, 2008
    Pretty Pretty Princess...that's a freakin awesome name for a game. XD You should go into some detail about it next time. XDDDD
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  • From ANON - english muffin on July 26, 2008
    Oh, Rukia, I go through stages of love and hate for you. Another good chapter; I always like seeing the plot from different characters. It feels like the ByaIchi is so far away, but it'll be sweet when we finally get there. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on July 23, 2008
    I wouldn't want you to speed up your plot for anything. Shame on those people who only think of the smut value of the story! I want you to keep going exactly as you are!
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  • From SarahTaylor on July 22, 2008
    I just want to grab Byakuya's shoulders and shake him!!! I think he's gotten used to living in denial so much that he can't seem to drag himself out.
    I loved how the kids ended up in bed with him and I know it said that it was all the comfort he could give but I think they were giving him more comfort than he could offer them.
    I love Renji, he's just such a good character. I love how fast he was talking and that she had to translate it. It took me a second to split the words up too and I was reading them XD The rumour mills don't know how close to the truth they are.
    I really look forward to the next chapter and can't believe that you're nearly half-way through this.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on July 22, 2008
    *sniffle* Your skill never ceases to amaze me, Draco-san. It really does. My heart ached as I read this chapter, especially when Kaien and Syaoran tried to get answers.

    I said it once, I'll say it again: You are an amazing author.

    Keep it up, Draco-san! ^w^
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  • From Yakumo on July 22, 2008
    hmm..now that you mention it, I suppose she wasn't as annoying before Hueco Mundo, but she still gets on my nerves in my opinion. -Huggles Renji- Renji-kun = LOVE. I hope to see some Byakuya soon. Byakuya also is LOVE. xD The 6th division has the sexy officers. :3
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  • From ANON - english muffin on July 20, 2008
    Haha, I so love Zaraki. Just when things were about to get really angsty, he comes to save the day (not that i don't like the angst. :D) Another good chapter; I like how this story is more about plot than about a pairing. It's refreshing that the couple is taking second to family/friend matters. Can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From Yakumo on July 15, 2008
    Good chapter, except that I'm not a fan of Renji/Orihime. In fact, Orihime's my least favorite character. Renji on the other hand...-hugs him tight- xD Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I hope you don't get mad or anything at me for this review. T_T
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  • From SarahTaylor on July 15, 2008
    I do love Orihime sometimes, even though she started out as Ichigo's friend she's still not willing to turn on Rukia. If I were Rukia though I'd be scared of her little warning. I love that even after so many years Orihime still has that cheery outlook on life.

    I like that you've tied in your wonderful on going series too. When I read the bit about Kenpachi having a kid it took me a few minutes to place that it's from seritai monogatari (bad spelling I know).

    Hope you update soon 'cos this is really good and soooooo adictive. XD
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  • From ANON - Ranna on July 15, 2008
    Ah, joy. Good fic at last. Thank you for your frequent updates, I really appreciate it. And thank you for PLOT!!! It really is a nice change from some of the others stories I've been reading lately.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on July 15, 2008
    *giggles* More Kenpachi-messing-with-Byakushi's-head time! I love it! XD And major "awwwww~" for the scene between Orihime and Rukia. It's nice to know that one of their friends understands.

    lol I loved those two drabbles! XD ...Then again, I love everything that I've read from you so that's no surprise. ^w^ I look forward to more, as always! =D
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on July 13, 2008
    Yes! You have returned! Once again you have completed a nice long chapter that has the readers asking for more. I hope you find the time to update again soon.
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