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Reviews for Daring to Breathe

By : Crya2Evans
  • From DarknessImmortal on June 19, 2008
    Loved it!!! And I love the paring, too. NEVER would have thought of it, but yet again, as always, you make it work so wonderfully, one wonders how they could have missed it! Great job! It's too bad you're done, I would really like to see more of it, but maybe in another fic, perhaps? ;) Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - ^^ on June 19, 2008
    yay you added the smut and such wonderfully written smut! lol "pink ball of energy" that will forever make me laugh! so glad u finished the fic.
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  • From Emyrei on June 18, 2008
    whoop-ti-whoop! Porn for the rare pairings. Awesomness.
    I liked it. It was very well written. Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Anise on June 18, 2008
    Those two guys together are just all kinds of hotness and I absolutely adore Yachiru, she's too cute and funny for words! Fabulous story, I loved reading it ^_^
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  • From Anestshia on June 17, 2008
    That was a cool story, Kenpachi definitely does not get enough love and i think it was hilarious how you made Shuuhei mommy, great job!
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  • From Yakumo on June 17, 2008
    Kenpachi/Shuuhei smut FTW! xD Thanks for adding that awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on June 17, 2008
    Whoooo~! I loved it! XDDD I think you kept them perfectly in character. ^w^ *nods* I'd say more, but I gotta go. XP

    Hugs for you! ^.^ *huggles*
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  • From ANON - HumanInfiltrator on April 23, 2008
    That was sooo much fun! Thank you!

    Smut, please. You have to give us smut.
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on April 21, 2008
    Lol I found this after just commenting in the drabble fics that there should be more crack pairing fics. :p This definitely has to be one of the weirdest pairings, but in a good way. And, um *mutters* I vote for the smutty add on, if you get inspired to write it. ^^ Love these characters too, there should definitely be more fics with them. I mean, Shuuhei's hot! And Kenpachi's not bad himself, in that badass kind of way. I do prefer him without the spikes and bells though, I have to say. :/ How you wrote the 11th Division was great, and I really want to see more of this pairing now. :p
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  • From maidenhair on April 18, 2008
    I've already reviewed this story/chapter at fanfiction.net (I use the penname of rinda there...sorry for any confustion). But I really wanted to speak up again because this is truly a compelling work. Again, not a yaoi fan but I am a huge Zaraki fan. And you've really captured both characters so well. Your writing's very insightful. You're one of my favorite authors and this work is a good example of why.
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  • From ANON - nekozama on April 17, 2008
    Wow, what a wonderful thing to come home to after a difficult day at work. I was so happy to see that this story had been updated, and what a great chapter. It had me laughing nearly all the way through. Hisagi's viewpoint of this entire situation is just so hilarious, and the complete mental collapse he had after that kiss practically had me rolling. The scene with Ayasegawa was pure gold as well, and Zaraki's annoyance was just so... Zaraki. Thank you, I needed this.

    You did a great job with this story. I love it to bits. And I'm glad my other review made you happy, and you're quite welcome, you deserved every bit of praise. :)
    (and I wouldn't say no to the add-on ^^ if you find it in you)
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on April 17, 2008
    Dammit! That's supposed to be "smutty" add-on up there. >( Sorry, Draco-san. XP
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on April 17, 2008
    OMFG I can hear it now. XD "Mommy! Mommy! XD" rofl Yumichika is never going to leave them alone, now. X3 And that's saying something. lol XD

    I'd like a mutty add-on, please! =D PleasePleasePlease puh-leeeeeze??? *puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Anise on April 17, 2008
    This was really wonderful I never thought I would actually like a pairing like this but I really enjoyed reading it. I think it was the way that you wrote both of them that made it so fun to read, Hisaga's reaction after kissing Zaraki was priceless, you'd have thought it was him that had just gotten kissed out of the blue :)
    This was a lot of fun and I'm definitely going to keep an eye out on the chance that you write a follow-up because smutty add-ons are always the best! ^_^
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  • From ANON - ^^ on April 17, 2008
    Oh you have no idea how happy i was to see this story updated, then sad that it was the last chapter *sniff sniff*
    You had me giggling shame on you, i loved the ending... Shuuhei mommy yum.
    And now i will resort to begging, again, lol.
    Please please please give pretty smut add-on...
    wow this has to be the longest review i have ever given.
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