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By : Crya2Evans
  • From Yakumo on December 09, 2008
    T__T BAD KAIEN! -hugs Ukitake tightly- I hope they make up..
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  • From ANON - ayachan on December 09, 2008
    That's understandable about the lack of lemon. Actually, I was thinking that a lemon wouldn't be appropriate either. I mean, Rukia just died and then Ichigo decides to hop into bed with Byakuya? Not a smart move... unless it's like... forever into the future >_> Anyway, what a good chapter! It hurts me that Kaien blames Jyuushiro for Rukia's death, which is understandable.. but still. I hope they make up in the next chapter!
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  • From Shaylilin on December 09, 2008
    I have to say that I agree with not including a lemon. It would not fit with the story, and I love the story. Every time I read something sad there are tears in my eyes and every time I read something happy, I can't help but smile. I'm so anxious to see how everyone gets through this tough time and how things develop between Ichigo and his children and Byakuya.

    Thanks so much for another outstanding chapter. I can't wait to read the rest of this one.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on December 09, 2008
    Oh dear. Poor Kaien.
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  • From sweetsatincocoa on December 09, 2008
    I think it's a good idea not to have Ichigo and Byakuya have sex. It would cheapen the story. It would be oddly placed, especially since no one else has had sex in the story. If they were to lay in bed again and lovingly hold each other, then that would make sense. Just do you. And on with the happiness, eh? I'm tired of you fucking with my emotions. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2008
    So depressing. Every time I read this story now, it seems like I grow my own little rain cloud overhead. I'm weathering this story though; I've got my umbrella and I'm hoping for some sunshine soon. Okay, all silliness aside, this was a very good chapter - they all are, but I really liked this one. It could have been that Yumichika embarrassed the hell out of Byakuya (always something I get a good kick out of), or it might have been the cleaning out of Rukia's apartment. I'm not really sure how, but there was something really significant about that to me. Together they cleaned out the little bits and pieces of Rukia and collected them in boxes. I can't really explain how much it affected me, on a personal level. And as much as it saddens me to know that neither will ever really give up those pieces of Rukia, it helps to know that there's another presence in Ichigo's heart to keep them contained.

    Ahh! I'm so in love with this story. I swear I check almost obsessively for updates. That said - I’m anxious for December!
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  • From Yakumo on November 19, 2008
    Ganbatte, Draco-san!! ^o^ Thanks for coming to update your stories here.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on November 18, 2008
    *sigh* I'm sad. But the chapter was good.
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  • From SarahTaylor on November 17, 2008
    Another rather sad chapter, beautifully written and laced through with meloncoly.

    I loved the interaction between Yumichika and the two captains, it was nice to have a funny moment mixed in and it was perfectly placed in the story.

    I love Kenpachi and Ichigo fighting, but Ichi really wasn't in it. It's more fun when he's in the right frame of mind.

    Love the chapter and waiting patiently (mostly) for the next one XD
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  • From missbri88 on November 17, 2008
    yay! I so wasnt expecting to hear from you until Dec... it was a nice surprise. ^^ Great chapter too!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2008
    Ugh! You're killing me! Though, I must say the fluff at the end helped me get a hold of my tears (for once). I'm not sure...that's so strange--my email address should still be working. I've been having problems with my computer though, so it's not too much of a surprise to me that I'm not receiving emails. Irritating hotmail.

    I'm sorry for the late review! I really need to check for updates more often. As always, you’ve put out a great chapter, filled to the brim with emotion, and yet the character’s pain isn’t over bearing. You’re a genius, if I do say so myself. Lol.
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  • From mhmartini on October 29, 2008
    I'm never sure whether it's okay to put spoilers in a review just in case someone reads the reviews before the story, but for this one, there are spoilers. Fair warning given.

    Wow. This was an emotional chapter the whole way through, and it definitely drew me in with that emotional tug. You really conveyed the overwhelming feeling Ichigo must have. I know some parts were meant to "tug" more than others, but a few really just grabbed hold of me and yanked.

    When Ichigo finds Byakuya sitting on the porch, slogging through his sorrow silent and alone, it was so real. I could see him (Byakuya) in my mind sitting there, tear trails and all. And yes, that's exactly what he would do: be the proud and unflappable noble who was above even this pain, while inside he crumbled. Again. Ichigo's comforting actions were so very perfect. Heck, _I_ wanted to comfort Byakuya! But just picturing them sitting like that, taking solace in their shared grief, was so sadly romantic. I loved it.

    But of all the things in this chapter that were emotional moments, the one that really touched me the most was when Kaien offered up his stuffed rabbit, "given by a son who now had more important things to fear than the dark." That line was just so beautiful. It really illustrated how they have lost a part of their childhood that we all take for granted and that they can never have back, no matter how much they try to go back to "normal." It's sort of a coming of age that is way before its time.

    Byakuya and Ichigo talking after the funeral was so sweet, and their sleeping arrangements made up for the overall sadness of the chapter. It's a tiny little light at the end of the tunnel, just waiting to be found. I really like how you're taking your time getting to the romance between Byakuya and Ichigo. Of course I am looking forward to them finally getting together, but the journey is as important as the destination in this case. I am certainly enjoying the journey so far!
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  • From Yakumo on October 28, 2008
    This has to be the saddest chapter of any story from you I've read. Even though I don't like Rukia that much, it still made me sad that she died. Also, I'm glad you were able to throw in a little Byakuya/Ichigo moment there. I hope things get better for everyone in later chapters..T_T
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  • From SarahTaylor on October 28, 2008
    I don't know where to start... That chapter was so sad but so perfect too. I was so close to tears the whole way through, especially when Kaien walked towards his dad trying to be so brave and I just thought, oh God how's he gonna tell them. When Ichigo was comforting Byakuya I was so happy that Bya-chan actually let his emotions out and let himself cry. I had to stop reading for a few minutes before I started the funeral just to compose myself. You truly are a master wordsmith and your stories are obviously written with real feeling and emotion and are not done just by the numbers like some. I loved how you managed a little bit of humour at the end between Urahara and Ichigo, it's nice to see Urahara a little happier too. Oh and I loved how Ken-chan and the 11th were acting as security for the funeral, that was a really nice touch and that Ichi had threated everyone with Shirosaki should they try to change his funeral plans. I imagine that in his hightened state of grief, him going Shiro would be a very dangerous idea, for other people.
    It's going to be a little hard waiting for a whole month but this story is definately worth the wait. Have fun with the NaNo Writhing (?) sorry, I'm terrible at remembering things like that.
    I don't think I can write much more without crying so I'll sign off now.
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  • From Shaylilin on October 28, 2008
    Tears. I cried. It's so hard.
    I'm so glad for all the support the family has.
    I can see how much Ichigo and Byakuya are going to need one another now.
    I hate that the pain has to be felt, but I can understand it.

    I can't wait for your next update. This is such a fantastic story.
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