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By : Crya2Evans
  • From Yakumo on October 06, 2008
    I love Ukitake...he's so adorable. Thanks for giving him a nice big role. ^_^
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  • From SarahTaylor on September 30, 2008
    You had me worried there for a sec, what with the warning about tissues and all I thought he was gonna lose her. I kept having to make myself slow down to read, I just needed to know. Why do I have a horrible feeling that it's only going to get worse?? That something really bad is coming??
    On a lighter note, I loved your depiction of Renji, the ever manic expectant father. That made me laugh, I could just see the hole almost forming beneath his socked feet as he paced back and forth XD
    I can't wait for the next chapter, I just know it's gonna be a tear jerker but that's ok.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on September 30, 2008
    Poor Ichigo! He goes from the happy occasion of birth to the crushing worry of his little girl being in the hospital, or the Seireitei equivalent. But as long as she's okay, I'm okay with this little twist. But those divorce papers, though... How long are they going to be buried? I guess I'll just have to wait and see. X3

    lol Renji almost got himself sedated. X3

    Anyway, another great chapter, Draco-san! ^o^ *hug*
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  • From Yakumo on September 30, 2008
    Good chapter but I can't stand Renji/Hime. I've said this before so I'll go ahead and let it go but I just had to say it one more time. I WANNA BE THE ONE HAVING RENJI'S BABY! -Looks at that sentence- O_O O..k.. anyway, I will say that Orihime and Renji were both well done on my opinion. They were both in character very well. Poor Ichigo...-hugs him tightly- He needs a hug. Please update soon, I love your stories.
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  • From Shaylilin on September 29, 2008
    This chapter is so, oh my god!
    I jumped straight to the conclusion that she wound up with TB.
    I really hope that's not the case. Jyuu would be so distraught (obviously).

    I totally can picture the nervous wreck Renji is. My husband is quiet and reserved, and he about lost it with our first kid.

    I feel so badly for the kids. I can understand holding everything in to keep your parent from feeling more pain.
    I went through it as a teenager. I can't imagine what it would be like on a younger kid, one who is old enough to understand, but not old enough to really deal with it. As hard as it is, you write it so well.

    Thank you for a wonderful chapter.
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  • From ANON - english muffin on September 26, 2008
    Wow, kisses! After reading so much fanfic, it actually was quite abrupt and shocking. I might not have looked for it had you not hinted it would be there in this chapter. Thanks for another good chapter.

    PS: I left an anonymous review on Of Violence because I totally forgot to write my name and e-mail. Sorry. ^^;
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  • From mhmartini on September 20, 2008
    Aha, the moment arrives! I read this before work, so I was unable to review immediately. It did give me a lovely image to think about during the day. May I just mention that having Ichigo and Byakuya kissing in your head during work is a blessing and a curse??

    I love the way you set up the encounter. It was anticipated, as the story was obviously going that way, but the circumstances seemed so innocent. The little details, like morning breath and awkward positions, just made it more innocent and brought about a feeling of spontaneity, even though we knew it was coming.

    The talk between Ichigo and Jyuushiro was great. I like the paternal character you've developed in both men. I do feel bad for Rukia, though, since Ichigo seems to have quite a few people to support him and she seems very alone. I do wonder about these strange hollows and what you have planned for them.

    I was thinking about the inner conflicts you describe in Byakuya. Based on his actions with Hisana and Rukia, I think he is man of hidden passion, and I think you're capturing that well, along with a good dose of denial. To think of the unflappable Kuchiki-sama with butterflies in his stomach is just... endearing.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much.

    PS-I am flattered by your comment! Thank you! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Ranna on September 18, 2008
    Yay! They finally started working things out. About time!
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  • From Yakumo on September 18, 2008
    -nosebleeds- OMG THANK YOU! THAT SCENE JUST MADE MY DAY! (or night, in the case.) xD
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  • From SarahTaylor on September 17, 2008
    Yes yes yes!!!
    I was cheering for them, and I loved that you mentioned that it was far from perfect what with Ichigo's morning breath and all XD
    I felt so sorry for Rukia, she's really all alone now sort of and hasn't really got anyone to lean on like Ichi has.
    I was really happy when Bya-kun finally admited that he wasn't even managing to fool himself anymore and that he was completely in love with our favourate strawberry.
    I love that Ichi nearly made Juu-chan choke on his own breath by just saying straight out that he'd kissed Bya-kun. It's like he thought 'hey, I've just kissed my best friend, why mince words.' I almost fell out of my own chair, that he would be so direct almost floored me.
    Thank you for not making us wait 2 weeks for this, I don't think my sanity could have taken it lol I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Shaylilin on September 17, 2008
    Oh my gosh. That was like the sweetest kiss ever.

    Finally, finally, finally.

    Sign the papers, Ichigo. Make it easier on yourself.

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  • From ANON - Kuromei on September 17, 2008
    *fangirl squeak* Yay! The first move's been made! XD Now, for them to get their acts together. 83 *watches and waits paitently*

    On a side note, those strange Hollows are worrying me. Rukia won't, you know, "run into one," will she? *worried*

    Anyhoo, great chappie, as always! XD I look forward to more! ^w^
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  • From mhmartini on September 16, 2008
    Okay, I am officially hooked on your story! I came over to the Bleach fandom to check it out and I landed on your story, and I'm glad I ventured over here! You're developing the characters quite believably and you've managed to introduce OCs without them taking over the story. They add to the story while keeping focus on the canon characters. Very nicely done.

    I love seeing Uncle Byakuya. That man has a soft side. He's just too darn polite and formal to show it. I love how you build his character and display his soft spot for the kids.

    Your dialogue is also very well constructed. I can "hear" the characters saying that; it's very believable. Some of the elements you incorporate from canon serve beautifully to remind us that even though time has passed, these are still the same people (I'm specifically thinking of Orihime's decorating taste and craving combinations, here!).

    Overall, I am enjoying this story very much and I truly look forward to reading more of it when you post more.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on September 10, 2008
    Oh, man, I can't wait til next week! *gleegleegleeglee*
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  • From ANON - Nusku on September 10, 2008
    Oh my!
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