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By : Crya2Evans
  • From Yakumo on May 22, 2008
    Great job on this chapter. I can tell you put a lot of effort into this.
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  • From keraizaki on May 15, 2008
    Wow man!! It's starting to get realy into the story!! I loved the part were his dauter(?) said "don't cry" I thought it was realy good and sad at the same time!! LOVE ya story!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =]
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 15, 2008
    more more more more more more more more more, sorry my repeat key got stuck...
    I loved the ending, Syaoran is sooooooo sweet. This story is getting better with each chapter and I didn't think it could get better than chapter 1 'cos that was brill. I can't wait for the next few chapters, I'm sure they'll be even better than this one.
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on May 15, 2008
    First Kaien asks Byakuya to do something about the fights, and now Syaoran is trying to help her father in her own way. They're just lucky the twins are too little, otherwise there'd be two more kids trying to do soemthing. Attacks on all four sides, in a manner of speaking.

    All I can say is; Rukia needs help. Lots and lots of help. Immediately. *grabs another tissue*
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  • From YamiBakura on May 15, 2008
    Chapter 4

    *is crying* Oh my gosh. This is so incredibly amazing. I even like Rukia as the angry, abusive wife. There's not very much said these days about abusive wives who hit their husbands - most people think of spousal abuse, they imagine beaten women and loud, drunken men.

    Then you weren't kidding about heartbreaking, either. Although, it was mostly that the chapter had ended that was sad, and ended on such a terrible note, as well. I'm hooked. Completely. I would like this even if it weren't slashy. The kids are adorable, your characterizations are fantastic, and the plot is amazing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 15, 2008
    Arg, I already had to open up my new box of tissues, and I know it's only going to get worse. But--the part about this story that makes it so damn frustrating is that you're leaving me unable to hate Rukia! I can read her pain just as easily as I can read Ichigo's and somehow it's making it so much harder for me.

    You’ve also done a wonderful job with the children, not too “mature” for their age, and still being able to insert them into the plot to help further it along...You’re definitely an amazing author!

    I can't wait until the next chapter! ^-^
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  • From Shiro813Flowergurl on May 15, 2008
    ....That ending.... I nearly cried at that! Ichigo's Daughter knows that her Daddy needs comfort and protection from all the dangers in life...which includes the people you love! Awwww!!! I feel bad for Ichigo. but at the same time, I somewhat feel bad for Rukia... sort of...I mean, its hard to sympathize with Rukia at this point. With Ichigo's reasons for staying and his helplessness and lack of reaction with her beatings. And her own frustrations with handling the majority of her Division's work though she could attempt to lighten her load somehow...

    Your explaination of the winter war...very agreeable! I'm hoping that might be outcome for own Three Tratiors! Aizen dead! Tousen Dead! by Suicide! and Gin Alive! or Insane! Both can work for me!!! Honestly...I can't fantom any reason...his purpose...his goal to why he'll join Aizen???

    Heheheh...I'm looking forward for that Shuu/Uki fic in your Seretei Montagai fics!!! XD Yeah I know Kira needs love!!! but I find him a fop! **Plus I've been on a Shuu/Uki high ever since reading the recent BONDAGE fics about those two!!! XD Have you seen them?**

    Anyways, looking forward for the next update!
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  • From Yakumo on May 14, 2008
    NOOO DON'T HURT ICHIGO! -clings to him- Bad Rukia! ;O_O um..anyway, great job on this. I love how the children behave. xD
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  • From ANON - Ranna on May 14, 2008
    Well, I'm slightly surprised tht Matsumoto didn't gab it all over Soul Society. I guess this kind of thing is too big to do that.
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  • From keraizaki on May 10, 2008
    This story is GERAT!! I can't wait to see what will happen next! Though I would like to know more about the kids, like the looks and ages!! please E-mail me this info at keraizaki@yahoo.com!! Please and thankyou!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =]
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2008
    You're working me to tears here! Ahh, somehow I can see myself needing more tissues in future chapters. Something that flittered through my mind as this chapter was drawing to a close was the disaster this coming out is going to cause; Rukia is well liked and so on and so forth. But Ichigo isn't exactly low on loyal friends either and I feel a clash between those loyalties coming on.

    I can't wait to see how it plays out! I'm already anxious for more chapters! ^^;
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on May 08, 2008
    *sniffle* So sad for Ichigo. ;__; He loves her so much, yet... TT__TT

    *grabs a tissue* I look forward to the next update.
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  • From Yakumo on May 08, 2008
    Sorry I haven't gotten the chance to review this story yet. ;^_^ It's really great, just like all of your work. Poor Ichigo though...he's too sweet to be hit...T__T Anyway, on a (sort of) related note I don't like Rukia all that much. >.> Anyway, good work.
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  • From Shiro813Flowergurl on May 08, 2008
    "As my beta and I say, if Ichigo isn't gay then he's really, really repressed. lol"

    *Giggling* Nice comment! XD

    Great chapter, plenty of action...I enjoyed the phyisical conflict in Rukia...how her Spritual Presseure is under control yet she unleashes fury upon Ichigo!
    and It seems that the whole of Seretei will be buzzing with this news...makes you wonder how Inoue and Renji will take this Especially Renji!

    Since you chose to write how Ichigo and Rukia's relationship will be, I was wondering, would you give the same plot as if it was Renji and Rukia?
    also do you find that Rukia finds it easy to abuse Ichigo because she can get away with it with him and not anyone else?

    All in all, I got no complaints about this chapter....(Though, I sorta wished you chose Shuuhei for Ukitake instead....But let me squezee that thought into ball and kick it out....)
    I'm anxious to see the next chapter come out!
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  • From ANON - Ranna on May 07, 2008
    For such a perceptive guy, Ukitake can be a little slow sometimes. Not that I blame him, I wouldn't have thought about it either.
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