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Reviews for Daring to Breathe

By : Crya2Evans
  • From blackfeenix on April 16, 2008
    I loved the last bit. Good finish. Heh. I could imagine Shuuhei's panicking about the kiss so easily. So amusing. Yay! Finally the last one!...and you know, smut involving these two will always be welcome. -grin-
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  • From Yakumo on April 16, 2008
    OMG PLEASE DO A SMUTTY ADD-ON! xD I want MOAR Kenpachi/Shuuhei. xD Good job on this story by the way.
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  • From ANON - The Dragon on April 16, 2008
    Smutty add-on! For the love of god, SMUTTY ADD-ON!!!! XD
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  • From ANON - Eternal Requiem on April 07, 2008
    Please update soon!!

    Now that that's out of the way...I love your characterization in this. Everyone seems so perfect. Your portrayal of Kenpachi is one of the best I've read, and your Shuuhei is incredible. You've taken two characters who are rather passed over in both the manga and anime and really fleshed them out.
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  • From ANON - nekozama on March 30, 2008
    Okay, here I was, planning to sift through the bleach section after a considerable absence, just to see if anything worthwhile had appeared when I saw this story. I stopped and thought, 'that's a strange pairing...', and I have to admit I was rather skeptical, but decided to check it out anyways, and I didn't regret it.

    This is a wonderful piece of writing! Your way of writing those two is really exceptional, and the interaction between them feels very real. (I also love your take on the eleventh). The way you write Zaraki is refreshing, and I like the way you describe his relationship with others, especially Yachiru. It was so adorable and funny, and that is something that doesn't always work with a character like Kenpachi, but it defintely did here. Hisagi's introspection is also so much fun to read, and seeing his character grow, following him as he drops Tousen's teachings, one by one, and starting to form his own opinions about things is very interesting. I just adored the small scene when he got the "insane urge to kick the door in" :) .

    Anyways, I'm really looking forward to seeing the rest of this, and I hope you will deliver the fourth (and final, right?) installation soon. I am very curious to see how you will actually get these two to start a relationship, and how it will work out. After all, Zaraki is a difficult character to work with in these situations... in my opinion anyway...

    Much love...
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  • From ANON - german_nemesis on March 28, 2008
    I'm so happy! Another chapter, yeah and I just love the kind of easy friendship, you are describing in your story between Shuuhei and Zaraki. It's truly amazing, because I really think you managed to keep Kenpachi in character the whole time. Not an easy job. Looking forward to the rest:)
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  • From Kuromei on March 28, 2008
    Zaraki, meditating... *snicker* X3

    Still loving the fic! Keep them chappies coming! XD
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  • From ANON - ^^ on March 27, 2008
    Fine I'll beg but only for the sake of an update!!! This story just gets more and more interesting every chapter! I can't wait for your next update! So please please *puppy eyes* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From blackfeenix on March 27, 2008
    Isn't it often that our favourite characters are the more neglected ones? -sigh-
    I love the mix of angst and humour in this. Most notably 'why a badass like kenpachi would wear bells' and Shuuhei's knitting abilities.
    I find it fascinating to see Shuuhei learning to think for himself again. It strikes a chord because i often don't think about things until confronted with a problem.
    I can't wait to see Kenpachi trying to meditate. That would be most amusing.
    Please don't take too long writing the next part, if only for my sanity! I want to read more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anise on March 26, 2008
    You definitely have readers waiting for the next chapter I'm one of them, you can use this review to feed your muse I heard they can be ravenous little things :)
    It's an interesting idea that Tousen would be against even sparring, you would think that would be such an integral part of shinigami life but with the way you've portrayed Tousen it makes sense, although it's nice to see Hisagi developing his strength in all aspects mental and physical. I really look forward to the next part ^_^

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  • From Yakumo on March 26, 2008
    Yay! An update. ^_^ So far, I like the direction this piece is going. The dialogue flows very well and I like your detail. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Afrieal on March 26, 2008
    just out of curiosity are you doing these as oneshots on FF.net? if so for some reason they're better here *grin* pro'lly cuz it's easier to read black on grey than white *grin* keep up the great work

    Affie and Rysh
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  • From ANON - Enslavement_Thesis on March 25, 2008
    ..Can't be bothered logging in, but still wanted to review.

    This is an interesting story. Original.
    Well written.

    Eagerly awaiting the update.
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  • From blackfeenix on March 25, 2008
    I think that the writing and the premise of this story/stories is just absolutely brilliant. Both Shuuhei and Kenpachi are pretty neglected characters in fanfiction, and in the series itself. (except for the recently in the manga. yay! Kenpachi fights!) I loveit how you really get into Shuuhei's head and understand his thinking and what he's going through. And I'm with you. Kenpachi is so a smart bastard underneath the awesome craziness.
    And now, just because I loved this so much, I'm going over to FF.net to read the other one! Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - ^^ on March 23, 2008
    yay im glad u updated! i hope you add another chapt.! don't make me beg!
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