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Reviews for Never Fade Away

By : Rockyshores
  • From pontaloon on June 10, 2008
    loooove the first chapter, but before i go on, just thought you might want to know of a few mistakes:
    “publicly excepted fact that these” should be publicly accepted fact that these
    “his favorite punch bag that he hit” should be his favorite punching bag that he hit
    “ceiling pondering the Shinigami” should be ceiling pondering about the Shinigami
    “smaller portions with more flexibility” should be smaller portions and with more flexibility
    “He smiled at the thought, he loved that girl like a sister- and like family while he loved her, sometimes he just didn’t like her.” Should be He smiled at the thought. He loved that girl like a sister and (like family) while he loved her, sometimes he just didn’t like her.
    “around it blocking it from sight, appearing as just a part” should be around it, blocking it from sight and giving it the appearance of just another part

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  • From mimi22 on May 27, 2008
    Yaay! An update! :) And... a kiss? I'd have expected Ichigo to get angrier about Shiro's actions, but he sctually managed to tolerate him quite well and that's a bit strange... especially the kiss scene, I simply couldn't believe Ichigo didn't kick him in the nuts. :D I also expected some sort of angry response to Shiro's sex jokes.
    Overall a funny chapter, though Ichigo could have been livelier. Perhaps I have a distorted image of him in my head,'cause I always expect him to hit things when he's pissed (or at least verbally abuse them somehow :P).
    But nevermind my ranting, I'm really excited about the update! *hugs*
    >:) The threesome sounds... niiiiice! :P Strawberry sandwich, ah... *nosebleed*
    I'm more interested in the development, but simply can't resist smut when it's offered to me. So, D, hell yeah! :P

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  • From Emyrei on May 27, 2008
    No more action for shirosaki, please.
    Personally, I don't mind a bit of ichigo/hichigo....but damn it, I want KenIchi now.
    So....I vote A. Because flirting is acceptable.

    Love the story, by the way.
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  • From Gnat on May 27, 2008
    Honestly, I wouldn't mind ShiroIchi and KenIchi, it's all up to you. AB, something between those two. Afterall, Shirosaki is a little different with his view of romance...

    I was excited to see a new chapter! :) Please keep writing!
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 26, 2008
    Yay new chapter and don't worry about how long it takes to update, life is supposed to get in the way.
    I still vote for just the flirting, at least I think that's what I voted for last time. I love Yachiru, she's just so adorable.
    I look forward to the next update.
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  • From koloruki on May 10, 2008
    I don't like the idea of Shirosaki being interested in Ichigo romantically unless the both are the main characters in the story. But seeing that the story is the romance between Kenpachi and Ichigo, I would like that Shirosaki is just flirting with Ichigo
    Your story is very good. I am a fan of KenIchi pairing and would like for this to continue.
    Thank you for writing the story. Heheheheheh!
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  • From Yurameki on May 05, 2008
    just found this. good work, keep it up. ill definitley be checking for updates ~-^
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  • From Madhater on May 03, 2008
    You know i wasn't sure about this story at first...well the pairing anyways. but you know I'm liking it, really liking it. oh and i'd say do B) Yes, but trying to push Ichigo into sex. i feel this will make Ken act on his feelings or just be possessive, either way the stories awesome! ^_^
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  • From mimi22 on May 03, 2008
    B, because it really spicies things up :D. I really couldn't see that coming...but it's a nice turn of events.

    If you have something in mind just go for it. I like the story so far. :P
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  • From mimi22 on May 03, 2008
    I love your fic! God, the way Kenpachi taunts Ichigo is just hilarious. I haven't reached the last chapter yet (but I will soon :P), still I just had to praise you after reading the 3rd one (and the begining of the 4th, which just made me laugh my ass out). Keep them coming. Your fic definitely needs more love.

    PS: You're right about younger Kenpachi being absolutely HOT, I remember drooling all over the place when I saw him in the manga. Argh, the fangirl inside me got a clinical nosebleed while imagining him in the biker outfit.
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  • From Ginkawa on May 03, 2008
    B!!! Ichi is too naive and Ken-chan is too... Ken-chan. They need a good push in form of Hichigo to start to get together, and a good obstacle in the form of Hichigo as well to make it interesting XD
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 02, 2008
    B) Yes, it wouldn't be any fun if Ken-chan didn't have to fight for him :)
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  • From Gnat on May 02, 2008
    ...B! Or A. I like that you stuck in Hichigo-- it kind of throws everything for a loop and makes it not so easy for Ichigo and Kenpachi to end up together. A little competition and a little discomfort never hurt anybody. Your story makes -me- feel warm and fuzzy. :) Keeeeep writing!
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  • From MarsInsane on May 02, 2008
    I like it! Not that many KenXIchi stories out there. And when I read the last chapter out I was like 'Where's the next one?' >.< So I can't wait for the next one.
    And I choose option A for Hichigo. Maybe blur A and B together but I like option A.

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  • From SarahTaylor on April 30, 2008
    I like this story, I like how you've done the characters. Please update soon.
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