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By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2008
    Despite all mentions of tissue boxes I didn't think I was going to cry, but when Rukia started packing I was definitely sniffling. You did a wonderful job of conveying a sense of hopelessness. For that moment I desperately wanted them to work things out and knowing it wasn't possible broke my heart.

    I'm enjoying this story so much. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Shiro813Flowergurl on May 28, 2008
    I didn't get to review the last chapter..(I really couldn't think of anything really....)

    Jeezus Renji! WTF you came up with those questions?! you think he knows Rukia enough to actually pose the Question. And Ichigo playing the wearing parent struggling to keep the family together...by anycase a breakdown for either Ichigo and/or Rukia for the future?

    Ichigo and Byakuya...they seem not to see the signals between each other. Their reactions to Rukia's accusation of there's something more than friendship between them is too humorous. I'm happy that you showed the aftermath on Rukia's part as well. Yes, she is definatly having as hard a time with this as Ichigo. Nay I say it, WAY HARDER...

    As always, looking forward to the next chapter. Later!~

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  • From keraizaki on May 27, 2008
    Wow, man! That was AWSOME!! I almost cried!! LOVE ya story!! WRITE MORE SOON!! =]
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on May 27, 2008
    I think we all know that, while Renji means well, he's not the most eloqent or tactful being. I forgive him. ^w^

    *sniffle* I liked that chapter though. It's nice to read good fics on my birthday. ^w^
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 27, 2008
    ok short review this time what with it being nearly 3am and me really needing to get some sleep. This chapter was brill (as always but I thought I'd mention it anyway) and I don't hate Renji, he's just voicing the concerns that others haven't been able to. I love Renji, he may not be eloquent but he's blunt and sometimes that's better than trying to word something well but missing the point entirely.
    “It's always the good looking ones.” That waitress is so right, and it's gonna be fun when these two realise it. I bet they both know deep down but they just can't figure it out yet. That is so like men, they are kinda clueless when it comes to love.
    I like drunk Ichigo, most stories don't let him let his hair down but every now and then you need time to break and drinking helps with that.
    Ok, I don't know what happened to the short review but never mind, who needs sleep right. I can sleep when I'm dead XD
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    Baroqueangel
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  • From Yakumo on May 27, 2008
    Wow. This chapter was simply the best yet. THE DRAMA! D: I love Renji too. ^_^ -hugs her Renji plushie-
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  • From remyjames on May 27, 2008
    You know, Renji brings up an interesting point. Are we sure she doesn't hit the kids? I mean, he was right that Ichigo isn't home all the time so how would we know. Also, I understand that you can't just kill her. It would totally ruin what you are trying to accomplish. I would like to know though why she thinks Ichigo and Byakuya are hooking up behind her back. I had thought for a while (from the beginning actually) that she was seeing someone else. Last question, promise. Will she ever confront her brother? That's all. Still loving the story and looking forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Ranna on May 27, 2008
    You know how everyone says "I read it for the plot," then laughs because it is the exact opposite? I truly read this for the plot. I so want to know what comes next that whenever I see this story has updated I just go straight to it.
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  • From remyjames on May 24, 2008
    Are you sure you don't want to...accidentally...kill her? I'm almost in tears here. Will they ever find out that their son was the one who told Byakuya?
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  • From YamiBakura on May 24, 2008
    Chapter 5

    I have the front page of the Bleach section bookmarked, and I haven't been back in a few days, so I randomly wandered over and was skimming through the list, looking for something to read, and then realized this had been updated and was like, 'HURRAY!' It seemed like something of a filler-chapter, but it was good for all that anyway.
    I'm excited to see what happens in the next chapter as well, especially with Byakuya having spirited Ichigo away.

    I always like it when people tell me specifically what they liked about my fanfics, so I'm going to try and do the same, as often as possible. In this chapter, I absolutely adored, "Kuchiki glacier". I don't know why. XD
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  • From keraizaki on May 23, 2008
    Whoop!! I love this story!! WRITE MORE SOON!! (Please!?!)
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 23, 2008
    Even amid the sad thoughts and turbulent emotions this story brings up you still make me laugh. I love the way you described Byakuya as a glacier, that was a good metaphor for him.
    But it was Orihime who had me in fits. “I just don't understand. Maybe she's been abducted by aliens, and they replaced her body with a zombie pod-person. Have you noticed any weird marks?” I read this line and had to stop reading for a minute until I could stop laughing. I know it's just what Orihime would say but how did you come up with it? It's gold I tell ya!
    I loved when she offered to lend Ichigo and Rukia her baby 'cos she and Renji can always make more, that was just priceless.
    I love Yamamoto, millenias of patience and he still can't break Ichigo, ah well...He should know that a family trait only gets stronger over the generations so Ichigo is probably 3 times as stubborn and patient as him.
    I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what Byakuya and Ichigo will say to each other, that should be an interesting conversation.
    Oh wow, I think this is my longest review yet but I just loved this chapter so much and wanted to comment on everything, well more or less. What did I miss...? Oh yeah, Yumi's protectiveness, even Yamamoto's reiatsu couldn't upset him, now that is one loyal fukitaichou.
    Ok, I'll stop now. Update soon please.
    Baroqueangel
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  • From ANON - alexandra z. on May 23, 2008
    really cool i'll be watching for a update ......(sad looking puppy dog eyes )i hope you update soon0.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on May 23, 2008
    I guess it's true what they say--if you want to keep a secret, don't tell anyone. Though for some reason, I'm thinking about a far more famous saying. "There is no coincidence, only necessity."
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  • From ANON - Feion_Phylar on May 22, 2008
    Well I didn't need my box of tissues for this chapter but I was close to it. I thought it wonderfully and so accurately written it felt real! For a moment, my brain convinced me this was just another episode on Bleach I was watching err...reading. I saw it all in my head man! GOOD STUFF!

    ^O^ Bottom line: Another wicked chappie; the character descriptions were right on the money.

    Favorite part:

    "But before he could escape for the day, he had been nearly frozen in his tracks by a curt and obviously annoyed Hitsugaya-taichou.

    “The Kurosaki's are fighting, sir,” he had said very abruptly. “Do something.”"
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