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By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - english muffin on June 12, 2008
    Another good chapter! I think Karin was being a total bitch when she was trying to get the story out of ichigo when the children were around. It made me not like her much. >.< I can't wait for the next part!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on June 11, 2008
    Yes, yes! Shattered Children's update was a wonderful birthday present. =3

    Oooooh~ Family tension! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! X3 *huggles*
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  • From Shiro813Flowergurl on June 11, 2008
    So....thirty five years....So its safe to say that Ichigo and Orihime are "Dead"? considering that both live in Seretei and do Isshin and Urahara look the same since they have Gigais?
    I can tell very easily that you are hung over Urahara and Aizen lol! X3
    Children and their parents shouldn't be playing favorites, but its funny that the Kids and Ichigo lean towards Jyuushirou than Isshin for Grandfather! (Isshin got saddled to the back?!?! *Sucks to be him...>>;)
    hmmmm, I'll be PM you with my Story request this morning...its not for a few chapters ad its pretty short but humourous! ^_____^
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  • From SarahTaylor on June 10, 2008
    Definately needs new babysitters!! XD
    Love the half chapter and can't wait for the next one, short review again 'cos I gotta get some sleep.
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  • From Yakumo on June 10, 2008
    Loved this chapter.
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  • From ANON - SaCyner on June 10, 2008
    how could karin do that? asking such painful things in front of the kids. i know she is probably protecting ichigo in her own way but hello, a bit more sensitivity in front of the kids especially she is an adult herself. great story by the ways, keeps me hooked and looking forward for the next update!!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on June 06, 2008
    Hooray for Zaraki! Byakuya needed that kick in the rear. *nods* Of course, Byakuya's denial, internally and verbally was hilarious. X3 lol XD He just couldn't keep up with Kenpachi. =3

    Myu? You're offering to write a fic, even though you're so busy, just because it was my birthday the last time you updated? O////O Uhm...does it have to be a whole different fic? Or can I request an update to Shattered Children? You have my email, if you want to talk about this privately. =3
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  • From YamiBakura on June 05, 2008
    Chapter 7

    There were a few parts of this that needed pointing out.
    "He loves her."
    “But he loves you more.”
    I squee'd. ♥

    Did anyone get the name of the Espada that had stomped up and down on his head?
    That one line had me in stitches I was laughing so hard XDD


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  • From ANON - english muffin on June 05, 2008
    Ah, I really liked this chapter! It's nice to see some movement toward byakuya and ichigo's relationship. You know it's good when I'm actually reading a story that has plot. ^^ It seems really sad to me that Rukia moved out, even though I like yaoi. D: I think I'm just worrying about the kids and Ichigo's well-being. I hope that Byakuya will make a good mommy. Please, keep it up! I really like where the story is going. And I love how the characters are in character, which authors sometimes lose when they try dramatic stories like these.
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  • From ANON - Ranna on June 05, 2008
    Hanatarou is so adorable. I love him.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on June 05, 2008
    This has been by far the best chapter yet.I am glad that Zaraki has planted the seed of awareness in Byak. Things will be more interesting now. The emotion in this chapter was dead on, and made it completely worth the wait. As always, you leave your readers craving more. I find myself checking for updates at least five times a day. Your story is highly addictive. I wish you luck on writing the next chapter and I hope you find the time to update again soon.

    And as always, thank you for sharing such a inspiring story.

    Your eager fan, rAiNwAtEr
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  • From Shiro813Flowergurl on June 05, 2008
    I'm imagining Ichigo wearing that Dark blue Yukata...looks nice! XD
    Anyways, a thumbs up for you with the Byakuya/Zakari converstation at the start! Despite their differences I bet their banter would've been funny to start with.
    Ichigo's begining to break in the seams, though he's still trying to find that stable ground, but judging by the sake-drinking...He honestly doesn't know what to save his marriage. I get the feeling that a small part of Ichi is aware of his attraction to Byakuya unlike the latter. Which makes it all the more sadder for him since he really can't make a decsion.

    Yeah it must be real terrible for Ukitake as he sees Shunsui drink himself to Oblivion...most people close to an Alcoholic would give up and leave, but no...not our Uki-chan! *Its one the things that make me love those two! X3*

    Anyways, i'll see you by the next chapter of one of your several works!

    P.S: By anycase I can post a request for Seireitei Monogatari here? or should I PM you?~
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  • From Yakumo on June 04, 2008
    AWW poor Ichigo...-hugs him tightly- I liked this chapter as well. ^_^ Nice job with it.
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  • From SarahTaylor on June 04, 2008
    Loved drunk Ichigo, and the convo between Byakuya and Zaraki was priceless. Byakuya can be really dense sometimes! XD Ok I've got to be up for work in 5 and a half hours so long review next chapter.
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  • From YamiBakura on May 28, 2008
    Chapter 6

    Like NOTHING, I'm completely in LOVE with this story. Especially after this last chapter. Ichigo really is breaking apart at the seams, and all I wanna do is hug him ;A; I just got up about twenty minutes ago, and and not really functional enough for a fantastic review, so I'll just let you know how much I loved this chapter and get some coffee. ♥
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